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This is an opinionated guide, folks, it's my opinion, so stfu.

OK, let's start with design and illustration, don't go to TeamArtail, find a good screenshot and colour over it, don't use a base everyone else has used over 1000 times, I will say, if you're having a hard time with a pose, look for a resource image and copy the pose from that. Spines are ok, as long as they aren't exactly like Sonic's, that's been done. TO DEATH. DO NOT GIVE YOUR CHARACTER 2 raposa TAILS, I'll explain mais on that later.

seguinte off, let's try naming, don't give your character six names, the maximum is three; First name, segundo name then surname. Got it? Good. And no, translating a aleatório noun into Japanese doesn't make it any mais original, if you MUST have a Japanese name, go to a baby naming site, or use a name you KNOW is a name. But try and vary it a little, don't yourselves to Japanese and English names. What about a Russian name or a Korean name or something, ever thought of those?

Let's do some backstories! Now, yes, I don't mind a little bit of tragedy, if I said I didn't I'd be a hypocrite. But there's a fine line between interesting drama and boring drama, first off, DO NOT make it that your character's parents abandoned him/her or were killed, that's been done too many times, and it feels kind of lazy because you don't then have to design a family. For good drama, take a look at things that could actually happen without social services getting involved realistically. If there's a canon character involved in ANY way (brother/sister/friend/boy/girlfriend) remove that immediately. It's been overdone and canon is canon.

Powers and abilities time! This is where it can all go so wrong. Avoid elemental powers like the plague, they're overused, don't go for telekinesis, either, again, overused. Magic is ok in my eyes, as long as there aren't any spells/incantations that gives you invincibility or instantly heals yourself, that's over the top, and don't go 'He/she learnt it very quickly, because they're a natural!' because that's a cop-out, Alyss uses magic and she's still not perfect at it. Don't make them better than canon characters. EVER D|

Personality quirks, this is an add-on to the backstory, really, think about the emotional damage whatever happened in the past has given. HOWEVER, do not make your character just moan and moan about how they were wronged as a child, don't make them a Shadow the Angstyhog, please. May for instance is scared of getting lost because she did that when she was 10 and her father didn't care. Stuff like that, y'know?

As a final note, a lot of you aught to toughen up a little. Stop overreacting to criticism! Especially if it's constructive, don't focus n the negative and start looking at the positive, too, take the negative on board and then try harder seguinte time. Don't use the excuse of 'it's my style' that doesn't make up for basic anatomy flaws. Don't go all-caps rage on the person who gave it, they're trying to help you get better.

If you need any mais guidance on making your character go link

Hope this has helped a lot of you!
posted by NintendoFan364
(Note: a update version of this will be made later on, this is just a temporary version so I can demonstrate this character for RPs...)

Name: Leo Thompson

Nickname: "Zelf"

Age: 42

Species: Hawk

Eye color: Red

Feather color: Grey

Outfit: Cybernetic jumpsuit(Reduces damage received from electric attacks)

Personality: Brave... yet oddly shady

Short back story: Leo "Zelf" Thompson was formally a member of a group of elite soldiers that patrolled a utopia who were skilled with sword... however after Zelf learned King Marxy's true intention, He turned against them.

Powers: Quick sense, Teleportation, Wind bullets

Abilities: Master swordsman, Really fast, Flight
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That rhythm... there was some kind of a rhythm in her step, in her fighting style. It was almost as if she fought alongside music, keeping beat as she fought, be it with a step, a dodge, a punch... but if a soco from her opponent was not on a beat where she would act, she did not know what to do until her action beat came.

Her face was bloodied, and she also suffered from hyperphilia, or uncontrolable bleeding. Without medical assistance, she might be feeling the first stages of hemorage. A female in the male boxing division. Who'd've thought it...

On the flipside, her opponent looked half...
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The Rasoul Saga: Chapter 17 (Part 2)



Mancer nodded his head in acknowledgement to Kyle’s very small Rasoul Kick. “Very good. Now you’re making progress on the Rasoul Kick as well, and that is a very good thing. However, now I would like to try to speak to you on the subject of the Rasoul Dimension once mais before we go off on something else again. Also, I don’t want to tell you what my brothers can teach you due to the fact that I would rather it be a surprise to you. I’m sure you’ll find their teachings and way of teaching much different than the way I teach you when I’m finished...
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“Oh, I see. Surprise attack,” Kyle said with a small nod of his head. He formed as much Rasoul energy around his arms as he possibly could, preparing to send a large blast of it towards Astra in an attempt to attack her and possibly throw her guard off. Ruby also prepared to try to attack Astra, and prepared to send a few blasts of Chaos energy to the lobo girl.

Kyle and Ruby both released their energy at the same time, which resulted in a blast of Chaos energy and a blast of Rasoul energy flying towards Astra at the same time. Astra turned around just in time to see Kyle and Ruby, and just...
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posted by unknown99
She is mostly shy because off her secrets. She is mostly silent in front of everyone. But, if you set off her mood she will probably freeze you into a block. Born in the City of Ice, Snow is a shy girl with a special talent. Because she is shy, she mostly don't want to talk to anybody. She was happy to be sent to the Andromedian Pyrokinetic Academy. She had 5 roommates because they are the only girls in the academy. Snow mostly spend time in her room thinking about what is going to happen, then she only goes out for classes and breakfast, lunch and dinner. At those times she mostly spend her...
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posted by iceandsummer
Name: Aurora Centauri
Age: Currently 16
Personality: Competitive. The rest are for you to find out.
Status: Single
Race: raposa (forgot her tail...)
Family: Unknown
Occupation: Hero...ine
Friends: Need to RP for her friends.
Enemies: Need to RP for her enemies.

Her Name is based off of a estrela I know of. It's called Alpha Centauri. Lawl, cool, right?

If you wanna role-play, send me a message. She needs some friends and enemies....

BIO: Aurora isn't from the planet Mobius. She comes from a different planet called Solaris. Her início planet is infected with a plague and the Solarians need to rely on her. The plague started when she was little. Her family lost her when she was young, but that doesn't ruin her life. She is satisfied with all the remaining Solarians and she considers all of them her family. Aurora can phase for a short period of time and her main power is currently unknown.
I’ll go with one per (almost every) character I do here, and I’ll do just SOME of them.

Rin

FORM: Three-mood forms
Basically rage forms. First form is normal, segundo mood doubles everything, but increases aggression, and third doubles that, but basically sends her into a bloodcurdling rage. The downside is that her nanites can't take it (the same for all 3-Mood identities), and completely burn out, leaving her as a completely chaos-energy-creature unless she is able to power down enough to regenerate her nanites. If she (or any 3-mood) becomes too explosive with energy, it can trigger the...
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Mancer had done nothing but stand there in silence as he watched what was going on around him. He was starting to wonder if he was even noticed anymore, not that he was complaining at all. He just stood where he was and slipped his hands down in his pants pockets, not knowing what to say or what to do, so he just continued to stand there in silence. He didn't have to stand there for long, however, before Cinder turned her head and noticed him.

"Oh, who are you?" Cinder asked in curiosity. "Are you a friend of Kyle and Kagen's?"

"Yes, I am in a way. I suppose you can call me their friend. I...
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posted by mephiles97
The Rasoul Saga

Chapter 9: Vice Again



"So, what would you like it do? Is there anywhere that you would like to go?" Mancer asked Kyle, now walking down the streets and sidewalks in the middle of the Northern District of Freedom City.

"Hm... Maybe we could go to the mall? It's a great place for just walking around and looking around," Kyle said.

"That would be fine with me if you want to walk around the mall for a while," Mancer said, nodding his head slightly as he walked down the sidewalk with Kyle.

"Alright! Is that ok to go there?"

"Yes, it's alright with me. Let's go."

"Ok!" Kyle started...
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posted by mephiles97
Chapter 1: A Snow dia and a Simple Errand
Location: Waktini family residence, Northern District, Freedom City
Date: Friday, January 2nd
Time: 7:30 P.M.


"Hey, Mom? Can I ask you something? Please?" A somewhat tall, slightly chubby yellow hedgehog asked with excitement in his voice as he walked up to a tall, long black-haired woman.

"Yes, Kyle? What is it?" The woman asked with a bright voice, turning her head to look at the hedgehog with a smile.

"Um... Well..." Kyle looked up slightly at his mother, taking a small breath. "Kagen and I wanted to hang out together and maybe play out in the snow...
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...Have you ever felt like...you are being watched?Ⓧ

One day,a hero who is named MTL journeyed through the woods...In procurar of the remaining fragments of his past...however,He was not aware of the legend of the woods...and it's terrible dark evil that resides within...MTL traveled deep into the woods,passing many rocks,trees,shrubs,and owlsⓍ.MTL started to approach a bazaar area putting off a magnetic field which disrupted his nanite code and he had to revert to watch form in order to continue traversing...

MTL came upon a large three,massive.it's roots where the size of houses and it literally...
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posted by ripperoo1
CHAPTER 2
"Serrations"

I held the sword, feeling it's cold steel in my hand. My door creaked open. A man with a capa and a dagger in his hand stood in my doorway. He strode over towards me, raising his dagger. I stepped back with each step he took.
"What do you want?" I asked, my voice shaking. I took a few mais steps backwards.
He pulled out a rope. Pushing me up against the wall, he put the rope around my neck. He raised the dagger up in the air. I raised the sword as far as I could mover it, and slit his leg. He fell down to his knees and dropped the rope. I tackled him and put the rope...
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posted by silverstream101
 Tempest the lobo (Now 18)
Tempest the Wolf (Now 18)
ok...i give trying 2 type it as a story...now ill just use as a paragraph...still 1st person though...hope u like it ^_^
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Well....my life was no real walk in the park...in fact...i hated it. My dad Rider the lobo was a villian...and might still b...i dont even know if hes still even alive. Truthfully? i dont really care either way. I HATED it when he forced me 2 watch as he torchured people...but i did as he told me....if i didnt i was treated just bad as his prisoners...i BECAME a prisoner. But my life changed when a lil spy girl got caught...thats when EVERYTHING...
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