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In a weekly "test" single people who are looking for a partner ask their mother and their best friend to help.Their mother chooses one partner and their best friend chooses another.The test is to see who can choose the best partner!
This week's single man is Richard Taylor,a 26-year-old musician from Southampton.His mother Meg chooses one girl,and his best friend Danny chooses another.Then Richard goes on a encontro, data with each girl.Which girl does he prefer?Who knows him better,his mother or his best friend?Who chooses the right girl for him?


"I usually work in England but sometimes I work abroad...
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Not long atrás people believed that in the future we would work less,have mais free time,and be mais relaxed.But sadly this has not happened.Today we work harder,work longer hours,and are mais stressed than 10 years ago.We walk faster,talk faster,and sleep less than anterior generations.And although we are obsessed with machines which save us time,we have less free time than our parents and grandparents had.But what is this doing to our health?An American journalist James Gleick in a new book,Faster:the acceleration of just about everything,says that people who live in cities are suffering from...
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One of Scotland's most active centenarians,Lady Morton,has been a driver for nearly 80 years,although she has never taken a driving test.But last week she had her first ever accident-she hit a traffic island when she took her new car for a drive in Edinburgh.

Lady Morton,who celebrated her 100th birthday in July,was given the Nissan Micra as a surprise present.Yesterday she talked about the accident.'I wasn't going fast,but I hit a traffic island.I couldn't see it,because it had no lights,which I think is ridiculous.But I am all right and luckily my car wasn't badly damaged.'

In spite of the...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 7: powers
My head hurt to much I just wished to die I think it was worse than the venom that spread in a humans body to change it to a vampire as my old vamp friend Kayla told me how painful it was for her. i wanted to scream and make the pain less por screaming it out but my mouth didn’t obey me I tried to mover my hands, legs but they wouldn’t mover to it was like I was paralyzed my breathing got harder I needed mais air then someone touched my forehead and brushed my cheeks going down to my breasts…. thats what Damien always does! What's happening? is he doing this to me he likes...
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I work for a magazine,which was doing an artigo about British language learners.As an experiment,they asked me to learn a completely new language for one month.Then I had to go to the country and do some"tests"to see if I could"survive"in different situations.I decided to learn Polish because my great-grandmother was Polish and I have some relatives there.I can already speak French and Spanish quite well but Polish isn't a latin-based language so I knew it would be completely different.

I did a one-month intensive course at a language school in Birmingham.I thought I was good at languages before...
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Here are lotz of spells you can try to become a mermaid!


1. Fill your bathtub with water, add seashells! Put on a locket with a picture of a peixe in it!

2. Say " I wish to be a mermaid, I wish with all my heart, and now I'd really like my mermaid powers to start! I will choose my power and the color of my tail, and I'm very sure that my descision will not fail! My power will be (freezing, boiling, moving) and my color will be (favorite color)!
3. Get into the bathtub for 30 minutes, hold your legs together the whole time!
4. Get out of the tub and dry off, put moisturising lotion on, then don't...
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posted by para-scence
I know the Columbine Massacre anniversary was Friday, so I decided to put up a story I wrote about it. I wrote this a couple months atrás from the viewpoint of Craig Scott. Please comment and let me know what you think.

“Craig! Get up! We’re going to be late!“ My sister Rachel pounded her fist on my door. I reluctantly opened my eyes to look at the clock. I had only ten minutos to get ready. I cursed under my breath and got dressed quickly, not bothering to grab anything to eat. I got to Rachel’s car just before she was about to ditch me. I tried to catch up on my algebra homework on the...
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posted by malmcd
Millions of Miles Apart

    From the moment your born somewhere out there you have a true love. At less that’s what they say? They say there’s one person who has the same coração strings as you and they complete you. And there’s nothing that can keep you apart from one another...But what if my one true amor isn’t here? I mean what if I never find him or her if that’s the case which I hope it’s not. I don’t know what to say but I’m different from the rest...What if there’s no one out there for me?
    My name is Sunflower I was born on the...
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posted by GodIsGood
Dear Cambelle,
It’s great to hear from you! How have you been? You mom and Leah say hi. It’s kind of annoying that your aunt’s house doesn’t have a computer, so we have to caracol mail each other.
I know you want to keep a low profile, but
We all miss you a lot Cambelle. My dad says you should come back. And mom wants to send you cookies. (She still thinks you're too thin).
I took your sister to the zoo yesterday. No wonder you nicknamed her Panda! She loves those bears.
Victor Terrah also emailed me. He wants to get a hold of you so you two can spar again. I could be wrong, but I think...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 19






Sitting on the porch in the late evening for BJ was her only time to get fresh air and some decent time away from Cayden. In the mid-summer it was warm and pleasant outside at night but tonight it was unusually chilly. BJ wrapped her arms around herself feeling a chill run through her body. The air felt thick but it wasn’t humid it was…tense. The sky was preparing for a storm. A rumble of thunder rattled around her making her jump. She couldn’t understand why she was so jumpy, storms never bothered her but there was just something she was sensing that wasn’t right. Another...
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posted by ambers1999
Ring, ring. “Hello”? ”Hannah I need you to come to my lab today”! “Doc”? but I thought”
…” I know, I’ve been working on something and I need your help”. “OK nice to talk to you again…bye”. In excitement I jumped out of my chair and put my best clothes on. Wondering what Doc was up to? I haven’t seen him in over a year, now that it’s the summer I finally have something to do. I raced down to Doc’s lab. The door creaked as I opened then I knew I was at the right place! “Hello” I said softly, “anyone here”? “Ah here you are I haven’t seen you in awhile...
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posted by Insight357
    “You did what?!?” Lucifer shouted.
    “You heard me. I got to her first,” Xavier said with a smug look.
    “I told you that I wouldn’t mind dating her. I thought you would’ve taken the hint,” Lucifer said exasperatedly.
    “No, I didn’t take the hint, because I like her, too,” said Xavier.
    “Even Wyatt would’ve understood that hint,” argued Lucifer.
    “Well, Wyatt has known you longer, and he is-” Xavier was interrupted por the door slamming...
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chapter 3
the party

the sino chimed and we all lead out of the hall, me and becca linked arms as we walked down and i thought to myself after the first day, i had some friends i was on the cheerleading team,and i had a party to go to tonight. i was acturally really exsited.
i didn't realise how much i was thinking and how much time passed, until i ralised that becca was now talking to tom liam and danny were play fighting and jake was looking down.
"whats up?" i asked quietly just incase.
"i was just thinking " i kept silent to give him time to tell me if he wanted to "i never believed in something...
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posted by iluvPrinceMJ213
When we get início and put Dawn to cama I lie on the cama and he stands in the doorway and says “ What was that about?” “ She said that she was prettier than Avril and Callie said no she wasn’t and Dawn said she was the prettiest girl in the world and I said she wasn’t so she’s angry. “ So why not let her believe it.” “ Fine.” “ So your going to tell her she’s the prettiest girl in the world?” “ No I’m not gonna lie.” “ Yea of course not even for the sake of our own daughter.” A tear tried to come out of my eyes which I held back with much difficulty. I lied...
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posted by harrypotterbest
Should I continue or not? [The ones in Italics are the parts I'm unhappy with]

For a vampire – a suspect of being one, really– she seemed pretty... human. With my job as a Vampire Seeker, she wasn’t like any of the other cases of vampiros I had discovered. With all the raving stories of vampiros I suppose they had to be more... careful with their special diet. But still, a vampire with these little reports, it was... strange, for lack of a better word. Perhaps we just had to get mais information; yes, that was probably the case.
I sighed and flipped my notebook shut. Putting my pencil...
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posted by CullenProperty
"I'd like a room please," Nick tells the front escrivaninha, mesa clerk. The old lady give both of us a look over and bolsa her lips then rolls her eyes.
"ID please," she tells us, "both of you," she looks at me.
"Mine's in the car, I'll be right back," I tell Nick, smiling at the lady.
I come back and the lady is defeated, she really didn't think I had one, but I showed her! She gives my drivers license back with a roll of the eyes and watches me as Nick fills out the paperwork.
"What's the license plate, Grace?" he asks.
My mouth drops and my eyes nearly fall out of my head. I turn around so the lady...
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posted by mitchie19
1. l E T T E R
Dear Mariah,
I and your father are expecting to leave for the upcoming season.
Your father got accepted as a manager of a company in United States and I have to be there to guide him. If you’re wondering whose going to take care of you Norah will be there. She’ll be with you for a while. Don’t worry me and your father will call you to check on you and Norah okay? And expect us that we won’t be there in your graduation and we will always be there to support you. I left your emergency money por the fridge and your money for expenses. Please save your money, we’ll use...
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posted by Authorfiction
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Chapter 1
THE SPOILED PRINCE

    In the land of Mayfair, lived a king por the name of Alfred and his wife, queen Jasline. King Alfred and queen Jasline had two children, the oldest Prince Harry and his younger sister, Princess Cilla.
    Prince Harry was a very happy little prince because you see Harry was very spoiled and rotten. Nobody, absolutely nobody was allowed to say ‘no’ to Prince Harry when he wanted something, or to punish him when he did something wrong or even to criticize him. Whatever Harry wanted to have, Harry had and whatever Harry wanted...
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posted by twilight_23
This is a pesonal narrative I had to write for my English class. I amor feedback, anything you have to say is appreciated. Also, if I made any mistakes (i.e. spelling, grammar, punctuation), please tell me so I can fix them, thanks:D


As I was thinking of experienes that changed my life, my mind automatically went back to my time at St. Anthony. I skimmed throught the years starting with eigth grade, thinking that was where I would find a significant event since it was where I have my most recent memories. To my surprise, I found nothing. I moved on to younger grade levels, still finding little....
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Using correct grammar and sentence structure is vital if you want to convey your thoughts accurately. You also want your composição literária to hold the reader's attention. Nothing is mais annoying than leitura a manuscript littered with grammatical errors. The error of composição literária sentence fragments is a common error. Sentence fragments are incomplete sentences that don't express a complete thought.

tips:
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Have a subject for every verb. The subject is the actor in the sentence. The verb is the action taken in a sentence.

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Make sure all of your dependent clauses have a completing thought. An independent...
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