Comparison

This is a fanfic I thought of...no judging ok guys:D

I was sitting in my bed....why did I have to transfer to another highschool during the ano anyway?... My dads so stupid sometimes with his job....I miss all my old friends...but my mom said tomorrow when I start at central zoo high school..I would make new friends....oh wait..I'm sorry..I haven't introduced myself..my names private...I'm a freshman in highschool...and my dads name is mark..he's a accountant...and my moms name is Michelle...she's a stay at início mom...and we just moved from Ohios zoo to New York City central zoo...I'm hoping...

These are bloopers from scenes in Chapter One. Just so you know, the couples in real life are Me x Kowalski, Sweet Pripper x Private, and Skipper x Bella. You don't know who Bella is yet.

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Did you miss me? Take One
Cowtails: *walks into the room* I'm back!! Didn't you all miss me?!
Kowalski: YESS BABE!!
Director: *facepalm* Cut!!


Did you miss me? Take Two
Cowtails: *walks into the room* I'm back! Didn't you all miss me?!
Skipper: Uhhhh...sure...
Cowtails: Geez if you're all gonna be jerks I'll let Sweet Pripper deal with you!
Kowalski: Oh please no...I missed you....
Rico: *nods* Uhuhuhuhuh.
Private:...

"Whoa whoa! Did he just call me an idiot?" Sweet Pripper growled, punching the window between her and the Man.

~ "aw crap.." Cowtails said, climbing into the air vent quickly, she went halfway and saw the penguins, "Skipper!"

~ Private cowered in a corner.

"what the-?" The man asked, almost driving off the road.

~ "WHERE THE CRAP ARE YOU GOING?!" Blowhole snapped.

~ SP grinned evilly, "You won't get away with this."

~ "Nowhere?" Cowtails answered questionly.

Her hip suddenly got stuck, "are you serious? Skipper, guys, help me! Blowhole's right here!"

"come on men!" Skipper shouted, sliding...

Skipper dreamt of that place again.....over and over every night he dreamed of it.... The body's....the rooms.... Even the stench, but everytime he dreamt if that school, he would always see one of his friends who died there, crying how much it hurts, and how they want to go home.

Skipper: dammit.....

It had been 1 ano since that event, and everyone at the zoo seems to not even notice anything, expect skipper and his friends who were there.

skipper, Rico, and private were all outside, waving to the humans as usual, but they couldn't do it very well without Kowalski...

Julien was over at his habitat,...

Author’s Note: Sorry for the long wait. School’s been a pain for me as of late since I’m a Senior in high school and I need to do all these Senior things and get ready for the big dia and all. And writers block really didn’t help either. XD But I want to say thank you to stlouisfan who helped me in the composição literária of this chapter. Thanks dude!

Chapter 4: The Final Clue

After a dia and a half of waddling, Private could make out something in the distance along the rocky landscape. It was large and gray, but at this distance he couldn't tell what it was. But as he got closer, he could make...

Leonard was stricken speechless, but he quickly recovered. "Me? As in...me?" He asked putting his paw to his chest. Kowalski nodded. Leonard shook his head. "No, there must be some mistake."

Kowalski shook his own head. "There's no mistake. I ran the test three times and your name showed up in each of them. Now, it's possible that your pele, peles may have coincidentally blew into the lémure, lemur hab-"

"Coincidence my tail! I did not put anything into that lémure, lemur habitat!" Leonard insisted a little louder than he intended.

Skipper stepped progressivo, para a frente and nodded comprehendingly. "Now, look, marsupial. I know what...

Happy New Year, fanguins! :D Yeah, I bet you're surprised to see me here. It's been a while, hunh? Goodness, I've been so terribly busy. I'm a senior now, got accepted into the college I most desired to get accepted into, composição literária and making videos, and of course, school work. God, I hate school--especially Math. CURSE YOU CALCULUS!

Anyway, I want to say how much I miss it here. I want to come back so much, and yet... I don't know. I loved it here so much, it's not even funny! I had a great few years here, and the fãs all meant so much to me, whether they're gone or totally new. Even if I don't...

Lorrie Trace was a confident woman with skin the color of creamy leite chocolate. Her kind eyes saw the world in a perspective that most didn't. She always tried to see the good in everyone and everything. Some might say she has a coração of gold. She attended Harvard universidade and received a doctorate in science and physics. Ever since, she's been traveling the world, wanting to know mais about it and its wonders.

As always, it was a freezing, below zero dia in Antarctica. Lorrie was wearing a heavy black casaco with a sweater underneath, thermal, blue colored gloves, and think black pants, and...

The evil golfinho with a robotic eye was standing on his segway and smiling evilly. Everybody sent him a cold glances.
"Oh, why are you so sad? Do you want to see your friends?" Blowhole asked. The lobsters showed them Ally’s and Ben's bodies laying on the floor. They can't look at them "But don't worry, soon you'll be together again, maybe somewhere there or maybe somewhere there" he said and pointed up and down. But they stayed quiet "No answer? You make me sad. It's not good for you!" he showed them his machine, it looked like a big torture machine, but in fact it was something else…
"Only...

Kowalski stormed into his lab. Skipper walked up to Private. "Just let him cool off. He's wouldn't hold a grudge on this for too long. How about we go for snow cones?" Private smiled. "Can I bring one for Kowalski? You know...as a sorry?" Private asked his commanding officer. Skipper patted his back. "Sure." Rico, Skipper, and Private then left the lab for snow cones. They didn't even notice the intense purple glow coming from under the lab door as the left.

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Private went to Kowalski's lab, snow cone in hand, and knocked. There was no reply. He spoke as he opened...

Me and Hans raced out of the prison like a blur. I don't think the gaurds even knew what was going on until maybe several scoches later. Then the alarm started blaring. I looked over my shoulder to see gaurds numbered por the dozen running after us. Hans was flying level with the ground beside me as I slid down the hallway. Suddenly he made a sharp right turn. I skidded to a halt and looked down the corridor after Hans. It was a dead end all but a small window at the topo, início of the stone wall. "What are you DOING?!?" I shouted. "Come ON Alex!" Hans snapped. I was stunned for a momment. No insult?...

Skipper's point of view:

Johnson ran in from the metal door. He was carrying a device that looked much like the Stopwatch Kowalski had once made.
"Hey, look what I found!" he said.
"My Stopwatch!" Kowalski cried. "Where did you find that?!"
"It is not your Stopwatch thingy-ma-jiggy," Johnson said. "I found it in my box of things I got from Blowhole."
"Blowhole, Shmohole. It is my Stopwatch!" Kowalski cried. "You don't even have a Blowhole box, do you?"
"He does too!" Ivy said. "He showed me it!"
"Hey, everyone!" I cried. "Stop arguing unless you want a peixe slap!"
Everybody stopped. Then, Kowalski...

I shut my eyes, expecting death, only to hear the sounds of men shouting and feet rushing into the room. armas clanked and a familiar voice shouted, "Captain Blowhole, you're under arrest!" I lifted my head. The blurry image of Leeland wafted from double leelands to just one, then back again. Leeland was alive! I wanted to spring up and fight at his side, but I could hardly move. I was too shaken. Suddenly a flipper grabbed my own and pulled me up to my feet. He threw my flipper over his shoulders to keep me from collapsing to the floor again. I looked over to see who it was, "Hans!" I exclaimed,...

After Hanna died my life went into a tailspin. I lost my focus on the war. I no longer felt a thrill or a longing to be on the battlefeild. Life had lost meaning. I fought blindly in every battle. I didn't care whether I was killed or not. That was my downfall. One battle in particular was extra hard and an uphill climb, facing our enemy. If you remember, there had been tension between Captain Blowhole and my father. Now that General Fahlcon was out of the way, / posed as a threat to Blowhole's superior title. I was a sitting pato in my condition. The heat of the battlefeild wore down on me...

Antarctica

*Kowalski & Rico woke up in the middle of the seguinte day*

Kowalski: *stomach rumbles* "Ugh. I'm soooo hungry..."

Rico: "Me too. C'mon. We should get moving."

*Kowalski & Rico begin waddling*

2 Hours Later...

Kowalski: *begins slowing down* "Hey...Rico..."

Rico: "Sup?"

Kowalski: "I know this place..."

Rico: *looks around* "Hey, me too."

Kowalski: "Is this...No...It couldn't be..."

Rico: "What?"

Kowalski: "I think this is our home...I think we made it back to where we live while it's not feeding season..."

Rico: "Hey, ya know...You're right..."

Kowalski: "That means...Rico! Are you thinking...

Chapter 1: Betrayed por a friend.
It was just an normal dia in New York that'll turn for the worst.
Skipper: What?. . . Bounty hunter help, no I will not go on this mission. . . I have to. . . With Marlene?. . . Yes sir right away.
Private: What is it Skipper?
Skipper: Sorry Private, that's classified.

In Marlene's habitat. . .
Skipper: Marlene, I need you to ome with me on a mission.
Marlene: Ok, I'll do it.

Later in the air port. . .
Skipper: Where is that bounty hunter?
Bounty hunter: Are you Skipper?
Skipper: Yes.
Bounty hunter: Come with me.
Later. . .
Bounty hunter: So I see you accepted the mission,...

All the penguins stepped into the car garagem and loaded up. Rico sat in the front with Kowalski and the others were in the back, seperated por luggage. A few minutos later, and they were on their way. None of them knew,that for some, that would be the last they ever saw of their beloved home.
The road was long and dim. Not only that, but it was treacherous and slick, as well. Up ahead a sign wrote: TURN LEFT but "left" was crossed out and under it spelled "right". Rico made the turn, but Kowalski disagreed with his desicion. "Rico, I am pretty sure you were supposed to make a left." Kowalski...

Chapter 19: Epilogue
It was time for a celebration. Pat would start off the party. (We are the Champions por Queen)
I've paid my dues
Time after time
I've done my sentence
But committed no crime
And bad mistakes
I've made a few
I've had my share of sand kicked in my face
But I've come through

We are the champions - my friends
And we'll keep on fighting - till the end
We are the champions
We are the champions
No time for losers
'Cause we are the champions - of the world

I've taken my bows
And my curtain calls
You brought me fame and fortune
and everything that goes with it
I thank you all

But...

Private's point of view:
I dashed to the hole, fighting the crowd, with their shoves and elbows. I immediately got on my tippy-toes and watched through the blemish. I told myself no matter who he was going against, I'd cheer for my dad. Then, his challenger, waddled out. At first, I thought I was imagining it. It couldn't be, It just couldn't. He was dead, but I was proven wrong when Skipper turned to look at me. He hastefully turned his head, and met my dad. His sorrowful eyes met mine again. I then heard the shot ring out. They both paused, Skipper closed his eyes as if in pain. Finally, he...