Marlene: Squid Spy?

This is based off the continuity errors from the fórum post "PoM Fails" (it's on there somewhere. i found it about 3 months atrás and updated it.) Maybe this will help bring that fórum post in use again. Thanks for all who posted for giving me ideas!

"Leaves"

It was a warm summer dia in Central Park. Kids were playing in the park, eating snow cones, flying kites, eating snow cones while flying kites, and flying kites while eating snow cones.

The penguins were in a nearby tree, hidden amongst the foliage, spying on the milho dog vendors that were slowly encroaching on the territory of the snow cone...

My upcoming stories:
Because I’ve been on Fanfiction.net for a little longer then on fanpop, most of my stories are posted there. But, since my grammar was horrible at the beginning (English is not my first language), the stories needed remakes and aren’t finished yet because of this, so it put it all in a total mess. Here, on fanpop, I’ll post a story after a anterior one is done, so the stories won’t be in the mess here XD.

These are stories of my first PoM series:

Guard of the Secret: When a female pinguim arrives to the zoo, it appears that she's Skipper's old friend. She's the only...

Author's Note: I apologize for the delay in posting this chapter. It won't happen again.

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    Lorrie cried for about twenty minutos into Preston’s chest and before he finally pushed her progressivo, para a frente and wiped away her tears before they froze to her face.

    “Lorrie, I know you’re hurting but we need to move. Think about it this way. When we turn them in, you’ll have avenged Kowalski and his father’s death,” Preston said softly. Lorrie choked and shook her head.

    “It’s all my fault. I was so caught up in trying...

The Ending of this story.
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Petting Zoo
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Rico starting looking at the pictures (they can't read remember? XD) and gasped at some blood stained pictures, oh wait no it's just juice. Rico leaned against the mural and remembered what he was doing here. Helping Skipper.

Skipper was still screaming and panicking. Rico stood up, but fell again because something or someone , fell on him .

"Rico! I'm so glad I found you!" Private said, as he started to hug Rico...a little to much.

"Do ou hav willes? (Do you have willies?)" Rico asked as he looked at Skipper's...

"Skipper," Kowalski said to me. "I need to tell you something." I paused. All eyes were on me, including the doleful eyes of my Young Private that I thought I'd never see again-about an hora ago.
His big blue eyes stared up at me-almost like he was pleading-from his hospital cot. "It's all right, Private. You're fine." Kowalski reassured him, but I wasn't so sure. His expression read differently. I could tell Private was buying it, because he proceeded his banter with Rico. While he was distracted, Kowalski motioned for me.
I followed him closer to the door. From the counter we stood on, Kowalski...