Okay., so I was asked to review this story but I don't have much to say.

Except the beginning..
Wait at the beginning, I was hating it already.

Kate cheats on Humphrey for Garth, AGAIN..

This happens in so many stories, sense I'm here to be honest, I'll come out and say it.

I FUCKIN HATE ALL OF THEM!!

Every time Kate cheats, my remaining respect of these stories just keeps growing thinner.

She's my favorito character.. So why dose she have to fuckin cheat!?
She's not fuckin Kristen Stewert, or Paris Hilton!!
I actually RESPECT Kate, unlike those two.

This is why I retired from this genre in the first place!..

But anyway.,

I can't say I really understood most of the story, it's really hard to read, but that's just me.
Plus it's a crossover of something I never even heard of.

But oh well.
Maybe give it a read.. You guys might like it mais than I did (witch shouldn't be hard, I didn't like it at all.. No offense to the writer, cause he's probably leitura this now).