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Gary and Sue make too much Stew

Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one or the other.

What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A.    has too much power or skill
B.    All the answers
C.    Always gets their way
D.    Never loses
E.    And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F.    Is TOO attractive
G.    No weakness
Problems?

Each of these has something that can but not necessarily makes the characters stues.

A.     POWERS?
When a character has a huge amount whatever types of powers, they can seem annoying and obnoxious. When Rping, if the characters have a power for everything, it is extremely unfair. If one character captures another in something made of fire, then all of the sudden the character has water powers and destroys it, or also has fogo powers, it ruins the RP.
If the character just has the power of water in the first place, that does not make them a stu, even if they are hiding it. They can have tons of POWER but they shouldn’t have tons of POWERS. It’s generally okay to have infinite amount of chaos energy, but when someone has also light, darkness, time, space, ect. It goes too far.
B.    All the answers
This doesn’t happen all the time mainly, but there are times when for some reason the character knows everything about the other character, but never says why. And why is that? Because the people that are rping that character don’t have an answer and just want their character to look cool.
Having psychic powers to do something like that is alright. It can be annoying, but it’s not a bad thing.
Another way to “have all the answers” is in the following example.
Example: One character gets injured with a special “demon” poison, then no one but their own other character can heal it. If the other people’s characters try it doesn’t work, and usually some voice says something like “ha ha ha. Failures.” Which really bugs me. The characters are there for a reason. LET THEM HELP!
C.    Gets their way.
Now I don’t see this all too often in heroes, and only sometimes with girl characters, but with VILLAINS, it, is, so, annoying!
Most of the time this type of thing happens is when out of the blue a aleatório villain appears, acts SUPER VAGUE, then tries to kidnap another character. Here’s what’s wrong with what happens next.
1.    THE CHARACTERS ARE NEVER ABLE TO STOP THE VILLAIN!
2.    THE VILLAIN ACTS SO VAGUE STILL!
3.    THE CHARACTER GETTING TAKEN USUALLY SAYS SOMETHING LIKE “I have no choice.” Or “I have to. It is my destiny”. There are times when that’s happened and I just make my character say “Well then good for you *blasts kidnapped character* I hated you anyway”. Again, LET THE CHARACTERS HELP!!!!
D.    NEVER LOSING!
Either Villain or hero, Stus never lose. Especially with attacks. Things like *Shoots energy beam at you* are okay, but I see a lot of *kills you with energy beam* or *slices off your head and it doesn’t come back* or *beats up your character* and even *your character is impressed* and other ways where they try to control your character. IT’S NOT FUN! You do that, and people are going to hate you so much. What if the character would get stronger from that energy beam? Nope, can’t happen. “I already said it killed you. You can’t say it made you stronger”. People control how their characters react and if they get hit. Let them decide. Unless you are close enough to go *drills faca into stomach* then you can’t just say *throws faca into your stomach from a mile away* SO REALISTIC -_-
E.    There’s been Dilver, there’s been Bluckles, There’s been Blonic. I wish THOSE were the characters we had. At least they’re actually funny. But no. We get people like Silver #2, who has Shadow’s powers too, but looks JUST like Silver. WHAT A TWIST! Now I’m not hating on Clones of characters. If you’re cloning Sonic, or even doing a Silver #2 deal, it’s not BAD exactly, but it isn’t original. There are some characters that can pull it off like Starlight, but usually it doesn’t end well. If they have the same powers, then don’t make them LOOK like Silver or Shadow or Sonic. Just because you’re fast doesn’t mean the character has to be called “Sonica” or “Sonia”.
F.    I personally amor to make attractive characters. And making beautiful girl characters, or hot-dudes isn’t a bad thing when it’s a picture, but when rping it gets annoying when they say *You character blushes*. I personally have in my THIEF RP done something LIKE that.
“If your character is a guy, this would mainly be surprising, seeing how Kenfi is actually quite pretty, and rather non-thief-looking.” Notice I didn’t put “Your character blushes”. I could have, and in this case it wouldn’t be SO bad, but it’s still annoying. The point of this line I used was to emphasize that the surprise of someone finding out that the person trying to kill them turns out to be this beautiful aleatório girl. I know what you might say. “But you said that she’s beautiful. Some people might think she isn’t.” And you could say that, but I have actually been told that Kenfi is VERY attractive-looking por people, which helped me wager what I would do with this. So in short, you can make their eyes sparkle, you can make their hair shine, you can make their muscles huge, but let the people your rping with decide if they want to blush or not.
G.    Characters without weakness
Oh, My, Flagnob. Characters without weaknesses. Picture your character is trying to run away from an evil character. The evil character stu-ports your character to them, so your character tries to attack, but no matter what you use the STU just goes “HA HA HA! Pathetic! That can’t hurt me! I’m immortal”, which is really annoying. Also people go “*head grows back*” and such, then says “I’m immortal”. Here’s something you might want to know. IF YOU’RE IMMORTAL YOU SHOULDN’T BE ABLE TO GET HURT IN THE FIRST PLACE! I hate immortal characters. I have characters that are like that where they can’t be physically harmed, but even then you can make a weakness.
Example: Dimension 4 is a mobian core, so he cannot be physically harmed. He CAN however be drowned, or die in o espaço to an extent because he still needs air. Make your characters have a weakness that isn’t just some aleatório song only one character knows about and only one character can use (No offense, Sara).

Now there’s one last thing I’d like to mention here. Demon characters. I know I’ve said it before, but SERIOUSLY guys, WHY SO MANY OF THEM!?!?
1.    Demons are evil! THEY AREN’T GOOD! THEY CAN’T TURN GOOD! THEY’RE anjos TURNED TO THE DEVIL FOR PETE’S SAKE! STOP MAKING THEM GOOD-GUYS UNLESS THEY STOP BEING DEMONS!
2.    THERE ARE SO MANY! Now even if I wasn’t upset about demons in general, it would still annoy me that people use so many of them. We’ve got Demon-hybrids, demon-based-species, demon-demons, demon-forms, DEMON SONIC WAS A FAN-BASED SUPER FORM! IT’S NOT REAL! Is that what started all this? Because if it did, that just fits. Use other things. I almost NEVER… I’VE NEVER SEEN AN angel CHARACTER YET! WHY DO WE HATE PURITY ALL OF THE SUDDEN!?

So that’s my list of stuness. I know a lot of people are going to hate on this and disagree, but I think you can at least agree with some of it.

In short, just try to think of things that would make the rping fun, not ways to make your characters cool. Make weak characters once in a while. It’s really fun to be honest. I’ve got normal mobian characters that have NO powers whatsoever, and no special skills, and they have SUPER large rolls in my fan-fics.

Eat Pie and Prosper
posted by SilverSamurai9
Your part of the Glop Squad and your squad is sent on a mission to the SHOOP galaxy but before you leave a new guy appeared to aid u in the mission his/her name is Karo so now the team has Gamma and Zakk and together they will go on intergalactic quests far and wide they'll even do stupid tasks like mowing the lawn or walk your dog so any way they'll do anything for you.But anyway the glop squad was cruising around the galaxy and Gamma sees that a unknown planet is in the way but before Zakk could steer clear of it the gravitational force pulled them in and they crashed on the mysterious planet
...I'll tell you right now, I've had a dangerous life up to this point, but I've managed to survive without powers, thanks to my friends, enemies, and pure luck. Sure, being a cruz between a Cat and an Echidna, AND being a Bisexual, things can get a bit strange...but I've made it through, and now you get to hear all about it. But we're not starting as late as you'd think...we're starting all the way back to when I was first born...back in Mystic Cave Zone...
All I know is this: When my mom, an Echidna at about 25, went into labor, my father, the fearless, 26 ano old lion, put her on his...
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Treading up the colina was a wagon,A ground of villagers where pulling it up the hill,thinking bubba was still alive.The wagon had many gems,jewels,and crystals on it.Knowing that this could possibly be an issue,MTL quickly pushed Loch into a bush,hiding from the wagon.The villagers made it to the smoldering remains of bubba's fort,They stop and paused for a second...one said "I-it's gone?" another said "Bubba is gone!?" both villagers cheered for joy and rushed back to tell the mayor the good news.MTL and Loch climb out of the bush,MTL said "We are off the hook.your welcome." Loch said "You...
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posted by TakTheFox
This is basically just to let people know which of my characters has a companion/boyfriend/girlfriend/lover/whatever, which ones WILL have one, and which ones won’t. Hopefully this will help people to know when NOT to hit on a character of mine (Which DOES happen a lot, but I think it’s mais their just desperate for a couple, NOT that they actually really like the character.) This kind of goes back to the “Don’t hit on every character you see” thing, but I’m not going to go much into that.

(Note: I’m not listing any Lizzy Eventide or Seven Server characters mainly because I almost...
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Hey,It is I,Mapware3640(Please call me Matt) and today we are yet again talking about the MTL series.so...what's different this time around you may ask?Well I am here to answer your questions:

(Q=Question/A=Answer)

-Q:WHOA!WHOA!WHOA!what is with the darker atmosphere here?I mean the original MTL series MTL was created in a floating o espaço base,but in this he's created in a dome por near dead survivors...WHERE IS THE HUMOR!?
-A:Easy there,The MTL reboot is giving the MTL series a mais of an epic story.Yeah,there will be a lot of dark and twisted moments here and there,but there will be comical relief...
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posted by mephiles97
Chapter 5: Small-scale training
Location: Waktini family resisdence, Northern District, Freedom City
Date: Saturday, January 3rd
Time: 12:15 P.M.

Kyle slowly awoke to the sound of the living room TV booming from downstairs. He slowly rolled over, releasing a small groan. His sister must be playing video games with the volume almost as loud as it could be. Kyle sighed quietly, turning his head to look at the small digital clock on his nearby dresser, seeing that it was 12:15 P.M. He slowly sat up painfully, pain stinging his sides as he got up. He gently put his hands on his sides, which had thick...
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I was born.
I loved Mommy.
Mommy didn't amor me.
She let mean people take me away.
Bad Mommy.
I hate the mean people.
They tried to take my horns.
They tried to take my tail.
It hurt.
They made me mad.
I grabbed a sharp thingie.
Mean people fell asleep.
Red paint spilt all over.
I went back home.
I saw Mommy.
I was happy.
I hugged her.
Mommy screamed and pushed me.
Bad Mommy.
She waved an umbrella at me.
Mommy was being a bully.
Mommy needed to fall asleep too.
I found another sharp thingie.
I threw it.
Sharp thingie landed in Mommy's eye.
Mommy fell asleep.
Good bye Mommy.
Name: Ari ‘Tice (ar’ ee tice)
Known Name: Defect
Age: 22
Species: Echidna


Story
Ari’ Tice was part of a Dark Legion chapter starting at age 15, and ending at age 19. Being part of this organization meant she was legionized, a cyborg almost; Fused with artificial life, and metallic/cybernetic life. And like all Legionnaires she had a computer chip in her brain that could explode at any segundo if she did not obey her superior’s orders.

Once on a mission of searching for the fonte of a strange energy signal, Ari and her team came too close to the energy’s emitter, and were thought to had...
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posted by ShadowWolf337
DRAMA! IT NEEDS TO STOP!
Listen this club is mean't for its members to have fun interacting with one another's fã characters. when i joined i wanted to escape the drama of life to feel happy in this corrupted wourld we all live in. when i left for a couple of months i left hoping that everything to stay the same, but when i got back everyone left and the everyday drama of life seeped into the club. I didn't think i would have to rant about drama in a Sonic Club but it seems that i have to and i think that the club's creator would not be happy about the drama to. So please stop the drama not later but NOW!
posted by gigitygoo
(Hopefully you have read the intro to my story if you havent you will get lost)

Location Londres UK
Time 06:15 AM

JT * wakening up due to the sound of his house phone going off JT picks it up and awnsers it * ugh...hello

Male voice JT we have our job we are leaving in the afternoon

JT oh right i almost forgot oi Dom where are we going

Dom Mexico City

JT whats the pay

Dom $250,000 if the misson is a success we will meet up with a contact who will give us the address of the deal

JT okay you get Ghost and we will meet at base in the airport in the afternoon

Dom okay *hangs up*

JT ugh im not a morning...
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posted by ShadowWolf337
i made blood a little weaker por removing some of his powers
the powers i left:
1.) Electricity
2.)Telekinisis
3.)mind control
4.) Berzerk form

Blood will remain a vampire that can be in the sunlight. and no he doesn't sparkle he just can't use his "vampire skills" in sunlight.
but i added mais weaknesses to Blood.
1.) Blood has a weakspot in his chest which a well placed strike can smash his ribs
2.) since Blood is a Vampire, if his jaw is broken he can't feed and he will die
3.)when Blood uses Mind control he is left vulnerable.
4.)all though Blood can use electricity Blood is weak to electric attacks against him.
5.)When Blood's Berzerk form wears off he can't use ANY powers for a while so he is left open to any attack.
posted by TakTheFox
Welcome to “Sonic fã Fighters” where I take characters with interesting powers, fighting styles, motivations, backstories, etc. and basically talk about em all. It’s not really a review, but mais of an info-article so you can get to know mais about the characters.
For now I’m just doing my own, but I’m hoping to get requests for other characters that I don’t own in the future.

Number 1

Rynk Hellborn

So what do you think of when someone has their last name be “Hellborn”? Just wondering. What do you pitcture?

Well what do you picture when you think of Rynk?
In Rynk’s first appearance...
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So seeing how Rynk is one of my popular characters, if not THE most popular, I thought I’d give a bit of insight into her past. Now if you’ve rped long enough with me, or read the Rynk mini-series, you probably know about her origin, but for those who don’t, here’s Rynk’s story from the beginning of her birth till the segundo ano at Mobius Academy.

Part one: Birth
Rynk was a hybrid child of a male Feral Acid-monster, and a female Daricha Banshee, two VERY deadly types of Hellborn. This was around twenty or so years after the events of the Refine (A genocide against all Hellborn), and...
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posted by Mapware3640
Now I recently introduced my own character set known as "Exie",what is exie to be exact?Well allow me to answer those.

Q:Are they related to mobians?
A:Nope,they are there own independent race

Q:What do they look like?
A:Well I'm working on concept art,but they are being made of energy,The usually wear long robes(Female exie) or heavy armor(male exie) and they all wear masks.

Q:What is exie energy?
A:A Rare energy that can not be found anywhere on mobuis...Take the "hyper-go-on" energy from sonic as cores for example,its a similar concept,if a non-exie being touches the energy,they become corrupted....
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I wrote the título thingy in Japanese because...I wanted to XD

Anyways...

I won't be on fanpop for quite a while, sadly. I've been very busy lately and I don't have the time for it. Nor do I have the time for Shock's club...much. I've been busy helping my family with moving and soon, I'll be in a new home. And as of tomorrow, I won't have ANY time for this sight. I have to stay busy in order to get things moved to the new house. I'll try to be on sometimes but...don't expect me to have much time to talk or RP. I wont, sorry...

So tonight is the last u will hear from me for a while.

Later, dudes!
posted by lili11p
Name:Crescent Nickname:Cres, CC. Age:16 encontro, data of Birth:December 17, 1912. Backstory:Crescent was the daughter of Rose and Micheal the Hedgehog. When she was 1 ano old her parents disowned her. She is now the current daughter of Topaz and Ross the Fox. When Crescent was 15, she was told that her parents had given her up. Angry and upset, she ran out of the house. She was met up por Amy Rose who had comforted her. Crescent's only mission in life now is to find her parents. Personality:Upbeat, Bubbly, Always confident. Clothes: Old:Blue tank top, white skirt, white boots. New: Dark green tank top,...
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The Slender Dia das bruxas Special

So I have created a special Slender Rp for this Dia das bruxas season, and because it’s so special I had an idea. Why not make it a contest?

In the roleplay there will be special moments that must be fulfilled, and a fun ending most-likely. To the first person to complete the roleplay one-hundred-percent (and por that I mean in the least amount of time added up so that people that weren’t able to get on don’t get belittled) I have THREE prizes

One is a picture of one of your characters drawn in slender-version
Or
A free request

The segundo is getting to own a certain...
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posted by CyberEchidna
I was walking to the park one day
Then there was a faint figure I could see
I asked my friend if he saw it
But he said it must just be me.

I walked to the figure and said hello
But received silence as my reply
I asked if she could talk, she grabbed me por the
neck, forced me to the ground and said: Be silent or die.

I got somewhat scared, but then pushed her off
And brushed away the debris.
She looked me in the eye and
here's what she said to me.

"I am not a normal person,
I'm not supposed to be seen,
But you can see me, oddly enough
And there is one thing that can mean."

I asked her what that would be,
But...
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posted by TakTheFox
Why I draw like that

So I know I don’t really get that much feedback about why my art looks kind of stiff, (really stiff) but I thought I should explain why it’s not really improving in some ways.

Now I’m not saying I don’t have flaws that are my fault. I do, and I am trying to get better, but the main problem is my drawing program.

Serif Draw PlusX4 is what I use, and if you have the same problems, you’ll understand.

1.    HANDS!
I can draw hands. Granted it drives me up and down the earth’s core, but I can over time. Sadly though if I want to draw REALLY good hands...
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posted by darksilver
Miss me?... didn't think so... Anyway, while I was gone, I've been composição literária books. New characters, new places, all that good stuff. I thought, it wouldn't hurt to tell you guys about Boom, cause his back story has never been told.

Boom was born from Rythe and Xion. Rythe is a Hedge-Bat, and Xion is an Ecidna. Boom was born 4 years before his younger brother, Slash. Boom quickly learned how to use a gun, and por the time he was 10, could snipe a 6 inch in radius target in the center from a mile away. When he was 12, he got his first set of pistols. He dual-wielded them like a real pro. To this...
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