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I need help composição literária a romance scene in my story!

ok, i can write almost anything but i have INSANE trouble composição literária romance scenes!! and its not even like a full romance scene! i just need to figure out how to word a simple, sweet, innocent kiss between 2 of my characters without it being too boring! the characters both like eachother but they both are kind of shy. they are 14 and 15 years old. the story is told in 3rd person and the boy starts the kissing. PLEASE HELP!!!!!
 roxasismine23 posted over a year ago
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ellie_bellie135 said:
I'll be happy to help.
Could you please message me with mais details.
For now tho I would say something like...
He leaned progressivo, para a frente and their lips thouched. Her scalp tingled as she felt his nervous hand run up her arm to rest on her neck. They felt so close. The moment was perfect. They were happy. Etc. I don't know. Is that too cliche or intense? It really depends. I hope I can help.
Let me know :)
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'They grinned shyly?'
ellie_bellie135 posted over a year ago
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wow that is really good!!
teampeeta12 posted over a year ago
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