Does this sound like a good idea?/ título sugestions

While some people say there is no bad idea, only bad writers, you should be able to take this idea and develop it completely adding quite a bit of background including parts of the trial Lilly remembers. However, if Lily is a teenager, you need to develop a really good reason or basis for Lily to be interested in following and subsequently remembering certain parts of the trial considering most children could care less about any kind of trials such as this. Plus, considering Lily is still a minor and would be even younger 3 years and 5 months ago, you also need to develop a reason that her parents would allow her to not only know about a serial killers murder trial but to spend as much time as it would take to have lasting memories and great affect and effect for her to be able to connect the dots from three and a half years atrás to today.

Also, it has only been 3 years and 5 months. If he was found guilty of murder, not manslaughter, you will need to have a very good reason for him to be released in such a short time. 3 years and 5 months equals 41 months. Is there any significance in any of the numbers? Is there an additional aspect to this world? Is it a modern earth or antique?

I find it very helpful to write down perguntas that you want to answer and explore in your writing. What perguntas do you want your readers to consider? What are you trying to provide a perspective on? I think this would be really interesting as a character development on Lily. Basically, Lily would be your perspective or narrator of the story. ( I just got a crazy thought - what would happen if we the reader are initially told that Lily is the narrator but the ending twist turns out lily is not telling the story? Something similar to that movie about the crazy neighbor Mom holding that girl in her basement and allowing the neighborhood kids and her own kids to torture her. In that story, the ending was forked. At first, we think she is able to escape only to return with her parents to find out she was really dead in the basement. It is not a light movie, so watch it at your own risk. You simply can't unsee or unwatch something no matter how badly you want to)

This has the possibility to become a horror. Make sure you know which genre you are aiming and keep your audience or readers in mind. Sex and violence cells, but ask yourself how far are you willing to take the inhumanity of abduction, murder, and evil. Good luck and keep us updated!

Doesn't sound that bad. Do you think you could be a little mais descriptive about the background, the setting, time, area.