Tempest the Wolf (Now 18)
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Well....my life was no real walk in the park...in fact...i hated it. My dad Rider the lobo was a villian...and might still b...i dont even know if hes still even alive. Truthfully? i dont really care either way. I HATED it when he forced me 2 watch as he torchured people...but i did as he told me....if i didnt i was treated just bad as his prisoners...i BECAME a prisoner. But my life changed when a lil spy girl got caught...thats when EVERYTHING changed 4 me....
flashback
I sigh looking out of the little window in my cell...i disobayed Rider again....my dad.
"Tempest! Get out here NOW!"
i wonder what it is now? I run out of my room and over 2 him. "yes dad?"
"see the cat in the net?"
I look over at a red cat that has 2 b only like 10ish. "....yes...."
"kill her."
i seen THAT comming.... i look over at the girl again and i can c her looking at me.
"............." the girl tips her head 2 the side.
I look at her 1 mais time, "i cant....."
Rider snickers, "i knew u wouldnt have the backbone!" he takes his pistal out of its holister.
I look away and i hear a gun shot.
"that took care of the lil spy pest! now take her out back! ill deal w/ u l8r"
I lower my gaze b4 nodding. Out of the corner of my eye i c Rider walk away. I look back at the girl who is only a few years younger then me. "im sorry..." I pick her up after i take her out of the net and i feel a heartbeat...its weak but its there. I run outside as smoothly as i can and i set her down gently. how can she still b alive!!? its so close 2 her heart....
"ugh......" the girl groans.
I snap out of it and i look at the place i grew up...and i deside 2 leave with her. I pick her up again and i run with her as far as i can.
A long time passes b4 shs comes out of her coma...its been months and i wonder if she will ever wake up...
"ugh...my...everything..." the lil red cat groans.
I bolt up right from where i am leaning against a tree* "ur awake!"
"Barley...ugh... where am i?"
"somewhere far away from my father...promise"
"r father....?" her eyes grom big, "I REMEMBER! owwww...." she rubs her temple, "my job was 2 free the daughter of Rider the Wolf...but i got caught...and....and...." she gulps not saying any more.
"its alright...ur ok now" i put my hand on her shoulder, "and im his daughter...so u succeded"
she sighs, "i guess so..." she looks down at her chest and pulls the colarinho, colar of her camisa down a lil and sees the bullet scar. "........man...."
"it was a close 1 cat girl...but i managed 2 keep u alive"
"thanks...and my names Ember not 'cat girl'"
"oh...sorry Ember"
"its ok...and thanks 4 savin my life....er?"
"Oh! im Tempest" i hold my hand out 2 Ember.
"nice 2 meet u Tempest," Ember takes and shakes her hand.
Flashback Ends
Thats my story...and how i meet my first and best friend Ember...its been 6 years sence that dia but im sure neither of us forgot
"You're misson is to recover the chaos emeralds." "ok" Ruby runs off heading towards Eggman's base."who's that" ruby thinks. As a Blue hedgehog races by. "It don't matter" As ruby sneaks into one of the vents. Crawling until the she sees the glow of the red chaos emerald. "It's like taking doces form a baby" ruby jumps out of the vent and takes the chaos emerald. As she gets ready to leave a two tailed raposa walks in. "huh, who are you" "I'm ruby, don't bother me" she jumps into the vent before tails can get her. "Get back here ruby" Ruby escapes Eggman's base and run torwds the spy HQ. "so you say a red hedgehog took the chaos emerald" says sonic "yes, she escaped before I could get her" says tails angerliy "let go after her,sonic" says cream "I'm back" "Good job, angent ruby"says Emma the HQ leader "I have a question, who's the yellow two tailed fox" ruby demands "tails the raposa he travels with sonic the hedgehog" "tell me more"
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic fã Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic fã Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
You can have a detailed character, if you want so.
You can have simply character, if YOU want so.
There is only one think you must remember:
Make the character's design fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power or darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I lost my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. friends that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for leitura this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start seguinte week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for leitura this intro, tell me if I should write this or not. I start seguinte week. 1/12/12)
