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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I Wake up. I see nothing but my pale white ceiling, I want to stay here, but then I hear my name. I rush up and go to the door but then I look down and see what I am wearing nothing but my under wear and a white singlet. I get my dressing vestido and put my arms through the sleeves. I walk down the stairs and see my sister, her face is filled with anger I suddenly regret coming down. I stop walking once I reach the bottom of the stairs she walks up to me and smiled. I am confused until I realise that Georgia is here. Georgia is the goddess of music, hundreds of years atrás she was the outcast, her father Mix is not a god, when he first found out he did not approve so Georgia ran away and they haven’t talked since. I looked at her and smile, Georgia has think blond hair and hazel eyes with dark eyeliner. Me and here had always got on, the fact that she was a punk and my name meant princess. “Well, Isn’t it Mrs. Lovey dovey” she said, Georgia being the goddess of música didn’t really have a purpose she just went around the world listening to bands. “Hey Georgia, What are you doing here?” I asked. “I was just in the neighbourhood” She answered in a smug tone. I laughed and hugged her; Georgia and I had been friends for longer than I have even heard the name Liz.

I than looked over at Dawn I had though she was angry but then he face went to that same angry expression. “What’s wrong?” I asked this came out in an annoyed tone. She looked at me and smiled. “Thor and Ethan went out, and we don’t know where” She said. This didn’t shock me they had done this before, the night Thor came into my room and told me that he was doing drugs. I looked at Georgia; I had forgotten she was there. “That’s why you’re here?” I asked. She nodded once I had said his. “But why are you guys worried now” I asked, as soon as I did say this I realised that is was a mistake, Thor didn’t want me to say anything. I looked at Dawn and Georgia their faces were full of confusion. I looked down at my feet. “What?” Dawn said. I was hoping that they wouldn’t have heard me that they were ignoring me like they did every other day. “Nothing” I said in an apologetic tone. I went to open my mouth but I heard a bang, I looked to my left and saw Gloria. Gloria was Georgia’s sister and not only was she the goddess of beauty but she played the part well to with her brown eyes and purple hair and model like body. Gloria walked over and kissed me on the cheek. “How are you, Sade?” She asked in a cheery tone. Once she did ask this she looked around and saw Dawn’s eyes staring her down.

I looked back at Gloria and smiled. “Good, how about you?’ I asked. She turned her head back and me and smiled and winked at me. “Perfect, my beauty has inspired those who need it” She said in a mocking tone. Gloria didn’t think that beauty was a fair thing to be a goddess of she preferred to help people with stuff that is actually important, like amor or Wisdom. Dawn turned her stare in Gloria to me. “What were you talking about before?” she asked, I wanted to tell her but I rather dawn be mad at me than Thor. “Nothing” I lied. I looked at Georgia who was biting her lip to hide her smile at Gloria’s actions. I turned to go sit on the cozinha table, I didn’t realise but Dawn followed and sat seguinte to me. I looked at her and tried to put on a smile but nothing came out. “What has Ethan told you?’ she asked. The words made me angry why could Thor of told me? Why did they all think it was Ethan? “Nothing” This wasn’t a lie. “Fine, what did Thor tell you?’ she asked. I signed; I have to tell her now. I looked at her and smiled this time I was successful. “That night where they got caught at the club, they went somewhere, but I don’t know where, Ethan wouldn’t tell me” I said, I was going to tell her about the drugs, I don’t think that really mattered. “Why wouldn’t Ethan tell you?” She asked, I looked at her and smiled. “For this reason, I would tell” I told her. She turned and looked at Gloria. Gloria cached her gaze and walked over to us.

“What is it?’ She asked. Dawn looked at her and smiled but the smile looked apologetic. “Can you find them?” She asked. I didn’t know what she meant. Gloria looked at me and smiled. “I’ll see what I can do to find your boyfriend” She said with a .light smile. I nearly chocked when she said this, I looked at Dawn she was trying not to smile. “No, No he is not my boyfriend” I informed her. When I said this she gave me a confused look. “But that’s what everyone is saying back home” she said a calm tone. I thought about it all my family members and friends sharing coffee and talking about my amor life. “What are they saying?’ I said. Before Gloria could answer dawn was already talking. “Well come on what can you do?” dawn asked Gloria. Gloria smiled and walked up the stairs. Before I knew it she was back with Thor’s Yellow pendant. She walked over to the mesa, tabela and sat the pendant down in the middle of the table. She closed her eyes and the pendant floated into the air. I wasn’t staring or even thinking about Thor was thinking about Ethan. Last night did he come to say goodbye? No he couldn’t like I said Thor and Ethan had done this before and they came back.

I woke up out of my daze and noticed that all three of them were looking at me and saying my name. “What?” I asked. “Are you ok? You looked upset” Georgia said. I looked at her and smiled, I didn’t want her to worry, and I was fine. “Sorry, I just need to go for a walk” I said.

As soon as I got out of the house I knew where I was going, I had to go find Adam he could make sense of things or he could at least calm me down. I ran out the door. When I got to the park I tried to find him but I saw no one. I walked around until I saw Ethan. I ran over to him and yelled out his name. He turned and saw me, he smiled. “Where have you been?” I asked him in an angry tone. His expression was smug, I looked behind him I didn’t see Thor so they weren’t together in this. “I have been, waiting for you” he answered. His answer confused me. “What are you talking about?” I asked. “I knew you would come here to find him” he said this with pure hate, like Adam wanted to hurt me. I looked at him, he smiled and came closer to me, and his head kept on getting closer to mine. Our foreheads were almost touching but I was mais concentrating on the fact that his lips were inches away from mine. I didn’t want to mover back and before I knew it, our lips were touching.

This kiss was careful; our hands were down por our sides. That was my fault part of me didn’t want to be beijar him, it wanted to be beijar Adam. I pulled away, I was with Adam and I liked Adam. He looked mad but then he calmed himself down. “What?” he asked. I couldn’t understand why he would ask what, I was with Adam and didn’t he have the pleasure of leitura my mind. “Adam” I said, as soon as I said this his face lit up with anger. I signed and looked to the side, I saw a tall boy across from us near a pond looking at us with his dark blue eyes. Adam, I was shocked I went to open my mouth but Adam put his hands up and walked away. I tried to push past Ethan but he wouldn’t let me. “Move” I ordered, but he didn’t do anything he just stood there and smiled. “Why?” He asked, he turned around and say no one. “I amor you” he said. I chocked at his words.”No you don’t’” This sounded mais like a pergunta than a statement. I tried to mover again but he just stopped me like he did before. “Does he?’ “No” I answered it didn’t matter to me either way. I turned around and walked off I could find another way to Adam.

I started to run around the park, I was near the parking lot when I saw Adam getting into his car. I ran over and stopped the door as he went to shut it. He looked up at me, he looked angry and hurt but I couldn’t tell which one he was trying to tell me. “Please let me explain” I pleaded. A tear went down my face but he got up and wiped it away with his thumb. I licked the feel of his hand on my cheek. “Do you amor him?” he asked me. I was getting sick of this question. “No” I answered him. This was true or at least I thought it was. “Then why did you kiss him?” he asked. I didn’t know how to answer. “I don’t know” I said. He looked at me his eyes were filled with worry. “Please, there had got to be a reason, I need a reason not to be mad at you” he said. I couldn’t give him a reason; all I could give him was an answer. “I’m sorry” is aid. I moved my hand away and then he was gone.

I woke up to a blue sky. I didn’t acre to mover I just sat there watching the shy, I heard a knock at my door. I looked over to see Gloria, she came in and sat on my cama her face looked sad. “Get out of bed” She ordered, he voice was not controlling it was apologetic like she was sorry she was saying this. I moaned and shut my eyes, but she pulled them open with her fingers. “Talk to him” she said peering open my eye. I couldn’t I just go up and talk him what I have done was terrible and he needed time. “Ethan’s down stairs” She said curling my hair with her fingers. “What” I said I got up. “He feels terrible and is so sorry” She said with a calm voice. I walked out the door ignoring Gloria.

When I got downstairs I saw my mother and father sitting at the table, I also saw Ethan walking out the door, he obviously knew I was still mad at him, I ran down and hugged my father. He looked at me with surprise. “It’s nice to see you to” he said. I looked at my mother she was standing in front of me. She hugged me tightly. “We have some news, about your case” She said. I let go of her and gave her a confused look. “What news?” I asked. She smiled so it wasn’t something bad. MY father picked up the remote and flicked on the news. It was some murder story. I looked closer and saw the man, I gasped and ran over to the TV, she was dead and now so was he. “Sweetie, this case is something that no goddess or god has come across” she said. I was still standing in front of the TV I turned and looked at my mother, she was smiling, this confused me. “Darling, your pendant is telling you the past” She said, her voice was still calm and sweet. “What do you mean the past?” I asked my voice was husky. “Well you see these two together and four years from your vision they break up and now they’re dead” She answered me. This confused me, if they were dead then how can I bring them together. “Darling fate did this; it was the only way they could be together” She told me. “But how am I meant to bring them together now?” I asked. I walked progressivo, para a frente to the cozinha table. My father pattered my head. “We can’t tell you that only your pendant can” He answered me. I got up and went up stairs.

Gloria was still sitting on my cama when I came in, I ignored the fact that she was there, I went to get my pendant off the mesa, tabela but it wasn’t there, Adam. I remembered that Adam and I were together he had taken my pendant, I signed. “What is it?’ Gloria asked. I looked at her; she was playing with her purple hair. “Can you help me find a place” I asked her. She got up and smiled. I had asked her this because of what Dawn had said the other day, apparently Gloria could find things. “Yes, but I will need something of Adam’s” These words shocked me, How did she know? “How did you?” I asked. She smiled as I said this. “I know things” She said and put her hand out, at first I didn’t know what I had of Adam’s but then I remembered the reason he had my pendant. I got it out of my bag and placed it in her hand. She closed her eyes and the pendant flew up in the air, she smiled. “He’s cute” She said, as she said this she opened one of her eyes and winked at me, this made me blush. The pendant then drops on my cama and she then opens her eyes. “He is in the park” She said. My mouth fell open. “How did you do that?” I asked. She smiled. “My mother is the goddess of healing; it helps when you know where your victim is. And she taught it to me” She answered.

When I arrived at the Park I noticed that practically no one was there, the first thing I saw was Adam. He was sitting at a bench, his arms were crossed. I thought about going back and doing this at school where people would be around. I walked over to him; I kept stopping and going to turn back but then all I have to remember is I need that pendant. I finally reach him, he has no idea that I am there until I say something. “Hey” I said, he doesn’t even look over at me he just nods. I don’t know whether to walk away or to sit down, but I remember that I need to do this. I walk closer and sit down seguinte to him, like before he doesn’t look at me. “I need my pendant” I tell him. This time he looks at me. “Me too” he says, dig into my pocket and get it out. “Here” I say holding it out to him. He looks at it and takes it from my hand. He then puts his hand in his pocket and pulls my pendant. I look at it and take it, but there’s something different, the colour its red like it used to be. I look up and see no one, Adam was gone, I look behind me and see no one, and it was just me alone.

I get início and walk straight up to my bedroom. I sat on my cama and got out my pendant, I closed my eyes and then the pendant flew up in the air just like it did with Gloria. But his time I saw the girl walking in a rua she was talking tom people, no not talking yelling and waving her hands in their faces, this wasn’t in the past, this was now. I opened my eyes a tear was coming down I wiped it away. I needed to get them together, dead or alive they were soul mates.

I walked downstairs and sat seguinte to Gloria on the couch. “I need your help” I said. She smiled at me and laughed. “Let me guess, you need help finding someone” she guessed. I looked at her and joined in on the laughter. “Yep, but this persons not alive their dead” I said. I didn’t’ think this would shock her and I was right, nothing really seemed to shock Gloria. “Ok” She said and got up. I smiled and then we both started walking to my room. Gloria walked in and sat on my bed, she was smiling. “Now I’ll need something of hers like I did with Adam” She said. I looked around the room, the closer thing I had of hers. I picked it off the mesa, tabela and handed it to her. “Great, this will do fine” She said. She closed her eyes but before she could go on we heard a scream. Gloria opened her eyes and got up; we both knew it was Dawn. I followed when she walked out the door. We both entered Dawn’s room; she was clutching her pendant in her hands and crying. I ran to her side, she looked up at me. “Dawn, what is it?” I asked she dropped her pendant. “I was looking at my pendant and I saw something......I’m sorry” she sobbed. I smiled I was positive she was just overreacting. “What...what is it?” I asked. “It’s Adam.....he’s dead” She sobbed. I pushed her off me. I couldn’t believe what she had just said. “No.....I saw him today” I didn’t realise, but I had just fell on the floor. Gloria ran to my side. “Come on it is okay” She whispered in my ear. I was shaking a tear ran down my cheek. “No!” I screamed, pushing Gloria off me. I got on my feet. I looked over at cisne she was still crying, I turned and walked out. I ran down the stairs. I could only see Thor and Ethan sitting on the couch, I fell once I reached the bottom of the stairs. Thor ran to me. “What’s wrong?’ he asked. I looked up at him and started to cry. “Adam.......gone.......dead” Saying this made it a lot worse, it was true, and he was gone. I looked back at Thor Ethan was now por his side. I closed my eyes and started to chant. “He’s dead....he’s dead....He’s dead” I said. I opened my eyes and then I saw that I was in Ethan’s arms. “It is okay” he whispered in my ear like he did that night.
 Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture por Gold Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)
Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture by Gold Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)
Emmanuel Ray, Britain’s Fashion ícone of The ano 2011 (Fashions Finest Awards), successfully opened Fashion Week Gibraltar on 18 April 2012 at the Casemates Gallery in Gibraltar.
London – In front of an excited crowd Emmanuel Raygave a short speech thanking everyone who came to the opening, his publicist David J Mann, director ofHighmore PR, and Fashion Week Gibraltar’s organiser and fashion designer Reene Weston. He then proceeded to cut the red ribbon allowing everyone to start their Fashion Week experience.
Emmanuel had this to say about the opening,
“What an amazing experience it was....
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If i get enough comments i will extend it.

It was damp, smelled of earth and pine, I heard leaves rustle, twigs snap as animais scurried in the árvore tops. I wasn't supposed to be here, this wasn't my room, my bed. I was supposed to me in por cottage on eagle lake. I was supposed to be asleep, topo, início bunk with my younger brother Elliot on the bottom. I was supposed to be smelling fabric softener and hear the soft snore from little Elli, feel the heat of my cat sleeping on my chest. I opened my eyes and I could see the sky, black with soft twinkle of a million estrela and the florescent glow of the moon....
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posted by precious211
“Before we leave I must warn you. We are now entering alien territory, so be careful and considerate to you’re new surroundings. One stupid mistake can get you, and everyone around you killed.”

The safety instructor’s voice boomed across the large, air conditioned spaceship. It sounded oddly cheerful for someone who had just told them that they could all die.
Everyone tried to see where her line of vision was pointing towards. It was aimed toward the windows.
Kendra glanced through them and, and gulped. They were about four thousand feet above sea level, and the o espaço craft had just...
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Using correct grammar and sentence structure is vital if you want to convey your thoughts accurately. You also want your composição literária to hold the reader's attention. Nothing is mais annoying than leitura a manuscript littered with grammatical errors. The error of composição literária sentence fragments is a common error. Sentence fragments are incomplete sentences that don't express a complete thought.

tips:
1


Have a subject for every verb. The subject is the actor in the sentence. The verb is the action taken in a sentence.

2


Make sure all of your dependent clauses have a completing thought. An independent...
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posted by cutiegirl01
(Please tell me your opinion on my story and be truthful please!)

    “Erik get down here now!” My father yelled.
    “I’m coming, I’m coming!” I hurried down the stairs. I learned in the last 17 years I’ve been alive, that if my dad calls me I need to be down fast…or else…
    I got down the stairs, and went into the living room where he always sat on his days off. “Yes, dad? What can I get you?”
    My mother smiled up at me from her book, “You are such a good son, Erik-“
    My...
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posted by NormalcyIsDead
Boom boom clap
Bounce your head, snap
To the classic, to the rap


Step ball change
Basic with a buck
Pleay, tour jete
Bounce your head to the rock


One two three,
Two two three,
Count along with your head
Mosh with the beat


Hop shuffle hop back
Twirl your arms, bend your back
Do the thingamajiggie
Wear out your taps

Breathe it in, breathe it out
Reach for the sky, dance on the ground
Flitter here, gallop there
Lose yourself anywhere

Flow with the music
Feel it in your veins
As you bounce your head, snap
Boom boom clap
posted by dragonwriter
As light fades the brightest of souls can even be turned to do the darkest of things. As time time pushes progressivo, para a frente the mind and body of an individual changes for either good or bad. the decisions they make and the things they do will stick with them forever. I was told this many years atrás por a wise old man that fortold my future. He said "the one with the dragon soul is not alone in the world he knows." After being told this it left me nothing but confused but i had a feeling that it wouldn't be the last time i heard of it.
posted by StarsGoBlue
God's lost Child 
Chapter 2: An Indefinite Prisoner Of War 

"Unbelievable! Un-fucking-believable."
A nerdy blonde cussed as he stormed  through the upper deck of Sovereign, his hands raised above his head in protest. 
"Oh, let's put Baird in charge of the rookie! Since he's busy anyway. Let's just give him mais shit to do, that's easier on us!"
He continued to fume violently as Nicole followed a seguro distance behind. The rest of Delta Squad had dispersed to their cabins to change into their night attire. Baird had been chosen to school the rookie, thanks to his big mouth.  After a bit of sighing...
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In this series of guides, I'll be showing you the best techniques for composição literária your story. These are tried-and-true techniques, and they work.
First up: characters. Every story has characters. We all know that. But what you may not realize is that some portions of a character need not be mentioned. Why spend three pages on your character's dimples if they have nothing to do with the plot? In order to keep your readers hooked, you have to yourself to things that are involved with the plot.
Before you decide on a plot, you should get to know each of your characters. After all, you're telling...
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posted by PhoenixRoyale
This is another poem that I have written. It was inspired por some comments about stuffed animals/plushies on youtube being people's friends. Enjoy.
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The Stuffed Animal.
To some, they are stupid.
They are useless.
They are disgusting little balls of fluff.

Those people think that it's necessary
to pick on the innocence of others
for having a collection of their own.
They poke fun, they tease, they even insult.

They target that person's age.
Sometimes even their gender.
They think they need to grow up.
They think these fluffy plushies are meant for babies.

But to those innocent people,
the ones who are quite...
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posted by shenelopefan
La parte prohibida del parque

"La depresión es la que guía, la alegría es la que llega"

En la ciudad dónde yo vivía de niña, había un parque en dónde siempre pasaba las tardes con mis amigos. Éramos un grupito de niñas y niños que nos juntábamos a jugar en ronda, cantábamos canciones que no tenían sentido (casi nuestro propio idioma, de hecho) y recorríamos todo el parque jugando a las escondidillas.

Bueno, no todo el parque porque había una a la que los adultos no les gustaba que vayamos. Era un sector tan lleno de árboles que, desde afuera parecía una selva en medio de un parque...
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The room is silent, as always. Nothing can be heard, aside from the soft rasp of pencil on paper. Words take form, joining various thoughts into one whole. On the outside, nothing is different from the average writer. To find what sets me apart, we must look deeper than the surface.
Inside my mind, imagens and ideas race about, sometimes colliding, sometimes not. This whirlwind is composed of everything I know, read, seen, heard, or thought of. It is here that my greatest works begin to form.
To show how thw whiirlwind works, let us have an example. During practice for spring track, I noticed...
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posted by Lord_Anubis
If you mates like it, comment, I'll make mais if anyone notices it =3

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''Oi, you guys! What are you doin'?!'' screamed a brown haired boy from the street.
''Mind your own business and go back under your momma's skirt, or you'll get some too!'' replied the tallest boy on playground, probably the leader of the rest 4 boys.
5 of them were teasing one small boy, taking away from him candies and ruining his game on playground. The brown haired boy frowned with his black eyes and started walking towards them.
''You scum really have guts! 5 tall cachorros on 1 small...
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posted by dragonsmemory
The Eden Chronicles is the fantasia series I am currently working on. As the series is in progress, I decided to add a club here, allowing you, Reader, to tell me your thoughts.
In composição literária the series, I decided to document the entire history of Eden. I called this place Eden because it is where the spirits of dead animais and plants are taken. No humanspirit has ever been pure enough to come here. Eden is a true paradise.
The first book, A Little Bit mais Than Love, takes place toward the end of Eden's history. Later in the series, I hope to explain the past. Once I get caught up, I will then...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 3: Here It Goes Again.
Roxana woke up one night to hear a loud howl outside her window, she slided herself out of cama with her covers wrapped around her, she walked toward the window and saw a somewhat a large white lobo outside, watching her then it turned its head to hear other lobos howling, the white lobo runs off to follow the howl, Roxana felt like she knew that lobo for a long time, Roxana walked back to her cama and lies down, but she couldn't sleep, she kept tossing and turning but she couldn't sleep, she sat up, grab her wallet and pull out a fotografia of a beautiful, pale-skinned,...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 1: Don't Change Me.
A young and beautiful succubus named Roxana opened her green eyes as she sees the sun flooded her dark room with lights from her windows, she sat up in her twin bed, the mattress was tan and her covers were chocolate brown color, she pulled herself out of the cama and throws on her black tank top, then she slipped on her jeans on her long and beautiful legs, Roxana then walked in her bathroom and brushed her long red hair slowly as she stares at herself in the mirrior, she put her brush on the sink and walked outside, as she walks, she turns around as she feels like...
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We were builders. We were builders, fighters, scholars, but mais importantly, friends. When the Government took all our rights away, our food, money, our culture, we allied ourselves against it. But they had a machine. A machine that could sail the seas and air. It was called, The Oppresive. The Oppresive forced us underground, making us creatures of the very soil they walk on. But it is time for our revolution. We have a great machine, bigger than the Oppresive, and stronger than it. It will trample them like a boy tramples grass. No resistance at all, we are sure of it. We are ready. We have...
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posted by DarrenGruch
Ever since my family died down to be just me.... I`ve been alone since they died in a car accident. I got out fine (only with cuts and a migrane), but they died. I now live with my grandpa... but he doesn't get me..... I cut my self, dresss diffrently, and never really talk.

4 days after the funeral for my family.... I became Emo. But the dia my Family died, something changed within me..... something good went rotten.
My Grandpa see's it, but ignores my pain and anger... only if that drunk driver that hit us was sober and never... spun out of control. Some dia I hope his coração gives out and he dies in jail.

Does any one feel the same?
posted by noahnstar1616
"Are okay, V?" Francine was checking me for bruises.

"I'm fine."

"We're so telling the principal." Zoey grabbed my arm.

"No, it's okay. She didn't hurt me." I rubbed my arm where Mercury dug her nails in. She didn't leave permanent marks.

"What happened?" They both waited for my response.

I told them how Mercury knew that I felt something when Cameron was visiting me in the hospital. How she knew I was trying to get him back. How I saw her eyes glowing red, like a sea witch's eyes when angry.

"You know what this means, right?" Francine and I waited for Zoey's answer. "That Mercury is the sea witch...
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Jed was a part of the Rebellion against the Syndicate of Alien Beings (S.A.B.). Or like most enslaved races call them, the Monsters. In 2067, S.A.B arrived on Earth in procurar of fuel sources for their machines, not expecting to find a whole planet that has been living for centuries unconquered. Caught unexpected, the S.A.B. slowly amassed their forces, while countries all across world united. North Korea, Russia, China, all those countries that were on the opposing sides during all the wars, united alongside all the other countries. With the whole world united, the U.W.O. (United World Order)formed...
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