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chapter (1)

in 1980 ,the national museum in Vancouver -Canada were received many visitors, everyone was excited for the open of the room 780 ,the room have the old legend of the evil witch dead body
after three days every single person get into that room killed
three hundred person killed ,children ,parents ,teens
but the thing that drive the police crazy is that they found the bodies without blood and there's wasn't any blood in the crime scene
the government couldn't find anything that gather the victims with each other besides that all of them get into room780 in the national museum ,the government asked the owner to close that room and never open it again


in 2008:
____________
the museum couldn't receive visitors as much as it was before because of what happened in 1980

one dia three student were visiting that museum ,there was only 15or 20 visitor
the student were standing near the room (bella ,john and carrie)
the keeper yelled "hey stay away from this room "
carrie "why?"
the keeper :"cause this room haunted por the evil spirit of the most evil witch you could ever imagine"
the manger called the keeper
the keeper "look at me all of you ,don't get to that room or be close to it "

carrie:"did you hear that guys ,stay away from the room till the old man go away"

the student get into the room
it was big ,there wasn't any window ,just a weird words like witches spells ,and in the middle of the room there was esquife, bier

john" girls I feel there's something weird moving in my stomach"
carrie:"very funny john ,it's just the fart in your stomach"
they were searching and staring in every single inch in that room

bella "guys please let's get out of here ,I have a bad feeling for getting in this room"
john" chill out bella don't tell me that you believe that 100 years old keeper "
carrie "oh come on bella how old are you ,have some fun people dreaming to get into this room"
bella" I know ,but I think that we should go before the keeper came and shouting on us "
john "bella don't ruined the fun"
carrie "ok, bella is right ,we should go before the keeper came ,so let's take a couple of pictures and get out from here"

in the seguinte dia ,after school ,carrie and john were sitting beyond a árvore talking ,bella was wearing a mystical hat on her head and sweater , when she was near carrie and john she walked fast and said "hey guys "then she ran away
john" what's wrong with bella?"
carrie" why she wearing the winter clothes in summer?"
john "come on"
carrie "where?"
john" to bella's house "
carrie "ok"


carrie knock bella's house door ,her mother answered "who is it?"
carrie"it's john and carrie ,we're bella's friends ,we came here to visit her"
carrie and john get into the house ,john knock bella's room door "bella open the door"
bella "just a second" then she opened the door
the room was dark ,bella closed the window in her room
john" bella what's going on?"
bella "nothing ,what do you mean ,oh please set down"
carrie and john set down ,carrie "what john meant is that you're not normal today ,you didn't speak with us in the school ,you're wearing the winter clothes in summer ,what's going on?"
bella" I don't feel good today ,maybe I need to see a doctor"
john "oh come on bella ,what's the problem ,is that because of your father?"
bella" what are you trying to say?"
carrie "we know that your father was taunts you and you dress the winter clothes to hide your wounds "
bella" no it's not dad"
john" then what is it?"
bella ",ok ,If I said would you promise to not tell anyone and not make fun of me"
carrie" bel"
bella "ok, yesterday I had a nightmare that I was drowning in the sea ,and I was bleeding from every part of my body ,but the weird thing that I woke up and there was water under me ,and I was and the blood covered my clothes but the cama was clean from my blood"
carrie" ok ,that's very funny bella ,tell me what the real deal"
bella "I'm not kidding guys ,you have to believe me ,there's something wrong with me "
carrie "oh ,come on bella there's nothing wrong with you ,maybe you just need to see the doctor"
bella" right ,I'm going with my mother to the doctor now ,so If you excuse me "
john "ok will see you later"

after three days ,john and carrie can't find bella in the school ,so they came to check bella again in her house
when they were near the house ,a neighbor came and saw carrie and john ,he told them" don't bother yourself ,the family aren't here"
john" then where did they go?"
the neighbor "they went to bury their daughter in their city ,she died from 15 hours atrás ,poor girl"
carrie" what are you talking about bella is dead"
the neighbor "yea , her parents found her dead in her cama , no one saw her after she died , well have a good dia "
carrie look at john scared and asked him "bella is dead ,oh my god ,bella "she was crying
john" let's go início carrie"

after a couple days ,in the school ,john looked at carrie
and asked her "carrie ,what's wrong with me?"
carrie" what do you mean?"
john "I can't sleep ,it's been days and I can't sleep "
carrie" me too, maybe that because of bella's death"
john" maybe ,carrie do you remember what bella said about her dream"
carrie" no I don't ,she was talking like a freak I couldn't understand anything "
john "me too ,so I'll see you later"
carrie" ok"

the school bells are ringing ,carrie walked início alone ,she saw a big black dog looking at her ,the dog was angry ,so he attack carrie ,carrie ran away screaming "help me please" but no one helped her ,she hide in a restaurant ,and told the owner "sir please there's an angry big dog attacking me ,would you please call the animais controlling ,the owner didn't answer her ,carrie "sir please ,this is a life or death problem"
a man pass her and cruz her
carrie tried to touch a cup but she couldn't ,her hand cruz the cup. she was unseen ,she felt scared, the dog disappeared , so carrie ran over john's house
carrie told john about what happened to her ,john happened to him the same thing
carrie "that's impossible"
john "I think bella's death affecting on us"
carrie" john I'm not kidding ,there's something strange "
john" like what? "
carrie "I don't know ,but we're not fine ,I think bella's death has something to do with what we saw"
john "what do you mean?"
carrie "bella's dream ,I want to remember it but I can't ,by the way why did you asked me last time about her dream?"
john" cause I saw a weird dream too"
carrie" what did you see?"
john "I saw myself falling from a mountain ,and I were bleeding from every single part of my body"
carrie"ohh my god ,now I remember "
john " remember what?"
carrie "bella's dream ,she saw herself drowning in the sea and she was bleeding too"
john "do you think that getting into that room has something to do with what happening to us "
carrie "I don't know ,I don't believe in these things but por what we saw I do believe it"
john "then let's go to the museum maybe we can find something there"
carrie" I'll not get into that room again"
john" we're not going to that room ,we will just collect some information about what's in that room"
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