True Writers Article: The War of Color, Prologue

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posted by 1999jacko

This story has been bugging me ever since I brainstormed it yesterday so I though might as well write it:

Alli Hanson sat bored in her Geography class, waiting for her teacher to stop droning on about world war 2 and dismiss the class, so they could finally go home. She started to scan the class trying to guess what everyone was thinking when a white boy caught her eye and she focused in on him trying to see if he would turn around and look at her.

Rick Duncan felt a pair of eyes boring into the back of his head, when the class was dismissed he stood up and turned around to see a black girl staring at him still. She smiled shyly and moved her gaze away to the window as she too stood up and packed her bag with books and quickly moving past him, shyly saying hi to him as she past.

An hora later as she was coming início from her friends house she ran into the boy she'd had her eyes own in class with a group of his friends around him. As she past them someone stuck out his hand and started to speak to her," oi little girly you staring at my boy earlier, just don't do it again, you black people sicken me going after us." He pushed her to the ground and all his friends, including the boy she'd been whatching, started laugh and kick her sides, she was crying and bleeding as they left ger there. She managed to get up and hobble slowly início blood soaking her shorts from the scars and gashes they'd left on her side.

Rick and his friends joked around about beating the black girl up hours after it actually happened, though Rick thought he would feel bad about doing it, but he strangely enjoyed it. And couldn't wait to do it again

sorry its short but I have to do something and anyway I introduced the 2 characters I'm going to be using as a pov for the whole book and hope you like it

SweetHoneyBunny, sadiebugz00 and 2 others like this

alicia386 Pretty good start. I like it. Honest. U have to believe a genius like me right?

1999jacko I suppose so

1999jacko I have added a bit more on

juliet98 good start looks intresting :)

1999jacko Thanks

alicia386 I read the just added. I love tha name Rick btw

1999jacko Thanx

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Remember me Ch.5

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the comments :) Please don't copy and please read and review :)
Chapter 5
    Let’s get started
    We were standing in front of a big boat, but it wasn’t the one Dorothy visited, I knew that for sure. We were at the docks, were a lot of boats are at, I’m surprised there’s so many. But as I inspect all of them, none of them were the one I hoped.
    The barco smelled like a ton of fish, and on the corner I could just make out a small pile of dead fish, whoever owned this barco must be careless.
    “This...

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Forbidden: Prologue

posted by SweetHoneyBunny

Tears were rolling down my face. My coração hurt, and my thoughts were scrambled.
It was a dia that reflected my emotions. The clouds covered the sky completely and were threatening to rain, the wind was howling and my family was being ripped apart.

My parents were both suicidal, and were always having what they call “accidents”. One week, I found my mother cutting her wrists in the bathroom. Her blood was puddling on the floor, and she was crying. I called her therapist, who talked her out of it. Again. My father was no better. He tried to thrown himself out the third story window of our...

A Wish on the Northern estrela Chapter One

posted by Dhampires

I flinched before he hit me I could already feel the nails from the cinto, correia on my skin exactly where he'd hit before he really did. He hit that same spot at least five times—it was right above my butt bone.

I cried out in pain as he went up and down my spinal cord with the cinto, correia he moved it to my arms that clinged to the topo, início of the heater. Tears poured out of my eyes "Dad stop please dad!!" He whipped me harder saying "What did I tell you all about calling me Dad I'm your master you little runt!!" he changed to the other arm and and gave me a fine blow to the left jaw bone I fell on my back...

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Missing; Chapter Four!

posted by wantadog

Chapter 4

Juliet quieted. It was apparent that she was too weak to break the grip, and if this person really was friendly, fighting and screaming would only complicate matters. After a minuto of her staying limp in the person’s grip, he let her go. She took a deep breath to steady her nerves and twisted around to see who it was. She couldn’t contain herself.
“Steve, you bastard! What the hell!”
“Quiet! They’ll hear you,” he whispered frantically.
“Wait, so this is…real?”
Steve looked down. “Sorry, but yes, it’s real.”
Juliet clapped her hands to her mouth. “It can’t...

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lobo Girl: Chapter 9

posted by SweetHoneyBunny

I backed up slowly, not wanting the she lobo to feel threatened and attack. “Nice wolf, I'm not going to hurt you.” I got up off the ground with my hands out, facing the wolf. She had white pele, peles with a small gray estrela on her chest. Climbing off the small colina she had been standing on, she began walking towards me. I stood still. If I ran, she would pin me down and attack; and if I stood here there was no telling what she might do. “Please don't kill me. I didn't want to be brought here.” She was circling me and sniffing. Suddenly, she stopped. “I can smell his blood.” Her voice was...

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Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note from the Saukerl: Chapter 3

posted by hgfan5602

Saukerl

We were anxious to find out what was going on with the Jew. The Saumensch and I walked out and onto the streets, apart at a distance, careful of any danger around us. As we walked over onto Pariser Platz, we saw that there was a public execution today. A couple of Nazis were gathered around a feeble man, short and skinny, who appeared to be a Jew. The Saumensch and I stepped closer, seeing that it wasn't our Jew, but only to be halted por one of the Nazis on command. "HALT! What brings you here?" I answered calmly, "We've just come por to greet you fine men. Heil Hitler." The Nazi nodded briefly,...

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.20

posted by Problematic129

*Thank for all the comments :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 20
    Let the games begin
    “What are you doing here?” I ask.
    “I could ask you the same thing,” America respostas crossing her arms and giving me a pointed look. “Zyanna.”
    Now right then, my coração did stop. “What?”
    “Oh, don’t act stupid Zy, I know who you are.”
    “How…?”
    America looked confused. “You mean you didn’t send me that...

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friends Until the End- ch.1

posted by alicia386

Abigail Dalton

Chapter One

The sudden death of Abigail Dalton casted a spell on the quiet town of Brunswick, Georgia. Everyone felt utterly dismal as they watched the reporter give the gruesome details. It happened so suddenly and out the blue. Who could have ever killed the sweet 17 ano old girl that made even the grumpiest of men smile at her beauty and charm. It was true that she was beloved por her peers, family, and community. Who would kill her? Well, believe it or not but there were some people who thought she was arrogant, stubborn, vain, and unintelligent. All of those comments may be true...

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World of the Shadows: parts one through Nine

posted by Zero_Delta

Okay, I'm positive fanpop messed up my formatting, and I don't feel like fixing 11 pages(nor do I have the time), but here it goes. I really would like Criticism please, All I've been getting is how much people like it on the composição literária spot, good criticism is hard to find over there, So don't tell me what you like, tell me what you hate, as vehemently as possible.

“This world is lost…” The dragon’s words echoed in Karaza’s mind. She had been hiding near the gathering place, hoping for a chance to steal some of the dragons’ supplies before the great beasts flew...

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And she was gone.....(short story)

posted by LadyEmzy16

The rain was pouring as her bare feet touched the ground her black hair was stuck to her face ,she paused to realize that she was right in front of the graveyard gates she slowly walked into the graveyard while she was walking she found a bench, she sat on it and started to get tired ,she lay down and fell into deep sleep, waking up three hours later she realized it was it was past midnight with the rain coming to a stop ,she got of the bench and strolled through the graveyard , “where is it?” she kept asking herself while she was walking until she found what she was looking for, it was...

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Tears of Friendship

posted by hgfan5602

I hold tears back...
The thought of such a close friend
Leaving you
Is horrible.

It feels like life is over,
Like...there's no point in living anymore,
If your best friend is gone,
There's no one to keep the warmth
With you anymore.

What's the point of life
If you don't have any friends
To share it with?
It's all over,
All of it.

No one's coming to calm me down,
And I'm not going to let them either.
I want to remember my closest friend...
But it's not easy,
If you have to leave them.

She will always be in my heart
She was an amazing friend to me,
She brought me so much joy
And happiness,
Even in the darkest of nights,...

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Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note from the Saukerl: Chapter 1

posted by hgfan5602

Saukerl

Like I said, it was a dark and foggy night. I thought my eyes were deceiving me. I think I saw a Jew. This time around, there are practically no Jews. They are either in concentration camps- awaiting their death, or dead already. The Nazis are not being easy with the Jews. This Jew was covered with a black cloth, and he appeared to be standing over a cowering boy, twelve years old of age at least. I moved in closer, cautiously, with my Saumensch, and we were both suspicious. The Saumensch's eyes met mine. "Is that...a murder, Carls?" Matna, the Saumensch, was definitely suspicious. She never...

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Survived (on the perspective of Evan Gary)

posted by hgfan5602

I fought through the process,
And I was determined through it all.
I was Valente and strong
And now I survived.

At first I was worried to death,
When the doctor said that I had cancer.
I stayed strong
Cuz I knew that my family and friends
Would care for me,
And spread the word
So I would survive.

My friends and I
Were always supportive of me,
And we could talk for hours,
Playing on our DSes,
Talking about Legos
Like great friends ever should.

Later, I was cancer-free
And I celebrated
We did everything great
It helped me cheer up.

I found out
That many people have cancer
Not only me..
And I'm...

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Missing; Chapter 3

posted by wantadog

Chapter 3

Juliet muffled her scream as she saw what was standing on the other side of the door. It was Phil, but not any Phil she had ever seen. Phil’s skin was black and bubbling, steam was being emitted from what used to be his skin, his pupils were gone, and he was giving off an awful odor, even worse than the cigarettes. He wasn’t looking her way so she dived behind the bar. “Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!” She clamped her mouth shut as her whispering rose to a shout. There was a grunt from the other side of the door and she heard a rattling noise as he beat on the door, trying...

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Unity of the Universe

posted by hgfan5602

Together, at last,
We sing in unison,
As the eagles zoom past us,
Symbolizing true freedom now.

We are together,
Not just our country,
But all the countries of the universe,
Syria, China, Germany,
Russia, Canada, Brazil,
And, of course, the United States.

I have never experienced
Such an amazing feeling
In my whole life,
As the soldiers of the universe
March past,
We are in utmost glory.

The unity of the universe,
We behold right now.
Never again, we shall quarrel,
Fighting with our steel rifles.

We will be free,
Not just blacks,
But all of us,
Together, at last.

We will be equal,
Women and men,
And we shall work together,...

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Going Separate Ways

posted by hgfan5602

We are going separate ways.
We must leave each other,
Though I regret it,
There is nothing either of us
Can do.

We are going separate ways.
The bright light shines in our futures,
For the separate ways we go
Are the best for each of us.

We must leave for the good of it,
Though I don't want to,
And I know you don't either.
But it is important that we do.

It is never easy
Doing what we do the worst,
Leaving each other,
And the thoughts that we are...
Best friends...leaving each other...

We must go our separate ways.
For our own good.
And we pray that one day...
We will meet each other again.
And we will.

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Best of the Thrills: Chapter Two: Jake

posted by hgfan5602

Jake Gartner here. For some reason, something kept those mutant serpents away from us. Chase Johnson, my friend, is over here with me at the biblioteca of Death. Yeah. Bad name for a library, if you ask me. I would never have come here in the first place, had no one ever bothered me with a ransom note about my mother dying if I didn't go on this life-or-death journey. (Sorry, I have to speed the story up now. Chase says I'm getting all the attention.) So, what we found out at the library. Not much. All we found out was that mutant serpents tend to be very huge, have sharp teeth, and stay away...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.10

posted by Problematic129

Chapter 10
    The smell of young amor in the morning
    You’d all be happy to know that I never buried a certain Meredith Baxter, but I did accidentally hit her during our lovely game of voleibol fifteen times.
    “Hey JONES! Watch it!” She yelled furiously at me.
    “Oh sorry, I didn’t give a had enough smack,” I shrug as I put on my most innocent face.
    Meredith glared at me but said nothing more.
    Don’t you just amor the feeling of having the last word?...

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World of Shadows- Ch. 8

posted by alicia386

Chapter Eight

IF ONLY I COULD HAVE MULTIPLE LIVES OR LIVE FOREVER. -Erica

I was rudely thrown in a miniature room. He didn't say much when he lugged me here. Although, I could sense others nearby but when I looked there were no ghost or anyone near. I had finally gotten rid of the feeling to only have it come back again. This time I saw who it was. "Erica?" A shimmery figure exposed itself to me. A little surprise but not as surprise as Erica who was now flickering on and off like a light bulb.
"Who are you and why did you attack me?" This Erica was not the one I remembered from...

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friends Until the End- Chapter Twelve Final Chapter

posted by alicia386

Chapter Twelve

"This just in," announced anchorman Douglass. "Some new insight on the Dalton murder case has just been revealed. Not only have they discovered the real killer they also have a CD of the killer admitting to the crime. Although, they will not go public with the names and other crucial details we still keep faith for the Dalton parents as they go through this awful time. Back to you Joe."
Dakota stared her tv with astonishment. She had just leave the jailhouse and arrived início to find her parents watching the news. Not only was she surprised, she was also impressed...