Chapter 3.
Mist Paw felt upset. White path looked at her saying, “Begin!” Sun paw leapt Over To Adder Hills and caught a king cobra. He began to stalk a sleeping adder when he felt pinched in his left hind leg. He began to ignore it and he leapt onto the adder puncturing it with his teeth. Sun paw did not feel too good so he trotted to rato valley before anything else could get him.
It was dawn and the apprentices were trotting over to their mentors. When sun paw noticed his sister, he saw she had only been able to catch a small finch. “Excellent sun paw!” Meowed gray whisker. White path narrowed his eyes in curiosity when he saw a bloody hind leg. “Get to the medicine den, I’ll take your prey to the kill pile.” Mewed white path. Sun paw looked at his leg where he felt the pinching and darted to the medicine den. “Holly tail!” Helped sun paw. “I was bit por a snake!” He yowled again. Blood began to spread in his fur. “I don’t want to end up like lost leg!”
Sun paw was walking around dragging his hind leg to the den. “Woah what happened?” Meowed antler paw. “Snake bite.” Sun paw trotted to his nest placing his head in his nest.
Chapter 4
Mist Paw felt upset. White path looked at her saying, “Begin!” Sun paw leapt Over To Adder Hills and caught a king cobra. He began to stalk a sleeping adder when he felt pinched in his left hind leg. He began to ignore it and he leapt onto the adder puncturing it with his teeth. Sun paw did not feel too good so he trotted to rato valley before anything else could get him.
It was dawn and the apprentices were trotting over to their mentors. When sun paw noticed his sister, he saw she had only been able to catch a small finch. “Excellent sun paw!” Meowed gray whisker. White path narrowed his eyes in curiosity when he saw a bloody hind leg. “Get to the medicine den, I’ll take your prey to the kill pile.” Mewed white path. Sun paw looked at his leg where he felt the pinching and darted to the medicine den. “Holly tail!” Helped sun paw. “I was bit por a snake!” He yowled again. Blood began to spread in his fur. “I don’t want to end up like lost leg!”
Sun paw was walking around dragging his hind leg to the den. “Woah what happened?” Meowed antler paw. “Snake bite.” Sun paw trotted to his nest placing his head in his nest.
Chapter 4
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