True Writers Club
cadastrar-se
Fanpop
New Post
Explore Fanpop
posted by rory2011
David rode the man's car , the man drove to the police station ,when they arrived ,the man told David to go to ask for officer 12's office in the segundo floor
David ran towards the office as fast as he can ,when he arrived ,the officer looked at him asking " are you Mr. David miller ? " yes ,I'm sir " David said
" sit down please " the officer said
David sat on that black sofá near the officer disk
" sir ,could you please tell me what's going on with my son Kevin " David said
" today there was a fogo in the sugar factory where your son work ,your son is a very good strong guy ,he helped all the worker to get out of the factory in save ,but your son couldn't ,he breathed a lot of that dirt air ,he couldn't mover ,we found he's body charred when we extinguished the fogo ,I'm so sorry " the officer said
" No " David said
" I'm so sorry sir " the officer said
David cried and he almost lost his control on himself
" ok ,I'll ask a driver for a taxi car to send you back to your início ,just calm down " the officer said

when David entered the house ,Paul and jack were playing with a ball ,jack throw the ball towards his father , " oi David ...catch this "
David were Frozen - Uma Aventura Congelante for a few segundos ... " he's dead " David said
" who ? " Paul asked
" Kevin .... the fogo in his work killed him " David said
Paul ,Jack and Kat were in shocked ,none of them were ready to hear news like this after Mary killed , Kevin was the power for this family ,and now each one of them know that this family is broken and it can be the same anymore
David stood in his cama for days ,then he woke up to see his son Jack has left his school ,Paul spending the nights outside the house ,and Kat studying for her school
when he woke up he found Kat sitting near him
" what are you doing here ? " David said
" I needed a quiet place to study " Kat answered
" you're only in the first grade you don't need to study .... leave me alone " David said
" ok " Kat said closing the door room behind her
David closed his eyes ,and fall in a deep sleep again

when David woke up ,it was three a. m ,he left his cama and his room to check out his boys ,but the surprise where when David didn't find Jack and Paul in their beds ,they weren't in the house for the first place
David woke Kat up
" where are your brothers ? " David said
" I don't know ,they haven't sleep at início from a long time atrás " Kat said
" why you didn't tell me ..... your brothers could be in problem right now " David said
" I'm sorry .... but Paul told me to not weak you up ,he said you need some rest " Kat said
" just ...please ... stop , did any of them said something before they leave " David asked
" No " Kat answered

David walked away ,Kat followed him to the living room
" since how long I've been sleeping ? " David asked
" since three days atrás " Kat answered
" don't you have a school tomorrow ? " David asked
" yea " Kat answered
" then go to sleep " David said
Kat walked for a few steps
" oh ,before you go ,bring for me a cup of water " David said
Paul opened the door house ,David heard the door opening so he walked towards the door to see who was that
" where were you? " David asked
" I was .. " Paul said
" give me the money " David said
" what money? " Paul asked
" the money that you took from my pocket ,you left for me only ten dollars ,and there was a hundred " David said angry
" I didn't take all that money ,yes I took twenty dollars but I'll never do this to you dad " Paul said
" give me my money or leave my house " David said
" ok fine ,I'll give you everything I have ,here's a hundred dollar and three dollar for being a good father to me " Paul said throwing the money on his father
" this family is suck " Paul said throwing the cup that was in Kat's hand
when David turn his back to the door ,Jack came
" and where have you been ?,this is not a hotel Jack " David said
" I was in my friend's house " Jack said
" what's that smell ? were you smoking ? " David said getting angrier than ever
" chill out David ....it's the fashion for this ano " Jack said
" go to your room right now ,and I don't want to see that lixo in your mouth again " David said
" ok ............. goodnight " Jack said going to his room
" you too Kat ,go to sleep " David said

David's life changed a lot ,he lost his control on his sons ,none of them listen to their father ,David had to come back to the job that he always hated , but he had to make money for comida and paying the bills ,but that wasn't enough ,Jack always taking his father's hard work for drugs and cigarettes with his young gang

after six years ,the things started to be worse for Jack's life ,he lost himself with the drugs ,he started selling and buying large amounts of drugs without thinking what will happen to him ,he just wanted money and live happy for the rest of his life ,David know that ,he tried to stop him but Jack doesn't listen to anybody ,so David left him with his gang and he never talked to him
one dia ,Jack took what he deserves

Kat made the breakfast for her father and brother before they go to their job
Paul and David were sitting on the mesa, tabela when Jack came to have his breakfast
" good morning David " Jack said sitting on his chair
" Paul give me some pão " David said ignoring Jack
" fine don't talk to me ,it's your fault ...... Kat bring for me some pão " Jack said screaming
" go and bring one por your own ... this is our comida " Paul said
" shut up Paul .... this is my money too ,I can take whatever I want ... dad say something ,Paul being so annoying to me " Jack said
" Jack have your breakfast and get out of my house " David said without looking at Jack
felt angry ,he took his jaqueta and walked towards the door ,slapping the door with his strong hands ,it felt like the house has been explodes

( sorry if there any spells errors or grammatical errors )
posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasia :)~
Chapter 39
        Justice is served
    The police came and we spilled out everything that happened, they were bewildered but they kept up. The whole group of the drowning man was arrested, not only for the murder of Dorothy Loreans, but for mais worse crimes too. Jessica and Meredith, as I predicted, were the only ones that had a nice crime report, and from the visions of what I saw with Meredith’s crimes, I’m a bit scared to learn the others.
    Since mom was safely...
continue reading...
added by h3rmioneg
added by hgfan5602
added by dragonsmemory
Source: Knowitall123
posted by 1999jacko
" BUT I DO NOT THINK WE'RE INVINCIBLE" Brandon sits on his cama cantar along to the song juggernauts por enter shikari as he reads a post por his best friend Craig on Facebook," Im loosing it man I cant take no mais im givin in to the voices im gonna do whatever they want" it says on his wall. Brandon looks shocked at the post hes made and quickly turns down the música and rushes to Craigs house.
As he knocks on the door and asks Craigs mum if he can see him he hears loud música playing from Craigs room," sure Brandon come on in just be careful okay, the doctors say he has something called multiple...
continue reading...
posted by campcheerio123
I quickly ran over to the nurse that was closest to me. She looked very startled, so I gave her about .333 segundos to compose herself. "Who is that man?!" I demanded. "I don't really know, but as it looks refering to his condition, he doesn't look like he is going to make it." She replies. My coração sinks into my stomach. I start to see fog, and the seguinte thing I know, I am falling onto the tile floors.


I wake up in a room. There are doctors everywhere, and I try to sit up, but there is a restraint holding me down so that I can't move. I look the my left, and I see the farmiliar macine that shows...
continue reading...
added by alicia386
added by hgfan5602
Source: Problematic129
added by h3rmioneg
added by h3rmioneg
added by h3rmioneg
posted by 1999jacko
5 years ago
Leo stood at the edge of the plane as 3 men stood watching him intently.They were chanting over and over"Take on the life of Survival. Even though he was 8 he still knew they would set the bomb and push him off sooner or later. Leo turned around and tried to keep his gaze on the men, but he was to scared of them to do it. They had trained him for 4 years about the skills of survival and how to fight but the still scared him to death. As Leo turned back to the door the men stopped chanting, they moved as one being and picked up the bomb together setting it to 10 seconds, they then...
continue reading...
added by alicia386
posted by hgfan5602
There's a possibility
That if we believe in our souls
Then the doubt that we will fail
Will melt away

We must believe
There's no better time to do this
And we shall never give up
Because a helpless creature is dying

We shall help the creature
And if we come together and sing
All hope will become stronger and stronger
Like a candle building flame

We shall care for it
We shall be its shoulder to lean on
We shall never give up hope
If it dies, I die with it

It shall survive
If we give up all our hope
Nothing ever shall be alive again

The hope still blazes
Inside of each and every one of us,
And we believe that we will
Defeat our obstacle

There will be nothing to fight us
After we look inside ourselves
And find our strength

I have a dream,
That my little amazing creature
Will survive and get a new leg
It shall not die.
posted by SweetHoneyBunny
The sun was sitting on the horizon as the troops of UFS reached Nindell. The air hung heavy as they trudged through the streets swamped with garbage, crumbling buildings and the occasional body. Talow stuck close to the group as he heard gunshots firing from the distance. The walked until they had reached the far end of the city. Talow could see a large colina with the jungle starting at the topo, início and doors at the bottom. They marched up to these doors which opened to reveal a hidden building inside.
“Welcome to HQ.” Luca whispered in Talow's ear as he passed. Talow looked at the open area he...
continue reading...
added by h3rmioneg
Chapter Nine

      Unless, Reese was working with Hazel. How else would Hazel be able to release Reese from jail for just an event like this. There was no other way. Dakota stopped at the door and tried smiling but it was so stained you could tell it was fake. Reese didn't smile. She appeared sad. She wouldn't mumble a word. All she did was slowly stand up and prance on Dakota. She was able to hold Dakota down and lug her towards the bed. She handcuffed Dakota to Hazel's bed. It happened so quickly that Dakota wasn't able to put up much of a fight.
      "I am so sorry for this Dakota but...
continue reading...
posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasia :)~
Chapter 36
        An angel in disguise
    I feel my blood run cold as I hear the door open and I quickly enter the room, the guys are on the phone, and I motion them to be quiet, not loud. Meredith nods and whispers into the phone, quickly, she sound hysterical and the door slamming shut makes us all jump, and the two girl’s start to whimper.
    I put a finger on my lips and they nod, clutching each other.
    I have to think of something, and fast. We...
continue reading...
posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the reviews, please don't copy and please read review*
Chapter 5
        Daredevil’s plus mall equals disaster
    The end of the dia was finally over, and I was shaking with enthusiasm. At first we were going to Lara’s house, but then we decided to go a mall (that I didn’t know existed until now) that was close to my house.
    “First things first, were going to the arcade.”
    “Arcade? You guys always hog the games.” Corrie complained. “How about we eat first?”...
continue reading...
added by h3rmioneg