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Gary and Sue make too much Stew

Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one or the other.

What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A.    has too much power or skill
B.    All the answers
C.    Always gets their way
D.    Never loses
E.    And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F.    Is TOO attractive
G.    No weakness
Problems?

Each of these has something that can but not necessarily makes the characters stues.

A.     POWERS?
When a character has a huge amount whatever types of powers, they can seem annoying and obnoxious. When Rping, if the characters have a power for everything, it is extremely unfair. If one character captures another in something made of fire, then all of the sudden the character has water powers and destroys it, or also has fogo powers, it ruins the RP.
If the character just has the power of water in the first place, that does not make them a stu, even if they are hiding it. They can have tons of POWER but they shouldn’t have tons of POWERS. It’s generally okay to have infinite amount of chaos energy, but when someone has also light, darkness, time, space, ect. It goes too far.
B.    All the answers
This doesn’t happen all the time mainly, but there are times when for some reason the character knows everything about the other character, but never says why. And why is that? Because the people that are rping that character don’t have an answer and just want their character to look cool.
Having psychic powers to do something like that is alright. It can be annoying, but it’s not a bad thing.
Another way to “have all the answers” is in the following example.
Example: One character gets injured with a special “demon” poison, then no one but their own other character can heal it. If the other people’s characters try it doesn’t work, and usually some voice says something like “ha ha ha. Failures.” Which really bugs me. The characters are there for a reason. LET THEM HELP!
C.    Gets their way.
Now I don’t see this all too often in heroes, and only sometimes with girl characters, but with VILLAINS, it, is, so, annoying!
Most of the time this type of thing happens is when out of the blue a aleatório villain appears, acts SUPER VAGUE, then tries to kidnap another character. Here’s what’s wrong with what happens next.
1.    THE CHARACTERS ARE NEVER ABLE TO STOP THE VILLAIN!
2.    THE VILLAIN ACTS SO VAGUE STILL!
3.    THE CHARACTER GETTING TAKEN USUALLY SAYS SOMETHING LIKE “I have no choice.” Or “I have to. It is my destiny”. There are times when that’s happened and I just make my character say “Well then good for you *blasts kidnapped character* I hated you anyway”. Again, LET THE CHARACTERS HELP!!!!
D.    NEVER LOSING!
Either Villain or hero, Stus never lose. Especially with attacks. Things like *Shoots energy beam at you* are okay, but I see a lot of *kills you with energy beam* or *slices off your head and it doesn’t come back* or *beats up your character* and even *your character is impressed* and other ways where they try to control your character. IT’S NOT FUN! You do that, and people are going to hate you so much. What if the character would get stronger from that energy beam? Nope, can’t happen. “I already said it killed you. You can’t say it made you stronger”. People control how their characters react and if they get hit. Let them decide. Unless you are close enough to go *drills faca into stomach* then you can’t just say *throws faca into your stomach from a mile away* SO REALISTIC -_-
E.    There’s been Dilver, there’s been Bluckles, There’s been Blonic. I wish THOSE were the characters we had. At least they’re actually funny. But no. We get people like Silver #2, who has Shadow’s powers too, but looks JUST like Silver. WHAT A TWIST! Now I’m not hating on Clones of characters. If you’re cloning Sonic, or even doing a Silver #2 deal, it’s not BAD exactly, but it isn’t original. There are some characters that can pull it off like Starlight, but usually it doesn’t end well. If they have the same powers, then don’t make them LOOK like Silver or Shadow or Sonic. Just because you’re fast doesn’t mean the character has to be called “Sonica” or “Sonia”.
F.    I personally amor to make attractive characters. And making beautiful girl characters, or hot-dudes isn’t a bad thing when it’s a picture, but when rping it gets annoying when they say *You character blushes*. I personally have in my THIEF RP done something LIKE that.
“If your character is a guy, this would mainly be surprising, seeing how Kenfi is actually quite pretty, and rather non-thief-looking.” Notice I didn’t put “Your character blushes”. I could have, and in this case it wouldn’t be SO bad, but it’s still annoying. The point of this line I used was to emphasize that the surprise of someone finding out that the person trying to kill them turns out to be this beautiful aleatório girl. I know what you might say. “But you said that she’s beautiful. Some people might think she isn’t.” And you could say that, but I have actually been told that Kenfi is VERY attractive-looking por people, which helped me wager what I would do with this. So in short, you can make their eyes sparkle, you can make their hair shine, you can make their muscles huge, but let the people your rping with decide if they want to blush or not.
G.    Characters without weakness
Oh, My, Flagnob. Characters without weaknesses. Picture your character is trying to run away from an evil character. The evil character stu-ports your character to them, so your character tries to attack, but no matter what you use the STU just goes “HA HA HA! Pathetic! That can’t hurt me! I’m immortal”, which is really annoying. Also people go “*head grows back*” and such, then says “I’m immortal”. Here’s something you might want to know. IF YOU’RE IMMORTAL YOU SHOULDN’T BE ABLE TO GET HURT IN THE FIRST PLACE! I hate immortal characters. I have characters that are like that where they can’t be physically harmed, but even then you can make a weakness.
Example: Dimension 4 is a mobian core, so he cannot be physically harmed. He CAN however be drowned, or die in o espaço to an extent because he still needs air. Make your characters have a weakness that isn’t just some aleatório song only one character knows about and only one character can use (No offense, Sara).

Now there’s one last thing I’d like to mention here. Demon characters. I know I’ve said it before, but SERIOUSLY guys, WHY SO MANY OF THEM!?!?
1.    Demons are evil! THEY AREN’T GOOD! THEY CAN’T TURN GOOD! THEY’RE anjos TURNED TO THE DEVIL FOR PETE’S SAKE! STOP MAKING THEM GOOD-GUYS UNLESS THEY STOP BEING DEMONS!
2.    THERE ARE SO MANY! Now even if I wasn’t upset about demons in general, it would still annoy me that people use so many of them. We’ve got Demon-hybrids, demon-based-species, demon-demons, demon-forms, DEMON SONIC WAS A FAN-BASED SUPER FORM! IT’S NOT REAL! Is that what started all this? Because if it did, that just fits. Use other things. I almost NEVER… I’VE NEVER SEEN AN angel CHARACTER YET! WHY DO WE HATE PURITY ALL OF THE SUDDEN!?

So that’s my list of stuness. I know a lot of people are going to hate on this and disagree, but I think you can at least agree with some of it.

In short, just try to think of things that would make the rping fun, not ways to make your characters cool. Make weak characters once in a while. It’s really fun to be honest. I’ve got normal mobian characters that have NO powers whatsoever, and no special skills, and they have SUPER large rolls in my fan-fics.

Eat Pie and Prosper
This idea came basically out of me going through various roleplays that I had done, and thinking of ways they could have gone differently. I thought about if character’s origins were different, or if they made different choices, or fell in amor with different people. I got to the point even where I considered making a completely rebooted-second-non-cannon series of everything, where the characters would be edited and the plots changed.

It wasn’t going to be too different. Like how there would still be the Refine with Mobocan, Identities would be mais or less the same, but ideas like Rynk...
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posted by NoctusLynx
Sleeping on the floor of my antro, den was nothing new to me. I liked sleeping, being por myself. After all, I had nothing better to do, so what else was I going to do besides sleep? I’d made my antro, den thicker so that no light could enter, otherwise I wouldn’t be able to sleep, and the light would sting my eyes a bit.

“Can I come in?” Sanae asked at the entrance of my den, into the darkness of it that housed me.

“You don’t have to ask, Sanae,” I told her. Her politeness wasn’t getting on my nerves, but rather that she was doing thing she didn’t need to; unnecessary work.

“I… yes,...
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Note: I am typing with my phone, so sorry for any spelling errors.
"Why didn't you guys stop Nook from staring at the crystal? He's your friend, you should help him." Said Flare. "That's what we've been trying to do! The segundo he looked at it, he was in that little trance. Now we couldn't get him to look away for his life!" Growled Scar," Watch." Scar walked over to Nook and tried to pull him away from the crystal, but Nook just stood like a statue. Scar pushed him until he dug up dirt and still no sign oh movement from Nook. Scar then kicked Nook as hard as he could in the side. Still no movement...
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As soon as Kyle turned his head, Casey had already thrown the door open. Ira stood there a bit stunned, holding a large plastic bag with a warm Italian scent inside. “List-“



Ira walked passed Casey before the ticked girlfriend could continue and quickly sat the bag on the Dining Room Table. She then turned around and gave Kyle a large hug. “Hey.” She greeted. Kyle was a little stunned and dared not hug back, but was able to reply with “H-h-hi, Ira…”



“Who’s your friend?” Ira asked, turning to Casey.



“I’m his GIRLFRIEND…” Casey growled.



As soon as the sound echoed...
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So who’s Trisell Chronos?
FLASHBACKS AND SPOILERS OF DOOM!!!!

Back in A VERY LONG TIME atrás IN THE PAST SOMEWHERE, there was the Zonac Council, of which only one person survived, to later be known as The Hidden (this is not Trisell Chronos). But before they… disappeared, the Seven Servers were created.

~Mistrum Pyro
~Trixin Lighten
~Tearence Aguan
~Luner (yes that’s how I spell it) Herban
~Midnight Psych
~Revten Crystiline (who would later become Revten Tess)
~And Trisell Chronos

There were other servers who were meant to be brought through as well, but sadly the council was unable to do this before...
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posted by TakTheFox
Guardian Angel

“So much has happened. Such… terrible things. First Commander St. John… betrayed the Freedom Fighters, and helped Ixis Naugus take control, AS KING! How could everyone be so gullible? Did they forget all the terrible things that Naugus had done before? I haven’t. I just came back from seeing Commander D’coolette. He’s… very hurt. I only got a glimpse, because the nurse said that she didn’t want any mais people crashing their heads into his bed… which was kind of weird. The time-traveling hedgehog was here a little bit ago. Silver is what I think they called him....
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posted by snootygirl50701
 Gracie the hedgehog
Gracie the hedgehog
Grace the hedgehog
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Species: hedgehog/ under ground
Name: Grace Nokia Dash(or Gracie)
Genre: female
Things she loves to do: date,hack into things,dump boys hearts,gymnastics, and many more....
Things she hates: Shadow the hedgehog (when bossy or naggy), Silver the hedgehog ( she has a crush on him that's why and she thinks that he is her lost boyfriend : Spike), Her father ( most of all), and many more...
Details of past: she is the princess of an anjos da noite of evil with her father (king) as a evil bastard! She continuosly was beatened...
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posted by CosmoLuvsTails
Gwen Prower woke up one morning...hang on...when was she last awake?...5 years ago, as long as she remembered. She rubbed her eyes and it looked that she had been buried alive. She tried to bang against the wood of the coffin, but her arm went through it.

'...That's not supposed to happen!...' The raposa said to herself. She put her other arm through, and sat up. She got out and it was like she was swimming through the dirt to the surface of the grass. She breathed in the fresh air. It was so relaxing. A kid nearby saw her and ran away, screaming. Gwen chose to ignore her.

Gwen thought to herself....
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Cora has always had one hell of a set of ears.

Though it was rather obvious she'd have a good sense of hearing, being a chincilla. She always preferred using them for rather undesirable uses. Eavesdropping, her common hobby involving her large ears. They were always alert for something to drop in on, no matter what the topic was, as long as it caught her interest. Even when already in conversation with another, her brain seemed to able to multi-task. One half of her brain listening to the current conversation, the other half listening in on another. Only people who knew her well and were extremely...
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posted by Akiko_the_Cagon
The fall air was quickly turning into frost bitten, I had not long before my clan mates would start passing from diseases from the white season. The wind chill made it seem like -60 degrees, but I had to help. I just had to. My body ached to be sandwhiched between two deer furs and near an open fire. I heard a gun shot ring through the snow. Dragon hunters. I had to get back before they found me, or either way, somebody'd die.
Too late. A couple of dragon hunters armed with almost every gun, cruz bow and sword weapon imaginable. I tried flying off with my ice blue wings, but I failed, a hunter shot at my left wing with a midnight black cruz bow. I started to fall, but I started running as soon as I hit the snow, carrying a peixe between my fangs. How the clan leader would be so unpleased frightened me, but not as much as the hunters.
Ok ppl I'm going to Chang the whole story and put it on a another club called "Emily the hegcat and other fã charaters" ok. And also I need help on it so help me please! So just go to "Emily the hegcat and other fã charaters".
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Alright, this is just a gift to four people I like on fanpop. But I'm not telling who they are. You gotta geuss. LET DA GAMES BEGIN!

1. You were the first person who supported me on fanpop. We wee good friends, and your character was in a lot of my stories. Unfortunately, you left fanpop. MAH FIRST FRIEND. I hope you come back. *Starts singing* BABEH, COME BACK!!

2. You were also one of the first people to support Invader ZIM the Hedgehog. However, i learned mais about your characters and found that your characters might just be a little bit too overpowered sometimes. Eventually I got over that...
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{u r now leitura the worst fanfic in the history of terrible fanfic overjoy!}
DONT NOT READ THIS IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-10

the sea of despair was a dreadful place. it had black sand and the water was black too. and it had huts where the sand ended with long uncut grass. we walk down from our place where we were looking at the de praia, praia and looked out over the sea. "a storm is coming" said arc. "well we all know wat that means" i said. u could see the dark nuvem miles away at sea, those clouds were most likey filled with lightning. the thought of all that wonderful electricity made sparks come...
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posted by TakTheFox
So we’ve gotten about five or so new users on the club recently, and that’s great. Ever since the big explosion months back things were rather quiet, but it looks like they’re picking up. I’m hoping to keep the new guys around, and that everyone gets to know each other well enough, as well as their characters and such, so this roleplay is mainly for the people new to our club.

Basically you can choose which character to meet of mine and a story will occur depending on the character you choose. Again this is mainly for people new to our club, but if you have not met these characters you...
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(okay, so....thought i had one mais dia of school to play with you guys, but evidently not. -.-* someone always has to ruin my plans..... unbelievable....anyways, awhile back i posted a mystery person picture. I posted the coloured ID verson of him, so now here's the bio that goes with him. He's my newest, and I'm actually really happy to how he turned out. He's gonna be really useful in the Parue/Kayverian war.)

Tryvor's Character Bio:
Name: Tryvor Jallen

Age: 18

Birthday: December 18th

Species: Kayverian.

Height: 3'5.7"

Weight: 119lbs

Powers/Abilities: Originating from the crescent moon, Tryvor's...
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The madness...The madness.Ⓧ

Journeying through the woods in procurar of notes on the fixed time limit,MTL came across a corpse hanging in the tree...the corpse was holding a note...but it would be disrespect to the dead to remove the note.MTL took the note(1/8Ⓧ)...Then suddenly the owl returned...it said "Who-who,to survive in these woods,you must make the right choices,one little slip up spells your demise...here,take this." the owl gave MTL a shed key.the owl said "That is all the help I can give you,good luck...and watch out for "him".Ⓧ"...the owl flew away.

MTL went to the shed,it was...
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