here is what i got so far:
It had been the Third time we sat in these chairs.
the third time people sent us back.
seguinte to me my brother Aiden was drumming his hands nervously.
He didnt really like this place Nor did i, at that exact moment the door creaked open and in came Mr. Pond.
he was a tall thin man that wore glasses and right now was looking frustrated and annoyed.
he gave a small sigh and said"You promised me you guys would try."
"Mr. Pond we did try! we swear we-"
"Olivia! If you had tryed there house woldnt have looked like a torrnado went through it!"
I bit my lip. He got me there
"Well i kindda got mad at the little boy who lived there
and Exploded.........literally." i tried topping it off with a grin but clearly it wasnt working. Mr. Pond Looked at me with his Piercing green eyes. it felt like he was trying to look into my soul and see if i was worthy or not.
"if i find someone else who will take you guys in, can you please try harder?"
I looked at my brother he nodded, i looked back at Mr. Pond. and gave a Wholeheartedly "Yes."
Mr. Pond gave out a sigh of relief and went out the door.
I tucked my dark long hair behind my ear and stared at my brother, he was quite as usual.
He hadent said a word sense mom and dad died, but sometimes i hear him calling out in his sleep. i worry so much about him, he was the only thing i had left to hold on to.
I promiced Mom and Dad i would take care of him, keep him out of danger, and teach him how to control his special abilities.
i havent fully completed in controling powers myself but i got to try.
i thought back to the dia when mom and dad died. they told me all i needed to know, all i understood. except one thing that kept troubling me was when mom said to keep yourselves hidden dont let HIM find you.
iv had dreams about HIM, he was a tall man with dark eyes and dark hair like me and my brother.
in mid thought the door slammed open and i almost jumped out of my seat.
it was Mr. Pond
"Olivia? are you ok?" he said slightly concerned.
"ya fine. did you find us someone?"
He gave a grin. "Sure did! kids grab your bags and lets go meet the Smiths!"
fin
do you think i should continue? did i do ok? i want your HONEST opinion
It had been the Third time we sat in these chairs.
the third time people sent us back.
seguinte to me my brother Aiden was drumming his hands nervously.
He didnt really like this place Nor did i, at that exact moment the door creaked open and in came Mr. Pond.
he was a tall thin man that wore glasses and right now was looking frustrated and annoyed.
he gave a small sigh and said"You promised me you guys would try."
"Mr. Pond we did try! we swear we-"
"Olivia! If you had tryed there house woldnt have looked like a torrnado went through it!"
I bit my lip. He got me there
"Well i kindda got mad at the little boy who lived there
and Exploded.........literally." i tried topping it off with a grin but clearly it wasnt working. Mr. Pond Looked at me with his Piercing green eyes. it felt like he was trying to look into my soul and see if i was worthy or not.
"if i find someone else who will take you guys in, can you please try harder?"
I looked at my brother he nodded, i looked back at Mr. Pond. and gave a Wholeheartedly "Yes."
Mr. Pond gave out a sigh of relief and went out the door.
I tucked my dark long hair behind my ear and stared at my brother, he was quite as usual.
He hadent said a word sense mom and dad died, but sometimes i hear him calling out in his sleep. i worry so much about him, he was the only thing i had left to hold on to.
I promiced Mom and Dad i would take care of him, keep him out of danger, and teach him how to control his special abilities.
i havent fully completed in controling powers myself but i got to try.
i thought back to the dia when mom and dad died. they told me all i needed to know, all i understood. except one thing that kept troubling me was when mom said to keep yourselves hidden dont let HIM find you.
iv had dreams about HIM, he was a tall man with dark eyes and dark hair like me and my brother.
in mid thought the door slammed open and i almost jumped out of my seat.
it was Mr. Pond
"Olivia? are you ok?" he said slightly concerned.
"ya fine. did you find us someone?"
He gave a grin. "Sure did! kids grab your bags and lets go meet the Smiths!"
fin
do you think i should continue? did i do ok? i want your HONEST opinion
