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Gary and Sue make too much Stew

Note: I will be naming both Mary-Sues and Gary-stues as Gay-stues for the purpose of saving time, unless I am specifically naming one or the other.

What is a Gary-Stu?
A character who
A.    has too much power or skill
B.    All the answers
C.    Always gets their way
D.    Never loses
E.    And usually bases on a Cannon-Character with added powers and looks.
F.    Is TOO attractive
G.    No weakness
Problems?

Each of these has something that can but not necessarily makes the characters stues.

A.     POWERS?
When a character has a huge amount whatever types of powers, they can seem annoying and obnoxious. When Rping, if the characters have a power for everything, it is extremely unfair. If one character captures another in something made of fire, then all of the sudden the character has water powers and destroys it, or also has fogo powers, it ruins the RP.
If the character just has the power of water in the first place, that does not make them a stu, even if they are hiding it. They can have tons of POWER but they shouldn’t have tons of POWERS. It’s generally okay to have infinite amount of chaos energy, but when someone has also light, darkness, time, space, ect. It goes too far.
B.    All the answers
This doesn’t happen all the time mainly, but there are times when for some reason the character knows everything about the other character, but never says why. And why is that? Because the people that are rping that character don’t have an answer and just want their character to look cool.
Having psychic powers to do something like that is alright. It can be annoying, but it’s not a bad thing.
Another way to “have all the answers” is in the following example.
Example: One character gets injured with a special “demon” poison, then no one but their own other character can heal it. If the other people’s characters try it doesn’t work, and usually some voice says something like “ha ha ha. Failures.” Which really bugs me. The characters are there for a reason. LET THEM HELP!
C.    Gets their way.
Now I don’t see this all too often in heroes, and only sometimes with girl characters, but with VILLAINS, it, is, so, annoying!
Most of the time this type of thing happens is when out of the blue a aleatório villain appears, acts SUPER VAGUE, then tries to kidnap another character. Here’s what’s wrong with what happens next.
1.    THE CHARACTERS ARE NEVER ABLE TO STOP THE VILLAIN!
2.    THE VILLAIN ACTS SO VAGUE STILL!
3.    THE CHARACTER GETTING TAKEN USUALLY SAYS SOMETHING LIKE “I have no choice.” Or “I have to. It is my destiny”. There are times when that’s happened and I just make my character say “Well then good for you *blasts kidnapped character* I hated you anyway”. Again, LET THE CHARACTERS HELP!!!!
D.    NEVER LOSING!
Either Villain or hero, Stus never lose. Especially with attacks. Things like *Shoots energy beam at you* are okay, but I see a lot of *kills you with energy beam* or *slices off your head and it doesn’t come back* or *beats up your character* and even *your character is impressed* and other ways where they try to control your character. IT’S NOT FUN! You do that, and people are going to hate you so much. What if the character would get stronger from that energy beam? Nope, can’t happen. “I already said it killed you. You can’t say it made you stronger”. People control how their characters react and if they get hit. Let them decide. Unless you are close enough to go *drills faca into stomach* then you can’t just say *throws faca into your stomach from a mile away* SO REALISTIC -_-
E.    There’s been Dilver, there’s been Bluckles, There’s been Blonic. I wish THOSE were the characters we had. At least they’re actually funny. But no. We get people like Silver #2, who has Shadow’s powers too, but looks JUST like Silver. WHAT A TWIST! Now I’m not hating on Clones of characters. If you’re cloning Sonic, or even doing a Silver #2 deal, it’s not BAD exactly, but it isn’t original. There are some characters that can pull it off like Starlight, but usually it doesn’t end well. If they have the same powers, then don’t make them LOOK like Silver or Shadow or Sonic. Just because you’re fast doesn’t mean the character has to be called “Sonica” or “Sonia”.
F.    I personally amor to make attractive characters. And making beautiful girl characters, or hot-dudes isn’t a bad thing when it’s a picture, but when rping it gets annoying when they say *You character blushes*. I personally have in my THIEF RP done something LIKE that.
“If your character is a guy, this would mainly be surprising, seeing how Kenfi is actually quite pretty, and rather non-thief-looking.” Notice I didn’t put “Your character blushes”. I could have, and in this case it wouldn’t be SO bad, but it’s still annoying. The point of this line I used was to emphasize that the surprise of someone finding out that the person trying to kill them turns out to be this beautiful aleatório girl. I know what you might say. “But you said that she’s beautiful. Some people might think she isn’t.” And you could say that, but I have actually been told that Kenfi is VERY attractive-looking por people, which helped me wager what I would do with this. So in short, you can make their eyes sparkle, you can make their hair shine, you can make their muscles huge, but let the people your rping with decide if they want to blush or not.
G.    Characters without weakness
Oh, My, Flagnob. Characters without weaknesses. Picture your character is trying to run away from an evil character. The evil character stu-ports your character to them, so your character tries to attack, but no matter what you use the STU just goes “HA HA HA! Pathetic! That can’t hurt me! I’m immortal”, which is really annoying. Also people go “*head grows back*” and such, then says “I’m immortal”. Here’s something you might want to know. IF YOU’RE IMMORTAL YOU SHOULDN’T BE ABLE TO GET HURT IN THE FIRST PLACE! I hate immortal characters. I have characters that are like that where they can’t be physically harmed, but even then you can make a weakness.
Example: Dimension 4 is a mobian core, so he cannot be physically harmed. He CAN however be drowned, or die in o espaço to an extent because he still needs air. Make your characters have a weakness that isn’t just some aleatório song only one character knows about and only one character can use (No offense, Sara).

Now there’s one last thing I’d like to mention here. Demon characters. I know I’ve said it before, but SERIOUSLY guys, WHY SO MANY OF THEM!?!?
1.    Demons are evil! THEY AREN’T GOOD! THEY CAN’T TURN GOOD! THEY’RE anjos TURNED TO THE DEVIL FOR PETE’S SAKE! STOP MAKING THEM GOOD-GUYS UNLESS THEY STOP BEING DEMONS!
2.    THERE ARE SO MANY! Now even if I wasn’t upset about demons in general, it would still annoy me that people use so many of them. We’ve got Demon-hybrids, demon-based-species, demon-demons, demon-forms, DEMON SONIC WAS A FAN-BASED SUPER FORM! IT’S NOT REAL! Is that what started all this? Because if it did, that just fits. Use other things. I almost NEVER… I’VE NEVER SEEN AN angel CHARACTER YET! WHY DO WE HATE PURITY ALL OF THE SUDDEN!?

So that’s my list of stuness. I know a lot of people are going to hate on this and disagree, but I think you can at least agree with some of it.

In short, just try to think of things that would make the rping fun, not ways to make your characters cool. Make weak characters once in a while. It’s really fun to be honest. I’ve got normal mobian characters that have NO powers whatsoever, and no special skills, and they have SUPER large rolls in my fan-fics.

Eat Pie and Prosper
posted by Akiko_the_Cagon
The city seemed quiet. Too quiet. She knew this. She did her job well. Another nay-sayer of the twisted rumors, silenced forever. Her name is Kiri the Doll. Some say that she can be the most elegant, and at the same time, quite insane.
One day, the authorities caught on to this, and tried to capture her to foca, selo her away, not much success. She knew she could outwit the authorities until they got smart.
Then, the men in white lab coats came in, carrying a straight jacket, just her size. She was sealed away for a total of 15 years. But right when they thought she was cured of her mental illness, she murdered the guards she befriended, took the keys, and escaped.
Some new rumors had started, saying she now resides in a dark mansion, living with herself and her creations.
Chapter Ten: Visions
Location: Umbrage Ave, secret base, Triff City
Date: Wednesday, December 13th, 4337
Time: 5:31 P.M.

Lizzy turned to see where she was. When she turned to her left, she saw seven figures. Each of them were aligned, like a hallway, and in the middle was the two figures *she saw in her dream. *Chapter three*

“Chells, I know this place! Chells?” Lizzy turned to where Chells was standing, but he wasn’t there. “Chells!! Where are you?!” Lizzy looked around the area, but couldn’t see the blind raposa anywhere. She eventually gave up, and began walking towards the figures....
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posted by shadowknuxgirl
G-Sil and Silhouette kept fighting. Meanwhile in the city, Prime, Rico, and Claws were all talking. Prime was trying to sell some stuff to them. But they weren't buying. Soon enough, Shock and V2 ran up to the group. "We got a problem!" shouted Shock. Rico replied "a problem. What is it?" before Shock could answer, a loud noise and a nuvem of smoke were heard and seen at a nearby building. Yep. G-Sil had kicked Silhouette. Right into that building. "um... That's the problem..." said Shock. "well, I'm not gonna be a bystander!" shouted V2. She let her temper get the better of her. She charged towards G-Sil and attacked. But G-Sil was unscathed. For she transferred the damage to Silhouette. Silhouette tried to fight back, but G-Sil was just to powerful...........

Stay tuned for Part 4!!!!!!!!!
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It was very gloomy and cold outside. I would have figured that it would have at least warmed up a little bit, but I thought wrong. It was snowing outside, so I decided I'd do things with it. I flew out of my tree.

About an hora later I had constructed a humongous snow-hedgehog. It was no particular hedgehog, just a mobian hedgehog. Not too soon later, a lobo walked over.
She had long red hair(literally red), camoflauged pants,a gray shirt, and a black jacket.
"Nice snow-thingy. Unfortunately, it's nothing compared to this." She said.
She pulled out two rocket launchers made of snow.
She aimed them...
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A low groan was heard in the room as light shone through the curtains and onto a buldge on topo, início of a bed, another groan was heard. This time a lot mais annoyed and the covers hit the mural violently,
"Shit..." a dark mutter could be heard as a laranja male raposa got up, on wearing pijama bottoms, rubbing his eyes as he walked into a bathroom seguinte to the room.

The raposa looked up to face a mirror just to stare at it, his almost white-blue eyes looking as cool and blank as ever, one of his eyebrow twitched in annoyance, "Why is..." another twitch of the eyebrow. He brought his clenched fist up and tried...
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posted by MephilesTheDark
It was only pure luck that they were still alive.

Sure, between the four survivors they had a rather uncanny ability to open a can of whoop-ass when needed, but regardless of this, perhaps the only reason they'd lasted so long was simple; The right place at the right time.

As anyone would assume given the current breakdown of the entire country, survivors were weary of each other.

Anarchy was unleashed upon the country. Mothers were forced to kill their children in their own fight for life. Families were torn apart. Everyone was equal in this time of loss.

The four, however, were another story....
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posted by Akiko_the_Cagon
The fall air was quickly turning into frost bitten, I had not long before my clan mates would start passing from diseases from the white season. The wind chill made it seem like -60 degrees, but I had to help. I just had to. My body ached to be sandwhiched between two deer furs and near an open fire. I heard a gun shot ring through the snow. Dragon hunters. I had to get back before they found me, or either way, somebody'd die.
Too late. A couple of dragon hunters armed with almost every gun, cruz bow and sword weapon imaginable. I tried flying off with my ice blue wings, but I failed, a hunter shot at my left wing with a midnight black cruz bow. I started to fall, but I started running as soon as I hit the snow, carrying a peixe between my fangs. How the clan leader would be so unpleased frightened me, but not as much as the hunters.
posted by Caloria
Her eyes twinkled with excitement.
She was looking at a boy that the group found laying on the beach, unconscious and clutching a small chest-thing in his hand. "What do you think he's like?" She asked a boy that was with her. He has the same jet black hair as she, along with the same pale blue eyes. He shook his head doubtfully.
"Hopefully nothing like Lee." Another boy -blond with gray fur, somewhere around 10 to 11, and a scar on his right eye- smacked the other boy upside the head. "Not funny, Zavier." The boy -Lee- remarked.
Another male -green fur, with castanha brown hair, around 12-...
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posted by Yosuki-Hiroshi
Character:Boreas
Character's full name:Aurona Kaila De Naivha Boreas
Reason or meaning of name:On her nature,homeland and powers
Birth Date:December 28,???? B.C.
Theme:Immortality por Celine Dion

Physical appearance
Age:10,000
How old does he/she appear:24 as the age she die
Weight:63 pounds
Height:5'7 feet
Body Build:Slim,healthy and a i little bit husky
Shape of face:N/A
Eye Color:Bloody Ruby
Glasses or contacts: Green when going to school (teaching not studying)
Skint Tone:White as snow(in forehands,near jaw,underbelly and feet.
Predominant features: IDK and IDC
Type of hair: Thick,Smooth,Shiny and Glossy...
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"My sister, the one that left me and my mom is with them?" Jisseca said."Yes."Said a gray dog."Looks like I need to kill everybody that's close to her!"Jisseca said."That or you can help me?"He said."Help you with what?"Jisseca said."I will tell you but first, my name is Steve."Steve said."Will hello Steve, now tell me what or how can I help you?"Jisseca said. "Will you help me break some one I know out of jail, then I will help you."Steve said."Ok I will help you."Jisseca said. "Then let's get my friend out of jail."Steve said with a grin.
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posted by Ex-Smeralda
Slow and steady breaths echoed through the white and tolet, violet coloured evening, a set of boots walked alone, scrunching up the fresh snow. The boots belong to a light brown monkey with chocolate brown air, sky blue orbs for eyes, the only thing that kept the petit figure warm was a scarlet red jumper...which seemed highly suspicious as it had a face on the front and at the back of the capuz, capa moving about, but the boy didn't even seem to be in fear of this. He just slowly kept walking, wanting the snow to freeze him to death...His eyes were filled with indescribable pain, he suddenly stopped and...
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The boy steped out. It was dog with a banana with the letter "S" on it."Who is he? He looks like he's 11.""Emily his name is Shock the dog." Ashley said."Hello Emily." Shock said."Hello."Emily said in a low voice. Poor Emily, she is now scared that she well never see her little twin sister agin!"Now tell me how do I keep my sister safe?"Emily said."Well, we don't know ri-"Emily cut him off."What do you mean por "We don't know" Shock!" Emily yelled out."Please I don't like to be yelled at!"Shock said."Will I don't care about you Shock!"Emily yelled at him."Please stop yelling at me!"Shock said...
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posted by XxXLolaXxX
The New Kid? Ugh, Not Again!~ Part 2: Who IS She?

When Kimi and Aya left Miss Heather's oh-so-akward-office, They could feel the starring. Kimi heard whispered words like 'Her?', 'Oh, not another one!', and 'GAY!?'. She started looking around franticaly. She saw Aya make a sharp turn, she followed, not wanting to be lost in a place like THIS. Aya stopped in front of a sofá that sat two identical girls. One had white colouring and hearts on her frilly dress, the other had black colouring and her dress was decorated with Xes.
"Twins," Aya started.
"Aya," The twins replied, one happy and peppy,...
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posted by SilverFanGirl
Never mentioned the The Trio before. The pergunta in the pop quiz, if you have not answered it yet, go answer it NOW. Thanks.
Let's see if you knew this...

Leader of the Trio-

Micks the Hedgebat- A white hedgebat with blue eyes, black hair with red highlights. She usually wears a short purple tank topo, início with short shorts (purple also) with boots that are light gray on the inside and darker gray on the outer side. Green wings

Second-

Lily the Bat- Brown pele, peles with reddish hair. Black and red wings. Red short tank topo, início and black short shorts. Black boots with red slash markings on the side of her boots....
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posted by shadowknuxgirl
Melody, Emily, Zouge, Cece and Shion had all arrived at around the same time, Melody said "what are you guys doing here?" Cece smiled at the sight of her friends "looks like were all invited!" Cece and Melody started a bit of a conversation. Zouge looked to Emily and said "You don't think Silhouette's up to something, do you?" Emily smiled and said "don't worry! Silhouette wouldn't hurt her friends!" Zouge and Emily started a bit of a conversation too. Shion stood there a bit awkwardly, being the only boy. Impatient to get inside, he stared at his watch "5:58" it was almost time to get inside....
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oi ppl! I'm back and here is episode 2 part 2! Now let's start!
Icefire:Hello Molly & Jake
Molly:Hello icefire.
Jake:Hello.
Icefire:So you are -
Molly:Jason go up to your room.
Jason:Yes mom.=(
(Jason goes up to his room)
Icefire:So you to are wanted?
Molly:No. We where famed.
Jake:And we need you to take care of Jason & Crystal.
Icefire:Ok.
(crystal starts to cry)
Molly:It's ok crystal just shhhh..........
Ok I'm just going to skip to the sad part!
Ok it's night time and some ppl get inside the house and try to get Molly & Jake.
Well that's all folks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know right!
posted by steve-the-dog
let the story begin Steve the dog is laying in the grass. Man this sucks being stuck on an island theirs nothing to do but eat and sleep i need something exciting thrilling something to get the blood pumping said Steve in deep thought at that moment he thought of something A PIRATE that’s it said Steve as he got up and started running towards town anybody got a ship he asked everybody. Finally someone gave him a makeshift jangada that not even a feather would touch. well i guess this will do for now said Steve as he set off OK now to get to business first things first i need a crew a first mate a navigator a cook a musician a engineer and mais
well i guess we get first mate first i think ill set out north said Steve setting sail in the modern world we live in today soon he fell asleep when he woke up he was greeted por marines...to be continued
Chris held the gun up and shot. It hit a buzzbomber. Chris felt a tingling feeling in his stomach and chuckled. "MUAHAHAHA." He ran around, firing everywhere, hitting badniks, knocking down hills, and making loops collapse. "BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!" He shouted, running along. "This is SO COOL!" he shouted. About an hora had passed, and Green colina Zone had been torn apart and filled with smoke and ruins and now looked like piles of blocks and dirt and scrap metal. He ran away, but then ran into a blue hedgehog. "Did you do this?!" It said. "Ummmm..... YOU DIDN'T SEE ME AND I WASN'T HERE!" Chris...
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plz read chapter 1-24 before leitura this

as we awoke in the prison every one else was asleep still i had a hard time getting to the bars of our cell so i crawled to them and started banging, rattling them and yelling, "i wanna see Valice! i want to see valice! now! ill destroy this palace let me see him now!" everyone else started to wake up from my ranting "weds whats with the screaming?" asked tuesday rubbing his eyes in his cell "wait wednesday?! Wednesday Rane Misery your back!" yelled Dare standing up and running to the bars of his cell followed por Rush and Kodi. "u were all sitting...
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posted by cookiemaster
A crowd roaring for a song, waiting for her to come out, but Bluebell wasn't to sure on what her song should be... She made far to many over the holidays, now it's her show, concerto today... Her boss walked over to her. "Have you made up a song yet, Bluebell?" He asked. Bluebell shacked her head. "Hurry up! their waiting for a song!!" Then he walked away. Bluebell then had an idea on her song... "I've got it... the one my mother sang to me when i was small.." She said, then got up. She walked out onto the stage, everyone cheered for her. Bluebell to the mic off the stand, and held it. "I'm sorry...
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