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Okay., so I was asked to review this story but I don't have much to say.

Except the beginning..
Wait at the beginning, I was hating it already.

Kate cheats on Humphrey for Garth, AGAIN..

This happens in so many stories, sense I'm here to be honest, I'll come out and say it.

I FUCKIN HATE ALL OF THEM!!

Every time Kate cheats, my remaining respect of these stories just keeps growing thinner.

She's my favorito character.. So why dose she have to fuckin cheat!?
She's not fuckin Kristen Stewert, or Paris Hilton!!
I actually RESPECT Kate, unlike those two.

This is why I retired from this genre in the first place!..

But anyway.,

I can't say I really understood most of the story, it's really hard to read, but that's just me.
Plus it's a crossover of something I never even heard of.

But oh well.
Maybe give it a read.. You guys might like it mais than I did (witch shouldn't be hard, I didn't like it at all.. No offense to the writer, cause he's probably leitura this now).
Alpha and Omega: Debt paid with Blood

Alright first story Plz use creative critisizm

The Wind Crackled as it Passed throught the trees, Sending warm air into the undergrowth and into the bushes. A lone touro grazed below, it chewed on the wild grama it's long legs like stone pillars his antlers covered in velvet and the scratches of old fights lay visible.

The wind shifted , as the Old touro cocked his head releasing a loud snort. Admist the arbusto, bush a pair of Glowing eyes focused on the moose, to the eyes their was nothing else just it's prey. the eyes took note of every breath , every movement, every...
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The pack members who had interviewed Eight were now prime for deliberation between themselves as he waited at the bottom of the trail entrance.
The five of them discussed among themselves and carefully weighed both the pros and problems that taking in a pack member - especially one they barely knew, would bring to their clan.

"Well," The large black wolf, Otto began his observations, "He's not weak. Thats a certainty. He knows what he's talking about, at least a little. At most, I imagine that he'll be a decent enough combat or hunt member."
The others nodded in agreement as Deogee piped up,...
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posted by PrinceRhaegar
I took Humphrey deep into the mountains and found the most quiet, yet beautiful place to grace Jasper. We sat atop an large cliff overlooking the rest of the park, all the mountains, all the little creeks. Meadows filled with the melting snow, small flores beginning to peak up, despretely seeking the sun. We marveled at the conifer trees as well, a shining pillar of strength that refused to bow, even to the might of winter.
We just sat there, at this moment there was no need for words, we let the scenery around us speak.
"All matter is just a form of energy condensed into a slow vibration and...
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Kate got to the antro, den where Humphrey was just laying on the ground.
“Umm,” Kate said.
“When’s my trial?” Humphrey asked.
“Tomorrow.”
Humphrey sighed, “I need a lawyer.”
“I got Hutch for you.”
“Thanks,” Humphrey got up approached the rock, “Maybe playing with the Omegas will help me forget this.”
Humphrey left and went to Mooch’s den, which was the closest.
“Hey, Mooch, I nearly killed Cando and I’m going to trial tomorrow. I just hope playing will help me forget about all this.”
“You almost killed a wolf?” Mooch asked in panic.
“Yup, trial is tomorrow....
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posted by xscash23
Demon Lilly apocalypse part 2
     Garth thinks that it crazy that Lilly robbed a store but he reported her behind her back and the cops showed up and took her to the police department big mistake she turned into the demon and killed every body in the police department and then ran início and she kicked the door down and slaughtered garth after mating one last time then turned back to normal and sobbed about garth she could not show her face again she ran ways away and hid then Humphrey came and found her ballling and said “C’mon Lilly come back the pack is in danger and...
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posted by kates-mate101
Chapter 5
“That, was awesome.” Seth stated. “I know! Right!?” Kate said smiling. Seth and Kate passed over an arched bridge. The water lapped the bottom of the bridge. “We’re almost there aren’t we...” Seth asked. Kate turned away from him and looked out the train car. She looked at the mountain. She paused for a moment scanning the area. “We’re about two hours away...” “Okay, er...” Seth took a deep breath. “You can sleep. I’ll wake you when we get there...” “W-wait, why?” “You saved me... If you hadn’t hit Hunter before... I... Would of been killed......
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posted by kates-mate101
Chapter 2
“Right this way!” Sam said as he flew overhead. The wind buffeted Kate’s head and her pele, peles ruffled and felt like it was going to fly off, but as an Alpha, she couldn’t let small things like that bug her. Rain pelted her and it felt like she was being hit with stones. “Where are we heading?” demanded Seth. There are mountains ahead! If we can pass them, we can reach the rock flow below! That will take you directly towards the pack’s territory!” “But won’t the rain make the rockslide a mudslide? A mudslide could kill us!” “I know! But if we hurry, we can get to...
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posted by katealphawolf
*Rated T for all the usual reasons, you have been warned!*

"Humphrey wake up! Wake up man we got another lesson today!" Humphrey's eyes opened a little, he saw the lean, powerful figure of Garth standing over him. "Um wait, whoa, what?" "Its almost noon Humphrey get your scrawny butt up!" Humphrey finally came around and opened his eyes all the way and looked around. The cave was brilliantly lit with warm autumn sun, Kate still sound asleep snored softly. Humphrey remembered what he and Kate did the anterior night and how tiring it was.

"Last night was amazing Garth you should have seen me!"...
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posted by UriahA
Humphrey, Star, and Kaltag go to school again.

Kaltag, estrela and Humphrey got up and remembered they need to go to school.
“Crap, we didn’t go to school yesterday!” estrela said.
“We had driving school,” Kaltag replied.
“Do you think they’ll excuse us?”
“Probably, we’ll have to bring our slips.”
“Wait, but Humphrey doesn’t have one.”
“We got to make sure he could be excused.”
They got to school. When they got to school, they went to the office.
“Here’s our slips for driving school.”
“Alright you two are excused.”
“He was with us and we took him and…”...
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Source: A&O2, xNickTheBestx
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Princess is hunting for herself when she Bump into someone.then she hear a growl.as she look up she recognize the wolf.
Princess: Runt?
Runt: Princess?
Claudette: Runt Who is this?
Runt: Claudette , Stinky Mom and dad this is Princess.
Kate: So Youre the one Look after our son aren't ya?
Princess: Yes and you must be Kate.
Kate: Yep that's me.
Humphrey: Hope he doesn't cause any trouble
Princess: Not at All I l like him a lot I've also left the pack.
Humphrey: Well you can stay with us.
Princess: Really?
Kate: Yeah.
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Source: Me !
"No, no, no, NOO! You can't die! I amor you," wailed Humphrey as he wept over Kate's body.

Winston padded up to him, "Humphrey, she's dead, there's nothing we can do."

Humphrey looked at his pack leader, only to see his own sadness reflected in Winston's eyes.

"No, she can't be dead, she can't be dead, no," he cried. Humphrey then looked over at Tony, "This is your fault! If you weren't so greedy, Kate would still be alive! You old fool, Kate gave her life to save yours, and you don't even have the respect to mourn her."

Tony flinched away from the cold fogo in Humphrey's gaze. "Tony, I think you...
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