(It ended up cutting off the post, so I'm just going post it in the form of a article.)
One cold night during the winter, Your FC is traveling across what seems to be a endless road on foot. Your FC feels like He/She has been traveling for days and as a result they feel tired, cold, hungry, and absolutely LOST. When he/she was beginning to give up hope, a strange silhouette shrouded por fog forms in the distance.
He/She ran toward the silhouette and encountered a giant iron gate with a small town behind it. Happy that He/She found a shelter to stay at for the night, Your FC proceeds to try to push the gate open... But the bars are extremely cold and they jump back as a reaction. Strangely enough, The gates slowly opened on there own afterwards.
Your FC entered the gates and they closed behind him/her with a ear piercing screech. Father time hasn't been very pleasant to this place as many of the windows have holes and cracks in them and the paint is worn down on most of the houses and shacks. There is a factory in the distance producing a thick black smog that covers most of the sky, hiding the moon. The place is also covered in snow as well...
A few people can be seen walking around, they're all wearing thick robes that covers most of there bodies with the exception of there eyes, hands, and rat-like tails. One walks past your FC without making eye contact, but just as he is almost out of earshot, he whispers "Filthy Outsider." Your FC quickly turns to see he completely vanished.
Your FC sees a small shack with a light on a few blocks away, it's a leite bar. He/She enters the leite bar in hopes of getting something to fill there empty stomach. They sit on one of the bar stools and the strange rat-like bartender ask what he/she will be having. He/She ordered a small leite with a plate of mozzarella, mussarela cheese sticks. The cheese sticks were rather poorly made and had no flavor, but anything was better than starving.
After Your FC payed for the grub, He/She proceeds to walk out of the leite bar and notice just how bare the small town is. The gates were closed meaning he/she couldn't walk out and too high to climb(and if you have a flying FC, He/she is to exhausted to fly over the gates.) Before He/she decided to go look for a shelter, they caught a glimpse of a strange figure lurking in a alley. It briefly stared at your FC before completely vanishing.
Something isn't right... Your FC proceeds to explore...
One cold night during the winter, Your FC is traveling across what seems to be a endless road on foot. Your FC feels like He/She has been traveling for days and as a result they feel tired, cold, hungry, and absolutely LOST. When he/she was beginning to give up hope, a strange silhouette shrouded por fog forms in the distance.
He/She ran toward the silhouette and encountered a giant iron gate with a small town behind it. Happy that He/She found a shelter to stay at for the night, Your FC proceeds to try to push the gate open... But the bars are extremely cold and they jump back as a reaction. Strangely enough, The gates slowly opened on there own afterwards.
Your FC entered the gates and they closed behind him/her with a ear piercing screech. Father time hasn't been very pleasant to this place as many of the windows have holes and cracks in them and the paint is worn down on most of the houses and shacks. There is a factory in the distance producing a thick black smog that covers most of the sky, hiding the moon. The place is also covered in snow as well...
A few people can be seen walking around, they're all wearing thick robes that covers most of there bodies with the exception of there eyes, hands, and rat-like tails. One walks past your FC without making eye contact, but just as he is almost out of earshot, he whispers "Filthy Outsider." Your FC quickly turns to see he completely vanished.
Your FC sees a small shack with a light on a few blocks away, it's a leite bar. He/She enters the leite bar in hopes of getting something to fill there empty stomach. They sit on one of the bar stools and the strange rat-like bartender ask what he/she will be having. He/She ordered a small leite with a plate of mozzarella, mussarela cheese sticks. The cheese sticks were rather poorly made and had no flavor, but anything was better than starving.
After Your FC payed for the grub, He/She proceeds to walk out of the leite bar and notice just how bare the small town is. The gates were closed meaning he/she couldn't walk out and too high to climb(and if you have a flying FC, He/she is to exhausted to fly over the gates.) Before He/she decided to go look for a shelter, they caught a glimpse of a strange figure lurking in a alley. It briefly stared at your FC before completely vanishing.
Something isn't right... Your FC proceeds to explore...
Name: Scorch the Werehog
Gender: Male
Powers: Strong, and fire
Likes: Hunting, fighting, video games
Dislikes: lobo vein plant, demons, too many mais to list...
Appearance: Red with laranja fur, black claws (nails), sharp teeth, and has brown eyes. His (My) shoes are green, purple, and blue.
Short Bio: When Scorch was born, he was actually born a hedgehog. But a evil echidna didn't like that Scorch even existed. So, he put a curse on Scorch that made him a werehog dia and night. Scorch's parents weren't too thrilled about that but tried to raise him as a normal kid. (you can see how I turned out)
Gender: Male
Powers: Strong, and fire
Likes: Hunting, fighting, video games
Dislikes: lobo vein plant, demons, too many mais to list...
Appearance: Red with laranja fur, black claws (nails), sharp teeth, and has brown eyes. His (My) shoes are green, purple, and blue.
Short Bio: When Scorch was born, he was actually born a hedgehog. But a evil echidna didn't like that Scorch even existed. So, he put a curse on Scorch that made him a werehog dia and night. Scorch's parents weren't too thrilled about that but tried to raise him as a normal kid. (you can see how I turned out)
Allignment:Opponent to Ally
Power:Ice,Snow,Wind and Hail
Weapons Used:Bows and Arrows,Claw,Sword,Rapier,Blade,Mace,Ankh,Piece,Naginata and Scythe.
Battle Difficulty:Extremely Very Hard.
Battle Describes:Tricky,Fast,Strength,Powerful and Very,Very hard to trap and/or to defeat.
Power get on Frozen - Uma Aventura Congelante Hydro(Ice,Snow and Hail.) and Cold North(Wind).
Utilities:Condense,Frost,Cold Snap.
Pet:Ice Dragon,Hail Dragon and Snow Dragon.
Pet Description:Tricky,Fast,Powerful,Very hard to kill,large,hard,sharp.
Boreas Attack:Snow Coat,Avalances,ColdCombat,Tornado,IceScissor.Iceberg Shower,Ice Missle,Snow Punch,Hailstorm,Blizzard,Glacier,Tundra,Hail Slash,Cold Swing,IcebergMeteor.Create Snow Monsters.Gel Surf.Comet Ball.Comet Ball Duo.Infinity Comet,Super Counter Attack(Counters Range and Melee atacks)Death Sythe.
Power:Ice,Snow,Wind and Hail
Weapons Used:Bows and Arrows,Claw,Sword,Rapier,Blade,Mace,Ankh,Piece,Naginata and Scythe.
Battle Difficulty:Extremely Very Hard.
Battle Describes:Tricky,Fast,Strength,Powerful and Very,Very hard to trap and/or to defeat.
Power get on Frozen - Uma Aventura Congelante Hydro(Ice,Snow and Hail.) and Cold North(Wind).
Utilities:Condense,Frost,Cold Snap.
Pet:Ice Dragon,Hail Dragon and Snow Dragon.
Pet Description:Tricky,Fast,Powerful,Very hard to kill,large,hard,sharp.
Boreas Attack:Snow Coat,Avalances,ColdCombat,Tornado,IceScissor.Iceberg Shower,Ice Missle,Snow Punch,Hailstorm,Blizzard,Glacier,Tundra,Hail Slash,Cold Swing,IcebergMeteor.Create Snow Monsters.Gel Surf.Comet Ball.Comet Ball Duo.Infinity Comet,Super Counter Attack(Counters Range and Melee atacks)Death Sythe.
Tell me if you see MS qualities in this new character.
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a fantasia world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.
DID taco MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a fantasia world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.
DID taco MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!
