oi guys!Okay,my friend is composição literária a vampire series(please don't judge it yet)and she doesn't know whether or not to keep writing.I'm gonna post these stories on here and can you please comment on whether or not she should keep writing.BTW,it is supposed to be weird,strange,crazy,stupid,funny,ect.
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Hey,my name is Allie and I'm in high school.I'm 17 and have this weird secret...i'm a vampire.
I can't live a normal life because everytime i get close to a human,i start to smell their blood.I try to resist,but sometimes i can't
I really like this guy,Nick,but I think it would be weird if we were in the middle of a encontro, data and I'm sitting there sucking his blood.Yeah,creepy.
Well,I go to Emmett High School in Aliceville.I live with my mom and stepdad.My mom and dad know my secret,but my stepdad doesn't.
I really wish I could just live normal.I want to have a boyfriend and normal friends.
My best friend is Rosalie.
So mais about Nick.He is handsome,has a face of an angel.Hi is SO hot.
I really like him but I don't think he feels the same way.
Well,I'd better get to school.I walked into my 1st period class,Mr.Cullen's.This is my class with Nick.I took my assento seguinte to him.
The sino rang and I walked to Mrs.Lovato's class.
"I hope I pass this test,"I said to Nick.
"Me too.Hey,do you want to go out sometime?"I heard him say.
"Are you talking to me?"I asked him.
"Yeah,what about Friday?"
"Umm"Oh,no.I can't.I could kill him."Sorry,I've got plans."
"Oh,O.K. I don't mind being rejected."
"Oh,no.That's not it.Rosalie and I are gonna have a G.N.O."I turned around and worked on the test.
The seguinte day,me and rosalie saw twilight.I couldn't take my mind off of nick.
Maybe I could just try to go out with him.If it didn't work out,I wouldn't try again.
When I got home,I called him."So,how about that date?"
"Oh,how about tommorrow?I'll pick you up at seven.We'll eat at taco Bella's."He got off the phone and probably started working on his abs.He is so SPICY.
So the seguinte night,we were eating at taco Bella's.He gave me a present.It was a dog.He was as white as Casper the Ghost,so I named him Jasper.he was so cute!
When I took Jasper início he WENT on my bed.I don't use it anyways.Since I'm a vampire and all.
I called Nick the seguinte day.He was crabby.Said something about getting comida poisining."Worst sushi tacos ever,"He mumbled.
Later,Rosalie came over to my house to watch a movie.Then out of nowhere I SMELLED it.The blood.It smeled so good.
So it happened.I bit her.I had to taste it.She screamed but I couldn't stop.
Then,all my nightmares came true.Nick walked in"AAAAUUUUUUUUUGGGGGHHHHH!!!"He pulled me off.
Nick took Rosalie to the hospital.They said she would be fine.I hope so.
He came back and said,"So that's why you didn't want to go out."
"Yes,please don't tell anyone.Though I'd rather tell EVERYONE my secret to have a chance with you."
"I won't tell.I told the doctor she hit her head on a hammer."
"They believed you?"
"Yep,and I like you,too."
I smiled."Come on.I need to show you something."I took him to my room.
He looked around."Umm,Jasper took a dump on your bed."
"I know I don't sleep,anyway.
"Right.I'm still getting used to having a vampire for a girl friend."He said,ever so casually.
"Girl friend?!?!?"
"Oh,so you don't want to be my girl friend?That's fine.There's always Taylor.She's hot."
"Well,Zack is spicier than you"We both laughed.
We went to see a movie the seguinte weekend.I thought Nick was going to kiss me but he didn't.Boo-Hoo.But he did kiss me when he dropped me off at my house...on the cheek,but it counts.I think we're gonna have a good relationship.
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Hey,my name is Allie and I'm in high school.I'm 17 and have this weird secret...i'm a vampire.
I can't live a normal life because everytime i get close to a human,i start to smell their blood.I try to resist,but sometimes i can't
I really like this guy,Nick,but I think it would be weird if we were in the middle of a encontro, data and I'm sitting there sucking his blood.Yeah,creepy.
Well,I go to Emmett High School in Aliceville.I live with my mom and stepdad.My mom and dad know my secret,but my stepdad doesn't.
I really wish I could just live normal.I want to have a boyfriend and normal friends.
My best friend is Rosalie.
So mais about Nick.He is handsome,has a face of an angel.Hi is SO hot.
I really like him but I don't think he feels the same way.
Well,I'd better get to school.I walked into my 1st period class,Mr.Cullen's.This is my class with Nick.I took my assento seguinte to him.
The sino rang and I walked to Mrs.Lovato's class.
"I hope I pass this test,"I said to Nick.
"Me too.Hey,do you want to go out sometime?"I heard him say.
"Are you talking to me?"I asked him.
"Yeah,what about Friday?"
"Umm"Oh,no.I can't.I could kill him."Sorry,I've got plans."
"Oh,O.K. I don't mind being rejected."
"Oh,no.That's not it.Rosalie and I are gonna have a G.N.O."I turned around and worked on the test.
The seguinte day,me and rosalie saw twilight.I couldn't take my mind off of nick.
Maybe I could just try to go out with him.If it didn't work out,I wouldn't try again.
When I got home,I called him."So,how about that date?"
"Oh,how about tommorrow?I'll pick you up at seven.We'll eat at taco Bella's."He got off the phone and probably started working on his abs.He is so SPICY.
So the seguinte night,we were eating at taco Bella's.He gave me a present.It was a dog.He was as white as Casper the Ghost,so I named him Jasper.he was so cute!
When I took Jasper início he WENT on my bed.I don't use it anyways.Since I'm a vampire and all.
I called Nick the seguinte day.He was crabby.Said something about getting comida poisining."Worst sushi tacos ever,"He mumbled.
Later,Rosalie came over to my house to watch a movie.Then out of nowhere I SMELLED it.The blood.It smeled so good.
So it happened.I bit her.I had to taste it.She screamed but I couldn't stop.
Then,all my nightmares came true.Nick walked in"AAAAUUUUUUUUUGGGGGHHHHH!!!"He pulled me off.
Nick took Rosalie to the hospital.They said she would be fine.I hope so.
He came back and said,"So that's why you didn't want to go out."
"Yes,please don't tell anyone.Though I'd rather tell EVERYONE my secret to have a chance with you."
"I won't tell.I told the doctor she hit her head on a hammer."
"They believed you?"
"Yep,and I like you,too."
I smiled."Come on.I need to show you something."I took him to my room.
He looked around."Umm,Jasper took a dump on your bed."
"I know I don't sleep,anyway.
"Right.I'm still getting used to having a vampire for a girl friend."He said,ever so casually.
"Girl friend?!?!?"
"Oh,so you don't want to be my girl friend?That's fine.There's always Taylor.She's hot."
"Well,Zack is spicier than you"We both laughed.
We went to see a movie the seguinte weekend.I thought Nick was going to kiss me but he didn't.Boo-Hoo.But he did kiss me when he dropped me off at my house...on the cheek,but it counts.I think we're gonna have a good relationship.
Author's Note: "Look, now I am going to tell you a story of the life of Rosemary Vega a.k.a me."
I am 11 years old.
My birthday is on March 25.
I am very talented at composição literária stories, cantar like famous people (example: Shakira, Selena Gomez, Demi Lovato and Lady Gaga) I amor to act!
When I grow up I want to be singer or a voice actress.
I am interested in estrela Wars, Pokemon, Everybody Hates Chris and George Lopez.
My favorito pokemon are: Jirachi, Roserade, Mismagious and Meganium.
I was born in Wilson, North Carolina.
Thank you for giving me your time to read this article! :D
I am 11 years old.
My birthday is on March 25.
I am very talented at composição literária stories, cantar like famous people (example: Shakira, Selena Gomez, Demi Lovato and Lady Gaga) I amor to act!
When I grow up I want to be singer or a voice actress.
I am interested in estrela Wars, Pokemon, Everybody Hates Chris and George Lopez.
My favorito pokemon are: Jirachi, Roserade, Mismagious and Meganium.
I was born in Wilson, North Carolina.
Thank you for giving me your time to read this article! :D
"Overall, I can say that I do love him.."<3
Alone!
There once was a girl who biked and ran
with her best friend who had a bright laranja tan
But then one dia she when biking alone
and thats when she fell along way from home.
She lay still on the ground
not makeing a sound,and thats when she found
that she could not talk
let alone walk
As she slowly made her way home
she wished that she had a phone
so she could call for help
insted of put up with the pain that made her yelp.
She pushed her bike down the dusty track
with a sore haed and an acking back
Then she came to the place where her and her best friend met
just as the sun was begining to set
The seguinte dia at school she was no where in sight
which gave her best frined a very big fright
but she was a início tucked up in bed
with a sore leg and an acking head
Thats when she remebered what her best friend had said
about not going out bikeing alone
along way from home.
What do you think?(I think it is very bad) and sorry of the spelling.
There once was a girl who biked and ran
with her best friend who had a bright laranja tan
But then one dia she when biking alone
and thats when she fell along way from home.
She lay still on the ground
not makeing a sound,and thats when she found
that she could not talk
let alone walk
As she slowly made her way home
she wished that she had a phone
so she could call for help
insted of put up with the pain that made her yelp.
She pushed her bike down the dusty track
with a sore haed and an acking back
Then she came to the place where her and her best friend met
just as the sun was begining to set
The seguinte dia at school she was no where in sight
which gave her best frined a very big fright
but she was a início tucked up in bed
with a sore leg and an acking head
Thats when she remebered what her best friend had said
about not going out bikeing alone
along way from home.
What do you think?(I think it is very bad) and sorry of the spelling.
You
It's the middle of the night,
And I can't sleep
Your face, planted with a smile
Are the only things I see
Your voice calling my name
Is the only thing I hear
I can feel your hand rubbing my back
Hearing you whisper ''good night''
I jump and look around,
And soon realize you are not there
I sob, tightly holding the gift you once gave me
It's right here, on my bed, in perfect condition.
30 minutos later, I wipe my face and go back to sleep…
I wake up once again
And the cycle starts all over again…
It's the middle of the night,
And I can't sleep
Your face, planted with a smile
Are the only things I see
Your voice calling my name
Is the only thing I hear
I can feel your hand rubbing my back
Hearing you whisper ''good night''
I jump and look around,
And soon realize you are not there
I sob, tightly holding the gift you once gave me
It's right here, on my bed, in perfect condition.
30 minutos later, I wipe my face and go back to sleep…
I wake up once again
And the cycle starts all over again…
your mistakes don't define you, now. they don't tell you who you're not, or who you can never be. what's it take to get you to say you'll try? you've got to live this life like it's the only one you've got. what would you say, what would you do, if this was your last day? so, you found out today that life's not the same. not quite as good as yesterday.
and, yes, i know it hurts & i know your pain, but u never gave up this easily befor. such a beautiful thing to just throw away. i think you need to know that, of all the as cores that you shine, this is surely not your best, it's really not your style. you should think about what you do, befor you do it, over and over again. i know you feel alone, that know one can figure you out, but you sould know that we just amor to see you smile.i know you feel like you're lost, feel like you've drifted way to far away, but we can help you come back.
and, yes, i know it hurts & i know your pain, but u never gave up this easily befor. such a beautiful thing to just throw away. i think you need to know that, of all the as cores that you shine, this is surely not your best, it's really not your style. you should think about what you do, befor you do it, over and over again. i know you feel alone, that know one can figure you out, but you sould know that we just amor to see you smile.i know you feel like you're lost, feel like you've drifted way to far away, but we can help you come back.
Example of the Maiden
