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Sorry this is so long and confusing! I promise the seguinte part will be mais exciting! :)

I never realized how much it hurt to be shot. Who would believe that that was the least of my worries? I certainly didn’t, so as I was screaming my head off, all people from around the school came into the band hall to see who was screaming. I suppose they would be a bit disappointed that someone was just shot and no one had gone crazy, which would have been equally entertaining, but there was tension in the room. Kids stood awkwardly around, not knowing what to do. People that had crowded around me earlier and that had pressed the jaqueta into my side were now standing a couple feet away from me, not sure of what to do.
    Aaron was at the crowd’s edge, looking at me with fear in his eyes. I gave him such a strained smile, it hurt. He smiled worriedly back, and at that moment, I realized I liked him. Bullshit to those kids who thought he was gay. Mr. Hanson ran over to me.
    “How do you feel?” He asked, not sure of what to do. The assistant band director, Mrs. Walker, had called an ambulance.
    “Like I’ve just been shot,” I sardonically replied, glaring at him. I was just shot; I feel as happy as can be. I gasped in pain again, and I felt blood trickle onto my fingers through the jaqueta someone had given me. Mr. Hanson looked around once again, assessing the situation, and then he scooped me into his arms.
    My face turned a bright red. This was so embarrassing; my band director was picking me up. I was so sure he was going to complain about me being heavy, but he remained silent. I rested the lump of fat that was bulging from his stomach.
    “Ohhh,” I moaned, not from pain but from embarrassment. Being manhandled por your band director and getting shot in the same day; I guess today was a dia for firsts.
    Mr. Hanson kicked open the door and we stepped outside. There was a bench a couple of feet away, so I struggled to get out the words,
    “Can you set me down on the bench?” Honestly, I preferred to die on the bench rather than in his arms. He complied and set me down. I pressed the drenched jaqueta harder onto my stomach and moaned.
    “Shit!” I yelped, “This fucking hurts,” usually, I’m not such an avid swearer. Being shot is one of those rare moments that breaks my rule.
    “I know,” Mr. Hanson replied, sitting on the bench seguinte to me. My eyes widened in fear and shock. How the hell did he know? Was he a sniper? Was he in a war? As curious as I was, I kept those perguntas to myself.
    “You know that was really selfless of you,” Mr. Hanson complimented. I shook my head. I was shot, lying on a bench, and we were having this conversation.
    “Yeah, well, my mom and dad think I’m a selfish bitch,” I said back, kicking the chair and receiving a sharp flash of pain in my foot. At least it made the bullet’s wound not as painful.
    Some kids had poked their heads outside, and Mrs. Walker’s loud piercing bird-like voice brought them back inside.
    “Tell them I’m sorry,” I grunted.
    “You’ll survive,” Mr. Hanson insisted.
    “I know,” Just in case I went into a coma or something. “When is this goddamn ambulância going to get here?” I shouted to nobody, and, as if on cue, an ambulância pulled up. “Finally,” I muttered under my breath as two men jumped out of the car. One had messy brown hair that looked like a mouse. He was considerably cute, while the other had brown spiky hair. I liked spiky hair boy.
    They sprinted over to me and picked me up. They carried me to the back of the ambulância and set me down on the chair.
    “Sweetie, we need to remove the bullet here, a hospital is too far away,” with that, rato Boy took out a needle and drove it into my skin. All that pain and hurt and fear seemed to numb away. I giggled.
    Mr. Hanson and Spike Boy held me down as rato Boy peeled away my camisa and the jacket. He took out some tweezers and gently removed the bullet. He plopped it in a small tray.
    “Damnit!” I yelled, kicking against the chair. I struggled out of Mr. Hanson and Spike Boy’s grip, but they just pushed against me harder. rato Boy stitched me up; all the while I was cussing my head off. I had the faint remembrance my mother would kill me if she heard me swearing like this, but I didn’t care.
    Finally, they had finished. They gave me an IV drip with fluids.
    “We’re going to take you to the hospital now,” Spike Boy said. The car started up and the two ER workers were about to close the doors when a woman in an FBI vest stepped in the door’s path. She had a gun at ready.
    “Stop! Mike Peachson and David Tosdon, you’re both under arrest for medical fraud and illegal practice. Take the IV drip out of the girl and come forth to receive your handcuffs. rato Boy ran off.
    “Mike get back here!” the FBI woman said, so I knew he was rato Boy, and David must be Spike Boy. Mike was already across the parking lot, so the woman took aim and fired her gun. The bullet whipped off of a car and hit the ground. Mr. Hanson walked up to the FBI woman and took away the gun. “Sir!” She protested, but Mr. Hanson took the gun, aimed and fired. Mike fell to the ground.
    Mr. Hanson turned around and aimed the gun at David. He threw his hands up in the air in surrender.
    “Lori Megan Vandana! Step away from the furgão, van and kick your gun towards me!” a male voice sounded from around the door, and a police officer walked up seguinte to her. He also had a gun at ready. Lori, the FBI woman, look confusedly at him.
    “Who the hell are you?” she asked. My head was starting to swim.
    “You were suspended from his case, if I do recall correctly,” he said, taking out his handcuffs.
    “Vandana?” another male voice said, and another police officer stepped into view. This one looked directly like the first officer, except he had a scar over his eye.
    “Holdom?” Lori asked. “Tony Holdom? Weren’t you fired? And who the hell is that?” Lori beckoned towards the first man, who looked scared. His gun was shaking.
    “Holy shit,” breathed Tony, grabbing his gun from the holster. The first man began to run, but before Tony could click the gun off of safety, Mr. Hanson had fired the man to the ground. Tony jogged over to the man and began to put handcuffs over him. “This is Sean McCane, the escaped convict we’ve been looking for.” He grabbed Sean up and pulled him to his feet.
    Just then, a helicopter flew overhead, and a S.W.A.T. truck roared into the parking lot. Tons of men jumped out and spotted Tony.
    “It’s the convict! Get him! He’s arrested a police officer!” a S.W.A.T. person said, and a group of men ran towards Tony.
    “No no!” Tony and Lori stepped forward. “I’m Tony!” Tony shouted. “That’s the convict,” he pointed towards Sean.. The S.W.A.T. team didn’t listen to him. Instead they tackled Tony. Some men broke off from the pile and unarrested Sean.
    Sean ran towards the empty S.W.A.T. truck and drove it away. My head was definitely hurting. What the hell had just happened? The S.W.A.T. team got off of Tony, and realizing they had tackled the wrong guy, they called in for reinforcements to find the convict.
    Mike Peachson, who was clutching his shot shoulder, walked up to the furgão, van and jumped inside. David began to tent to his wounds. Lori looked around at the mess of S.W.A.T. workers. She put two fingers in her mouth and whistled. The men stopped talking and they looked at her.
    “We need to arrest Mike Peachson and David Tosdon. They’ve been illegally treating patients,” Lori said.
    “Wait a damn second,” a S.W.A.T. worker yelled out. “How should we know you aren’t lying?” Lori sighed, and Tony jumped in the back of the truck so he towered everyone.
    “Look,” Tony began. “She’s right. The police have been working with the FBI to solve the case. She’s telling the truth. But now you dickheads have let Sean McCane, the deadly convict, get away. Congratulations,” Tony made a mover towards David and Mike. “David, Mike, step away from the girl,” Tony cautiously said. The crowd turned to look at them.
    Mike snatched a scalpel and slit my throat on the side. “I’m not going anywhere without the girl. She’s a liability, and she needs medical treatment. Now you listen to me, or this girl is going to die por the scalpel in my hand,” Mike put the blade on my throat and pressed it into my skin. I felt sticky blood trickle down my neck. I whimpered softly.
    “Fine,” Tony said. He jumped out of the truck. A black SUV drove into the parking lot. A man in a suit jumped out. At once, everyone stood at attention. I bet he was their superior.
    “What the hell is going on here? I’ve had 9 calls from the school. Vandana, Holdom, Peterson, come with me. The rest of you arrest the two medical frauds.” I was right. Tony, Lori, and the S.W.A.T. man who had led the charge stepped forward.
    “We’re coming too!” Mike shouted, pushing me on the stretcher to the ground. I landed with a thud. David followed him and we arrived to the superior. Mike still held the scalpel at my throat. David’s back was pressed to Mike’s back, a gun at ready. The superior briskly nodded, realizing the situation.
    “I’ll come too!” Mr. Hanson shouted and nodded towards the van.
    “Get back to work!” the superior yelled back, and Mr. Hanson walked back into the band hall. Meanwhile, everyone was getting loaded into the SUV. Mike and David pulled me into the back, David’s gun still at ready.
    Once we were loaded, the car began to move.
    “What a shitty day,” I muttered to myself. I was a hostage. I had just been shot. Who were all these people? I was exhausted, so with a sigh, I fell asleep on the stretcher, only having the sound of the car driving to lull me to sleep.
posted by Nesrino
Once upon a time, there was a 15 ano old boy named Will who loved sports as if they were his whole life. From the beginning of his first dia at school, Will tried out for the futebol team and they were amazed how talented this boy was at sports at such a young age. When Will became 12 years of age, he had won the scool over 20 awards for each soccer, basquetebol, basquete and tênis competition they entered. He has also become very fit and well-built from all his exercising and sports, and seems to think that being fit was one of the most important things a person should accomplish in life. Will has always...
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posted by mars15
I need you
from the first moment i saw you
I need you
because you're the air i breathe
I need you
because you're the water i drink
I need you
because just the thought of seeing you makes me want to get out of bed
I need you
because you can with just one smile make my whole world starts to turning again
I need you
because you make me wake up from my the most horrible nightmare without fear
I need you
because you can give me hope when i don't have one
I need you
because even if I'm at the bottom,you're always there to help me stand up
I need you
because in this cruel world you keep me alive
I need you
because i know that you'll never give up from me
I need you
because when no one believed in me you were there to stand up for me
I need you
because you're everything for me
But the most important thing why i need you is
because I'll always amor you!


This was in my head so i just thought to write it
posted by nimone
Let's be honest we have all at least once in our lives experienced the misfortune that is the power cut.

The power cut it'self may not be as intolerable depending on the circumstance. If you live in a place where it is sunny and there is a lot to do outside then you don't have much to worry about.
I for one do live in this kind of climate usually. This however was not the case yesterday!

Not only was it the only dia of the week where everything is closed as it was a Sunday, oh no it was also pouring down raining!

I was forced indoors with nothing to do and it was really dark inside due to the...
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posted by irena83
Life,
priceless and important,
gives you the roads
and leaves you choices
of which your luck depends on.


This is your life
and you live it
wrapped por sadness
or happiness.
Who cares?


This is your life,
invisible for others.


You pick the road
and pray that the choice
is right,
but life loves you not,
that's you who amor
the joy of life.


Life,
priceless and important,
gives you choices,
unpredictable events,
grays and hope,
and life is all yours.


But, the pergunta is
will you remain sane
even though your life
is cruel to your dreams,
will you remain sane
even when your life
is dying in your eyes.
posted by irena83
Chapter 5: News

Suddenly, she felt weird.
She went quickly at the bathroom
and laved herself.
She looked pale and was feeling sick.
She closed her eyes and tried to
take a deep breath.
Now she felt little better.
She took a phone and called a neighbor,
telling her that she must see a doctor
and someone should take care of Gwenny.
Joanna said that there were no reason
to be worried about and she would
look after baby.
Dana, thankful and scared the same time,
got dressed quickly and immediately
called a cab.
While she was waiting for a cab,
she was so confused and tense.
The cab came soon.
She barely could...
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their are six technique(originally theirs eight but i only know six)


technigue one:Start with a short,effective sentence(4-5 words max): Her hair shone gold.

technique two:Start with an interesting metaphor or simile: The lobo was like a tornado,changing the lives of all who crossed his path.

technique three:Start with a literary device(ex.onomatopoeia,alliteration,etc):Gobbling Grandma and her grandchild was his plan all along.

technique four:Start with a prepositional phrase: ALong the spooky road to Grandma's house,Red skipped with an air of confidence.

technique five:Start with a riddle and...
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posted by sweetpea92
    Everyday at lunch for all of high school so far I would stand in line and wait to get up to the front to tell the lunch lady that “I need a to-go tray please.” Then once I had gotten my tray, I would scan my lunch card and dash down the hallway to my favorito teacher’s room to cadastrar-se “the lunch bunch” on everyday except Wednesday, and Friday. On those days the beginning of this routine is relatively the same, but instead of heading off to another meeting of the lunch bunch, I would take a detour at the biblioteca to cadastrar-se my friends at our usual table, for either...
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posted by Firewriter
There was once a boy
Who loved a girl
A very distant girl- haunted por her demons that no one else could see
The boy- lonely and afraid of pursuing his passions
The heat of the mid-July sun beating on their backs
On a little dirt road seguinte to a vine-covered wall
That little boy handed the little girl a lima, limão green envelope
Her name printed on that envelope in his fine pen writing

Their cheeks red and hearts pounding
The two continued their days apart
Both afraid their darkness will come over
And destroy what they tried to break
The dia to follow, that little broken girl
Smiling a real smile for the first...
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First Step In composição literária A Screenplay por Richard Walter
video
richard walter
ucla
screenplay
script
writer
author
how to write a screenplay
added by vampiress015
Also very funny, don't you just wish you could do these things yourself?
video
kaleb nation
composição literária
author
bran hambric
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added by HarryPLover
 Surviver of The Thing prequel that is till the end that was the beginning of The Thing 1984
Surviver of The Thing prequel that is till the end that was the beginning of The Thing 1984
How to survive a horror movie apocalypse. por L.R.Talbot
This is a list of things to keep in mind in order to survive a horror movie. Note most of these can be used in a daily life as well.
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1.If there's someone at the door never say whose there
2.never put your back against a door. You never know if someone has enough strength to put a faca through the door plus there's the mail slot to consider.
3.Try to be as quiet as possible especially if they(your attacker or possible attacker) are near by
4.Find a weapon as soon as possible. In my opinion preferably something that could...
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added by axemnas
posted by Ragefulchimp
Vandals and crooks
an aging man, caught like a peixe on a hook
Getting reeled in, he's easy prey
Eyes sag, creating bags, pupils widen, creating paralysis

Confusion and fear
An ailing man, with peixe hooks everywhere
The biggest catch today
Pavement runs red, creating pain, flesh torn, creating animals

Torment and Horror
An aching man, aches no more
The peixe hook rips away
Smiles widen, creating youth, blood drips, creating paralysis
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posted by para-scence
"We've got to tell Mom," I said quickly. "She'll get Matt to actually pay it this time." I hoped I was right. He would, wouldn't he? He couldn't just let his girlfriend suffer. I picked up Auburn, and Sage held my hand as the five of us set out to Matt's house.

It was dark, and I was getting really anxious. During the day, the neighborhood was fine. But during the night... it was frightening. This place turned into a battle ground; shootings everywhere. It hasn't been so bad lately. The cops got rid of most of them. But you could never be too careful.

Matt's house was bigger than ours; it had...
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posted by para-scence
I got home, where Reed was at the cozinha mesa, tabela playing poker with some friends and smoking. I walked up to the mesa, tabela and threw the bag onto the table. His friends all looked at it, gaping. Reed laughed.

"Good job, baby sister!" he said. He took the bag and inspected it. I smiled at his praise. He looked up at me and smiled. "But shouldn't you be at school? If Nikolai finds out he'll bust your head in."

"So don't let him find out," I said like it was an obvious answer. His buddies laughed. Reed shook his head at me, but a smile still played on his lips. He threw the bag back at me.

"Well then,...
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posted by mitchie19
2. B I G D A Y

One, two, three, go! I breathed. My right leg went first up the stairs and then my left leg.
This is it, this is really it. I squealed nervously. “Marhion Angeles Pearson, daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Pearson” the school directress announced. I went up the stage. The audience clapped.
I felt like a estrela on a rise.
I saw Riley on the crowd, my eyes glued to him. Ah! I tripped. The audience gasp some stood up to see if I’m okay some of them laughed and snickered. marreco, drake Cell, the school news anchor video taped my clumsiness, he smiled. I quickly stood up. My cheeks were red, I...
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posted by ChickRiddler
Preface: We were called freaks. Strangers. Mutants. As my claws ripped through the peculiar woman’s skin I thought, “What am I now?” My teeth sunk into her arm. The screech that pierced the air at that moment brought me back to reality, I was human again. I spat the blood out of my mouth and looked around myself. The handsome man was looking at me with terrified eyes.
    “I’m so sorry,” I whispered. Shrinking into myself, I began to run away. The man wouldn’t catch me. But something held me back. I went back to him and reappeared. “Help me.” I wasn’t even sure he heard me I said it so low. Suddenly, my body couldn’t take the pain. There was a buzzing in my ears, a pounding in my head, and spots in my vision. It was then the darkness swallowed me whole.