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Gary and Sue make too much Stew

Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one or the other.

What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A.    has too much power or skill
B.    All the answers
C.    Always gets their way
D.    Never loses
E.    And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F.    Is TOO attractive
G.    No weakness
Problems?

Each of these has something that can but not necessarily makes the characters stues.

A.     POWERS?
When a character has a huge amount whatever types of powers, they can seem annoying and obnoxious. When Rping, if the characters have a power for everything, it is extremely unfair. If one character captures another in something made of fire, then all of the sudden the character has water powers and destroys it, or also has fogo powers, it ruins the RP.
If the character just has the power of water in the first place, that does not make them a stu, even if they are hiding it. They can have tons of POWER but they shouldn’t have tons of POWERS. It’s generally okay to have infinite amount of chaos energy, but when someone has also light, darkness, time, space, ect. It goes too far.
B.    All the answers
This doesn’t happen all the time mainly, but there are times when for some reason the character knows everything about the other character, but never says why. And why is that? Because the people that are rping that character don’t have an answer and just want their character to look cool.
Having psychic powers to do something like that is alright. It can be annoying, but it’s not a bad thing.
Another way to “have all the answers” is in the following example.
Example: One character gets injured with a special “demon” poison, then no one but their own other character can heal it. If the other people’s characters try it doesn’t work, and usually some voice says something like “ha ha ha. Failures.” Which really bugs me. The characters are there for a reason. LET THEM HELP!
C.    Gets their way.
Now I don’t see this all too often in heroes, and only sometimes with girl characters, but with VILLAINS, it, is, so, annoying!
Most of the time this type of thing happens is when out of the blue a aleatório villain appears, acts SUPER VAGUE, then tries to kidnap another character. Here’s what’s wrong with what happens next.
1.    THE CHARACTERS ARE NEVER ABLE TO STOP THE VILLAIN!
2.    THE VILLAIN ACTS SO VAGUE STILL!
3.    THE CHARACTER GETTING TAKEN USUALLY SAYS SOMETHING LIKE “I have no choice.” Or “I have to. It is my destiny”. There are times when that’s happened and I just make my character say “Well then good for you *blasts kidnapped character* I hated you anyway”. Again, LET THE CHARACTERS HELP!!!!
D.    NEVER LOSING!
Either Villain or hero, Stus never lose. Especially with attacks. Things like *Shoots energy beam at you* are okay, but I see a lot of *kills you with energy beam* or *slices off your head and it doesn’t come back* or *beats up your character* and even *your character is impressed* and other ways where they try to control your character. IT’S NOT FUN! You do that, and people are going to hate you so much. What if the character would get stronger from that energy beam? Nope, can’t happen. “I already said it killed you. You can’t say it made you stronger”. People control how their characters react and if they get hit. Let them decide. Unless you are close enough to go *drills faca into stomach* then you can’t just say *throws faca into your stomach from a mile away* SO REALISTIC -_-
E.    There’s been Dilver, there’s been Bluckles, There’s been Blonic. I wish THOSE were the characters we had. At least they’re actually funny. But no. We get people like Silver #2, who has Shadow’s powers too, but looks JUST like Silver. WHAT A TWIST! Now I’m not hating on Clones of characters. If you’re cloning Sonic, or even doing a Silver #2 deal, it’s not BAD exactly, but it isn’t original. There are some characters that can pull it off like Starlight, but usually it doesn’t end well. If they have the same powers, then don’t make them LOOK like Silver or Shadow or Sonic. Just because you’re fast doesn’t mean the character has to be called “Sonica” or “Sonia”.
F.    I personally amor to make attractive characters. And making beautiful girl characters, or hot-dudes isn’t a bad thing when it’s a picture, but when rping it gets annoying when they say *You character blushes*. I personally have in my THIEF RP done something LIKE that.
“If your character is a guy, this would mainly be surprising, seeing how Kenfi is actually quite pretty, and rather non-thief-looking.” Notice I didn’t put “Your character blushes”. I could have, and in this case it wouldn’t be SO bad, but it’s still annoying. The point of this line I used was to emphasize that the surprise of someone finding out that the person trying to kill them turns out to be this beautiful aleatório girl. I know what you might say. “But you said that she’s beautiful. Some people might think she isn’t.” And you could say that, but I have actually been told that Kenfi is VERY attractive-looking por people, which helped me wager what I would do with this. So in short, you can make their eyes sparkle, you can make their hair shine, you can make their muscles huge, but let the people your rping with decide if they want to blush or not.
G.    Characters without weakness
Oh, My, Flagnob. Characters without weaknesses. Picture your character is trying to run away from an evil character. The evil character stu-ports your character to them, so your character tries to attack, but no matter what you use the STU just goes “HA HA HA! Pathetic! That can’t hurt me! I’m immortal”, which is really annoying. Also people go “*head grows back*” and such, then says “I’m immortal”. Here’s something you might want to know. IF YOU’RE IMMORTAL YOU SHOULDN’T BE ABLE TO GET HURT IN THE FIRST PLACE! I hate immortal characters. I have characters that are like that where they can’t be physically harmed, but even then you can make a weakness.
Example: Dimension 4 is a mobian core, so he cannot be physically harmed. He CAN however be drowned, or die in o espaço to an extent because he still needs air. Make your characters have a weakness that isn’t just some aleatório song only one character knows about and only one character can use (No offense, Sara).

Now there’s one last thing I’d like to mention here. Demon characters. I know I’ve said it before, but SERIOUSLY guys, WHY SO MANY OF THEM!?!?
1.    Demons are evil! THEY AREN’T GOOD! THEY CAN’T TURN GOOD! THEY’RE anjos TURNED TO THE DEVIL FOR PETE’S SAKE! STOP MAKING THEM GOOD-GUYS UNLESS THEY STOP BEING DEMONS!
2.    THERE ARE SO MANY! Now even if I wasn’t upset about demons in general, it would still annoy me that people use so many of them. We’ve got Demon-hybrids, demon-based-species, demon-demons, demon-forms, DEMON SONIC WAS A FAN-BASED SUPER FORM! IT’S NOT REAL! Is that what started all this? Because if it did, that just fits. Use other things. I almost NEVER… I’VE NEVER SEEN AN angel CHARACTER YET! WHY DO WE HATE PURITY ALL OF THE SUDDEN!?

So that’s my list of stuness. I know a lot of people are going to hate on this and disagree, but I think you can at least agree with some of it.

In short, just try to think of things that would make the rping fun, not ways to make your characters cool. Make weak characters once in a while. It’s really fun to be honest. I’ve got normal mobian characters that have NO powers whatsoever, and no special skills, and they have SUPER large rolls in my fan-fics.

Eat Pie and Prosper
Ok, so don't take any of this the wrong way guys, it's what makes me mad and pissed of.


1: Continuesess Role-playing.
I know some people amor to Role play, I do to. It's just...Isn't it annoying when your sitting there chatting, then someone contacts you over meebo. You click on it and they jump STRAIGHT into role playing without even saying "Hi". I certainly HATE it, no offense friends, I'm not naming them.

2: A busy/away sign means no contacting.
When I have a busy sign saying something like, "Busy right now, composição literária a essay" or "eating dinner", that doesn't mean 'I MUST CONTACT HER TO ANNOY...
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posted by FrizTHedgehog
Who is this masked man? The Golden Man?
If you listen to his theme, you'll get a good idea....
Other than that he has o espaço control similar to the the TomTom Gang in Blinx2, thus meaning he can open mini Black Holes, Worm Holes, and basically do anything that has to do with space. But where did he get that technology?
A few years back El Dorado broke into Friz's lab late at night and roubou experimental equipment, this was before he was El Dorado.
He become El Dorado when he was traveling through Universes and Planets, he found A Planet with entire Cities, Towns, And Villages made of gold, Then...
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posted by RawrMonster123
This club is having serious problems. Do you know what that is? It's ORIGINALITY!!! So that BlazeCat girl made a Truth or Dare RP. seguinte thing you know that Kittiez girl made one. 1st I thought that was fine, but then I thought about it, and that's plain copying. SilverAnime122 made a RP on her FC Dominique transforming into her Toxic form. Then before you know it that BlazeCat girl makes one that her FC "Sharmaine" transform into a monster from some damn brownies. Like, give me a Dorito and I'll turn into Barney. -.-" That girl that "owns" that FC Diane apparently doesn't. Like really? You know that's art theft, right? And it wouldn't of, I think, if you asked for permission and gave credit. Plus, you can't draw if you don't try. -.-" I know I suck but I keep trying. RECOLORS COUNT!! And I don't even need to add the other copiers. You guys know who I'm talking about. So people, please, BE. ORIGINAL!!!
posted by silveranime122
 Marth Stegtion
Marth Stegtion
This all the information about Marth.



Name:Marth Stegtion/Project-M
Age:16
Sex:Male
Species:Hedgehog
Birth Date:April 17,1995
Power:Speed and change of body hight
Abilties:Understand all lanagues,see at night clearly,far distance hearing,running as fast as Sonic,unlimited hight change
Bio:Was born in the middle of the forest por his parents.Raised until his parents were murderd one night when he was 12.Had to raise himself ever scence.
Job:Has to be a F.B.I. agent in order to be free.
Relationships:He is Dominique's boyfriend.
Likes:Being known as good,with his friends,knowing his friends are honest to...
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posted by TakTheFox
Part Four

Rynk had arrived in a different city now. It was less populated then her own, but it was not the population that she interested. She walked across the city’s outskirts, until she had found a still-occupied military base.

“This had better be it.” She said to herself. The lynx-girl then walked up to the gates of the base, and asked if she could meet with someone who she could pergunta about certain files.

“Are you serious?” The man at the gate asked in his booth.

“Well… I was… now I’m slightly less serious, but-“

“You can’t just be handed files like that, Miss…”...
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posted by TakTheFox
Geon

The scenario: Creation, and containment of a new stable species.

“Is he controlled?”

“Yes.”

The Location: Base-X. X for unknown. In the Metro-city of Mobotropolis Mark 21. On the planet Mobius Zone 12, or as called por the natives “Iblicis.”

“Is he complete?”

“Yes”

The date: The fourth after-apocalypse-world, or mais commonly called “Fourth From-Ashes”. ano 5500. January 1st, Saturday.

“Is he… contained???”

“… Completely.”


Chapter one: Happy New Year

Five hours prior…

A almost glowing-red male cat lay unconscious on the floor of what appeared to be a hotel living-room....
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posted by smartone123
name: Moshi

age: 17

Nickname: panda boy,shy guy, and freak

Stereotype:friendly but shy with passion for alot of things

Race: American and chinese

Hometown: forests,china

Birthday: June 4

Astrological Sign: Gemini

Species: great white panda

Gender: male

Religion:unsure

Allergies:talcum powder

Sexual preference:both

Occupation: highschool

Way of speaking:no way at all,but would be smooth and soft if could

Theme Song(s):
link
Pierce The Veil - Chemical Kids and Mechanical Brides

link
Tonight Alive-"wasting away"

Personal Quote:"it doesn't matter what the outside shows,the inside shows the real story"...
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[Warning: minor spoilers sort of...]

I remember how we were born. A stern father who hated us. A beautiful mother who found us disgusting. A pair of parents who abandoned us. Left us out on the rua in a unstable town. To die. We were punished for something we did not ask for. For our supposed digesting deform we have.

Conjoined twins. That is what me and my brother, Amore were. Connected at the skull and shared a brain. We didn't ask for this. I amor to be close with my brother, but not this close.

For years, we lived in alley ways and on the streets. Making money for showing people our gross...
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posted by Kal_Sphinx
Chapter six: Oops

Location: Mobius-zone-8, Faconicks, Meridona, South-Tropan, Mansion

Date: Date: Thursday, March 13th, Second-Line-2101

Time: 11:21 A.M.

Rin started up the computer, then quickly opened the file named “disposition-analysis”. Inside this one there were documents, videos, pictures, and so on. Rin scrolled down through these; ignoring them complete, which did not make the others happy, but they said nothing.

She finally came across one that was called “Communication-Uplink”. She clicked on it. As soon as she did, a progress-bar appeared on the screen, and a web-cam window...
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Sorry about the delay on chapter two.... Well anyways, here is the link to chapter one if you missed it.
link
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Where we left off....
"Hey, what are you doing?!" A prisoner shouted. mais heads of prisoners turned to him. They ran to him, but it was too late. He placed the bottle in the middle of the pentagram and started murmuring strange sounds under his breath. The bottle started glowing and shaking. Finally, the deep scarlet turned into a deep green. He picked up the bottle and started drinking.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>...
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Rynk’s profile

Character's Full Name: Relmiss Nyra Avi
Reason or meaning of name: Unknown.
Nickname: Rynk
Reason for nickname: It’s the only name she knows, and the one she made up for herself for no reason.

Birthdate: She’s fifteen, but no one knows her exact encontro, data of birth. Somewhere in April possibly
Astrological Sign: uh… the moon?

PHYSICAL APPEARANCE
Age: 15
How old does s/he appear?: 16 or 17
Eye Color: Mint, with faded blue pupils
Glasses or contacts? No
Hair color: Black
Distinguishable hair feature: Sometimes it looks as if it has stripes on it, but no one knows why
Type of hair (coarse,...
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posted by TakTheFox
Rynk story

Note: This is not planned to be a permanent series, but basically guide-lines to Rynk’s past.


Part one

I had the same dream again. The dream of a giant black tower, with spikes all around it. It used to scare me so much when I saw that, but now it just confuses me. Unfortunately it’s not the dream that becomes the least of my problems. I don’t know why but for some reason every time I have that dream, I wake up as a captive of someone. Here we go again.

In a large darkened room, a female lynx is tied to a chair, with a large black bag over her head, and armed mobians surrounding...
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This is a look into a mind that many don't wanta be in but you won't think the same again
(Warning:maybe be awkward and perverted for younger peoples.Also there are aleatório appearances of OCs)
Ok let's take the leap into a regular dia of Storm



Just another dia in a dia of making people give me money and then soco bad guys but at least i get to cook even though it sucks!whisles absently as her eggs she cooks started to turn from golden to blazing fire....I wonder if tenma will get together with harma?well it isn't my fav couple but their cute..!

"STORM!!"I snap back at the sound of chucks voice...
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posted by Scorch-Werehog
    As we followed Earthquake, we noticed some things in the trees that we had never seen before. “I think these are called Chaos Spears,” said Alymere.
    “Well, how would we know that?” asked Blaster.
    Please just shut up! I thought. I walked faster trying to see what was ahead of us. Then, a Chaos Spear past my head, just missing my ear. “What the...”
    In the distance, we heard yelling.
    “What is going on over there?” I asked.
    “You’re about...
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posted by Scorch-Werehog
“Where did Silver go?” asked Blaster.
    “I’m right in front of you.”
    “No, you’re not.”
    Then we say his form come out of nowhere. “Now do you believe me?”
    “Well, yes, but I didn’t think you could turn invisible.”
    He laughed. “He can’t. But I can.” His form changed from a hedgehog to a chameleon. His tail was long, he had a single horn in the middle of his face, his scales were green, and his eyes were a sapphire blue.
    “And you...
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NAME!!!!!!!: ALEJANDRO "GARY STEW"

AGE!!!!!!!!: IMMORTAL LOLOL!!!!!!!!!!!
HEIGHT!!!!!!!!: IDK ASK HIM

COLOR!!!!!!!: BLACK

EYECOLOR!!!!!!: YELLOW

GIRLFRIENDS!!!!!!!: HE DSNT HAV N E BCUZ HE JUST SEXES THEM THN MOVS ON TO DA seguinte 1!!!!!!!!

BIO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!: ALEJANDRO WAS BRN IN MEXICO (OLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!) N THN HE RRLZED DAT HES DA CHOSEN 1 2 SVE DA WURLD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
POWERS!!!!!!!!!!!: EVERYTHING PLS HE CNTRLS DA ELEMNTS

YEH N HES A PLAYA N STUFF N HE HAS A MUSTASHE N STBBLE SO YAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NJOY DIS PIC!!!!!!!!! I MDE IT SO YAH!!!!!!!!!! XOXOXOXOXOXOXO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-MINA AKA SEGAFAN AKA DA BEST DRAWERER IN DA WURLD LOLZ ;)
posted by zougethebat1
Zouge and Videnez was on they way to the park, Mysee and her "friend" were up to something no good."He he he...finally I will finally get red of Zouge the bat and rule the world ha ha ha."Mysee laughed "Umm...so how are we going to go that."Dead asked "Were going to kill her you dumbbell."She yelled "Umm ok jeez."He said "Now as I was saying lets go over the plans."She said "First we kill Zouge then we kill all her amor ones then we take over the world ha ha ha!!!" "Umm yeah little plobem were did she go I mean we cant kill her if we dont know were her is?"Sourah asked "O yeah your right."Mysee...
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Sorry that this is a few days late, I was a slacker. Anyways, enjoy! 8D
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Today was Christmas. I had been waiting for this dia for a long time now. I was inside my home, waiting for Chris to come with a gift, I got him one too. I had invited him the anterior day.
When he came we were supposed to exchange gifts, play some games, and whatever we could think of. He was to come at 5:00 P.M.
At 7:30, he wasn't there yet. I was worried, so I went outside and started looking.
"Chris? Chris?!" I repeatedly shouted. About a halk hora later a heard a series of growls...
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posted by zougethebat1
"Why?"Zouge asked." Because u have to."Her mom told her." But I hate Mysee she evil. "O just like you."She giggle. "Well yeah...but she mais evil than me!" Look I don't care your going and thats thats." "Fine but I'm not going to like it."She yelled. Her mother sighed then walked away. Zouge and Mysee hated each other. They always did for many resons but one of the main resons was because that Zouge was a princess and well Mysee wasn't. "Why why do I have to go?"That all Zouge trought as her and her famliy fue to Mysee house...or to her death.
There, Bluebell was waiting, for her current boyfriend, Yang the rabbit. They were both in high school, in the same class. And when Yang first saw Bluebell as a new girl, he knew it was amor at first sight. A few days after Bluebell was getting use to the school . . . That was when he asked her to go the the school dance with her. She was happy, but nervous at the same time. Now here she is, in her lovely bright blue dress, with a few bells down the side, waiting for Yang. She was always the earliest at anything . . . Now she was 15 minutos early for the prom to begin.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥...
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