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What do you guys think of my poem? My English teacher said it was good but I want to know your opinions :3 Please no harsh comments ^_^

Dragons
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Up high in the sky they fly
ciclismo, andar de bicicleta round and round
Their mighty wings are great things
Soaring over the clouds
One por one they go
Greater than birds
Greater than planes
Their large bodies lift them away
Dragon power is strong
They are a peaceful creature
Always aflight in the sky
They shall never be dismissed
And stay with us forever
Respect them
Treasure them
For soon they will be nonexistent
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it's nice .3.
XxKeithHarkinxX posted over a year ago
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thanks :D
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
 16falloutboy posted over a year ago
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XxKeithHarkinxX said:
you want our opinions but we can't say anything bad?


seems legit.
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well they can be but I don't understand why anyone would say something mean D:
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
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Criticism m'dear.
XxKeithHarkinxX posted over a year ago
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@Keith Agreed. @16fallout CRITICISM learn to take it.
BlindBandit92 posted over a year ago
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huh
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
Ssmiley_143 said:
It is good!
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It is good!
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:DDDD yay thanks
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
egyptprincess7 said:
It's great.
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thanks :D
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
Kenny756 said:
Its Nice! :)
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thank u ^_^
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
scalesandtails1 said:
That is really good!!
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thanks :D
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
BlindBandit92 said:
Half the poem didn't rhyme but no geral, global I like it. But honestly it is not one of my favorito poems.
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eh I'm not that good with rhyming but thank you :D
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
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^You're quite welcome.
BlindBandit92 posted over a year ago
Usui--takumi said:
Well.. dragões are peaceful creature? Lmao."Respect them and treasure them..For soon they will be nonexistent". They don't exist in the first place xDD Anyway, that was sweet and nice :D
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um wrong they DO exist :3
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
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but anyway thx
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
Anime_Gir1235 said:
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IT WUZ AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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... IT WUZ AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:DDDDDD
16falloutboy posted over a year ago
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