What if Frozen - Uma Aventura Congelante was opposite? (a bit of a spoiler)

What if the story was:
Lisa was sleeping and her sister, Briana, woke her to see if she could do her "flaming" powers. They were enjoying themselves while Lisa made diamonds rain from the ceiling. Lisa got carried away and accidently burned her sister's face, and in that spot lay a birthmark Her mother and father send their daughter to a grand wizard where he replaces the memories dealing with Lisa's powers and turns it into a fun dia at the beach. Briana encourages her sister to go a play but she refuses. One night, por accident Lisa murders her parents with a ferocious fire. Years later while be crowned queen she almost sets off another fire. The whole kingdom of Charingham(Caring-ham) discorvers her secret. Then She run away to a deserted part of the island an sings this very song and creates a castelo made of glass.
Is this a good story? (Please make any revisions to the plot)