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Please note..

This isn't like my other stories that involve creepy pastas.

This one is fully serious.

But still contains brutal violence and swearing.
So don't read it, if your sensitive to that stuff.

The point of this story is showing how it COULD of been written.

Instead of the twisted comedy it really was made into, with three brain dead fillies, and a horny psychopath.

This verison one has NO sex..

Sorry if you were hoping for that.

But I'm not a friggin pervert.. :(

It's meant to be terrifying.

So, Be aware of that.

The story is inspired from Walking Dead NO SANCTUARY..

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Hi, it's me Scootaloo.

It started off as any normal day.

And the three of us were hanging out as usual.

When suddenly, out of nowhere, we were approached por that Trixie girl.

But something seemed off about her.

For one thing, she usually has such beautiful eyes.
But today they seemed, empty looking. And oddly spooky.

And then there was her fur.

Trixie has always been one to keep pele, peles combed and shiny.

But today it was the complete opposite. Witch is odd.

She looks like she's been up for weeks.

"You okay Trixie. You look... Different" I insisted.

"Sorry.. Been really busy lately.. Helping Pinkie with her new... Hobby" Trixie said, atuação strangely.. Even for her.

Pinkie?

What is up with her these days anyway.

First arco iris, arco-íris Dash goes to help her with baking.

And the very seguinte day, Pinkie goes around telling everyone that Dashie has moved away from Ponyville forever.

And Pinkie herself is always hiding out in that in that creepy basement.

Only coming out to give us these bizzare numbers.

"Say. Rarity has asked me to take care of you three" Trixie said, still atuação strangely.

"Ya mean like babysit, Were a little old for that" AppleBloom giggled.

"It's.. Uhh.. A little different than that" Trixie said, still atuação strangely.

"What you mean?" I asked, getting suspicious.

"Uhhh... Who wants a cupcake?" Trixie asked, nervously handing three cupcakes.

"Well.. They DO look good" I said, eyeing the chocolate one in the middle.

"It's Pinkie's specialty... She heard what I gonna be doing for Rarity, and insisted on using these" Trixie told us.

This was an odd thing to say. But we didn't care. We ate them up.

"What now?" AppleBloom and I both asked the blue unicorn before us.

"Now, you sleep" Trixie said quietly.

Puzzled, I opened my mouth but felt instantly light-headed. A wave of dizziness washed over me, the world spun, and segundos later I collapsed to the floor.

I'm guessing the other two did as well, because I heard falling sounds before blacking out completely..

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After what I assume to be few hours, I slowly began regaining consciousness, seeing a blue mare in my blurry vision.

But I must been taking too long to awaken because she soon slapped me, while yelling out "WAKE UP!"

With a small scream I was now fully awake.

"... Trixie?" I asked, now being able to see the mare properly.

Trixie didn't respond, she went into the back.

I'm pretty sure I heard a large faca being sharpened from back there, witch started scaring me.

I struggled to mover but what I failed to realize till now, is that my hooves were chained against a wall.

I was literary trapped there.

"S Scootaloo?" asked a familiar voice.

"A AppleBloom!?" I asked, looking around, but it's too dark to see anything.

The whole room was pitch black.

Where were we!?

"Hey. Keep it down" Trixie said, returning to the room.

But sense the room was so black. All I saw were her big purple eyes.

But as I said before.

All the usual beauty they have, is replaced por a very unpleasant feeling they were giving out for the first time in.. Ever.

"It smells funny in here!" AppleBloom whined.

"I can't see!" Sweetie Belle whined.

"Oh. Right.. Thanks for reminding me" Trixie's voice said, before the lights were flipped on.

But the truth is.

I think I much preferred the darkness.

There were no windows, and with that, no feelings of hope or nice sunlight.

It was some kind of large construction room.

Against the mural were various tools.

Most of them being large faca like objects, all of them clearly sharp.

Some even had blood on them.

there was also a blood stained wooden bat against a corner.

But the rest of the room had barely anything inside it.

But there was strong smell of something dead inside the room. But whatever it is, must be hidden somewhere.

Only thing I saw was sometime of trough in the middle of the room.

All this was only worsened when I realized I was chained again the wall, por my hooves.

I looked over.

So were Sweetie Belle and AppleBloom.

"Let us go Trixie!" I demanded.

"Or what?" Trixie laughed.

"Or we're tell Saten!" Applebloom cried, fear in her voice.

Trixie coldly laughed.

"Go ahead.. Tell him.. He already knows.. He knows what I do here.. Because unlike like your sister.. I never lie to him". Trixie cried.

This made me realize.

Trixie is still upset about how Saten fell for AppleJack before Trixie.

"Y.. Yer still upset over that?" AppleBloom asked nervously.

"(sighs).. Yes... (suddenly smiles a little) But don't worry... That isn't why your here.. This isn't PERSONAL.. What I do here.. It's never personal.. It's just, how it has to be.. It's just business" Trixie explained.

"B Business?" I asked nervously.

"Yes... And besides. It's Rarity who wants you gone. Not me" Trixie added.

GONE!?

What the fuck dose that mean!?


To be continued..
posted by _Laugh_
So, as most of you all know, I dressed up as Pinkie Pie for a project at school. My class, dressed as their favorito character from a children TV show/book, had to hang out with the little kids for a WHOLE day. We had to act EXACTLY like our character, and believe me, being Pinkie Pie for 7 hours ain't easy.

I would sing 2 songs every hour. I ate so many bolo de copo for lunch. I couldn't even talk to my friends, it's part of the project, if you're out of character, you loose points. I had to talk in a squeaky voice. I had to deal with kids crying. But anyways, I wanted to share some of my favorite...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
arco iris, arco-íris Dash was going as fast as she could to catch up with the others

Twilight: *appears out of nowhere* Man, your moves are impressive. But they aren't good enough *swings sword toward Dash*
Rainbow Dash: *blocks attack*
Twilight: *grabs part of wall*
Rainbow Dash: *about to attack*
Twilight: *blocks attack* Prepare to die *throws part of mural toward Dash*
Rainbow Dash: *dodges wall* Ha!! *swings sword toward Twilight*
Twilight: *dodges, and hits arco iris, arco-íris Dash*

Later, at the segundo floor radio room

Radio operator: *listening to music*
Sean: *walks up*
Cadence: *sees operator*
Sean: We'll go por that room....
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
After leaving the shed, me, and Shredder spotted three trucks arriving at a cable car station por our position.

Nazis: *open doors* Move.
Diamond Tiara & Silverspoon: *get out of truck*
Sean: This way. *walks to station*
Shredder: *Follows*
Sean: *climbs ladder*
Diamond Tiara: *walks to cable car*
Silverspoon: *follows*
Nazi captain: Yes, Captain Mulloch with two prisoners.
Cable car operator: Alright. *moves cable car*

At the topo, início of the station Diamond Tiara was at, I was waiting for the cable car to go.

Sean: *gets on roof of cable car*
Shredder: *gets on*
Sean: *kneels*
Shredder: *sits*

Inside the...
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posted by NocturnalMirage
The last solstice

Chapter 27: Time


A few hours later, Nocturnal Mirage was lying on his back beside the Princess, observing the twinkling stars on the cobalt sky from her balcony. The night was cold, their breaths were visible, but Celestia's body was radiating with an unusual, strong warmness, heating up the air in a small radius, like the flames of an intimate campfire.

“You know, every time I look at those beautiful stars, I wonder what's up there...” Mirage broke the quietness after some time.

“Indeed.” Celestia replied softly. “Everypony who took the time to gaze at Luna's work...
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posted by _MockingJay_
Everypony stared at Silver Tune as she walked up the stairs. Silver Tune was very mad and sad at the same time. She saw a stallion approach to her. The stallion had a rope.

Stallion: oi loser.
ST: *rolls eyes* Please, leave me alone.
Stallion: Here. *hands rope to ST*
ST: What's this for?
Stallion: For you to go hang yourself, duh. *laughs*
ST: *frowns* You don't know what I've been through.
Stallion: *shouts* DRRAAMMAA!!!
ST: *looks down*
Ponies: *laugh*

Silver Tune grabbed her books from her locker and went straight to Science class. She sat in the back of the class alone. Everypony stared at...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Two police officers walked to the police cheif. Buddy was near getting a cup of water

Cop 1: Sir, we need to talk to you.
Cheif: What is it?
Cop 2: What those seven up's did was not how we do police work.
Cheif: You two bastards have been saying that for the last 23 times now. Give it a rest.
Buddy: *walks to cheif*
Cheif: Ignore them Buddy, you did fantastic.
Buddy: Yeah. They're just jealous. *goes to seven up's room*
Sigmund: Hey. What's good Bud?
Click-Clack: I don't understand how he lives in Manehattan, but likes the Oakland Raiders.
Buddy: I'm telling you, they're the best football team in...
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posted by Dragon4322
 "Well of coarse they do"
"Well of coarse they do"
Our helicopter arrived at a good spot so we set up camp and then later went to sleep. Except for me and Chrysalis because the both of us didn't really like to sleep. So instead we whispered comments back and forth about opinions, wondering how our fãs are back home. I asked my friend ,"Do you think the fãs miss us?" she looked at me with surprise and said ,"Well of coarse they do" and so i smiled at her comment. ,"Hey Chrysalis?.." I asked silently. My friend replied ,"Yes?" I asked her ,"What is it like to be a changeling?"Chrysalis responded por saying ,"Well being a changeling is no different from being a regular pónei, pônei except our legs have holes in them and our wings are a little different also". I was interested in my best friend's perspective thinking that they aren't much different.
 "Well being a changeling is no different
"Well being a changeling is no different
posted by Seanthehedgehog
Running from Chicagoat to San Franciscolt is a railroad called the Union Pacific. It's the largest railroad in the United States, and is run por thousands of ponies. This is the story of some of those ponies that run the rails, aka railroading.

Episode 6: Percy's "Finest" Hour

May 21, 1951

You already know this, but bare with me. Percy fixes tracks on the Union Pacific. He usually works with his best friend Jeff, but today that would change.

Percy: *walks along station*
Pete: Percy, I have some bad news.
Percy: What is it?
Pete: Jeff isn't feeling well, and took the dia off. So we got you another...
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posted by NocturnalMirage
The last solstice

Chapter 24: Trust


That’s it! You have to do this! Nocturnal Mirage thought to himself.

Three days have passed since the unfortunate stargazing and during that time, Celestia remained unreachable. The royal blue stallion spent countless hours at her door, trying to get in touch with her again, and despite his reassuring and convincing words, nothing seemed to work. Remorse overwhelmed his soul like an icy flood and fear started to build up in his mind as he kept thinking about the consequences of his failure. He tried his best to correct the mistake he made, but to no avail....
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oi ppl! My last part was uh... Well I didt write it has well. So if this one is the same way just tell me becuae I'm trying to be the best writer I can! Thx for all the support and seanthehedgehog I'm sorry bout Bartholomew!!! I feel so bad :...(



"Oh hello princess!" Red rose said has she hastily put down her head so the princess could not see her face turning red. Coffee cream put down her head and rolled her eyes "I told you, you can't say those things in puplic anymore!"

Rose lifted her head and have an awkward smile "uh, what I said back their i didt really mean it. I Just uh was, well you...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Running from Chicagoat to San Franciscolt is a railroad called the Union Pacific. It's the largest railroad in the United States, and is run por thousands of ponies. This is the story of some of those ponies that run the rails, aka railroading.

Episode 5: War pony

May 15, 1951

The korean war has been going on for months. Everypony on the Union Pacific was doing their best to deliver supplies to Las Pegasus for use in the U.S military.

Gordon: *doing yard work*
Pete: Gordon, I have something for you to do.
Gordon: Great! I'm doing a lot of that here.
Pete: I want you to go to Las Pegasus.
Gordon:...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
The Nazi pilot was flying his airplane to the front of our train

Sean: He's going to bomb the tracks!! *goes to ladder*
Rainbow Dash: What are you doing?
Sean: Shooting that plane down before he destroys the rails! *climbs to roof*
Nazi pilot: *flying to the front of train*
Sean: *shoots airplane*
Nazi pilot: *turns around*
Sean: *stands still*
Nazi Pilot: Auf wiedershen hedgehog! *about to shoot guns*
Sean: *grabs airplane*
Nazi pilot: Was ist das?!
Sean: *throws airplane away*
Nazi pilot: NEIN!! *crashes*
Twilight: Man, is he ok?
Sean: No *climbs down* I'm better then that. I'm great!
Mane 6: Alright!!...
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posted by Canada24
The five mares finally approached where poor Twilight was being held.

but when they reached the door, it was trap, and they down a hole, and landed in the very cage area, we're Ganger, and possibly others, we're 'turned'.

"Well well, nice of you to 'drop' in" Chrysalis mocked.

Rainbow and AppleJack both growled at her, like angry cachorros almost.

"Haha, good seeing you two ladies" Chrysalis mocked.

"Let us outta of her!" arco iris, arco-íris ordered.

"Haha. Ditto's right, you ponies are cute when angry. But it's not gonna save you" Chrysalis replied.

"Some one say my name?" Ditto asked, coming into view.

"Oh Ditto....
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Back at Sweet maçã, apple Acres

RDP arco iris, arco-íris Dash: *wakes up* oi Applejack, where are we?
RDP Applejack: We're at Sweet maçã, apple Acres still. Why are we strapped to chairs?
RDP arco iris, arco-íris Dash: I don't know.
Applebloom: arco iris, arco-íris Dash? Applejack? What's going on?
RDP arco iris, arco-íris Dash: Uhhh. Big Mac is on crack! He tied us to these chairs for no reason!!
Applebloom: I didn't know he was obsessed with broken sidewalks. Anyways I gotta get you free *unties arco iris, arco-íris Dash*
RDP Applejack: Ok, now Dash untie me.
RDP arco iris, arco-íris Dash: Ok. *looks at rope* Uhhh. I'm not sure how to uh..
Applebloom: Seriously?
RDP arco iris, arco-íris Dash: *pushes...
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posted by applejackrocks1
It started to rain..

Nikki: UGH! I hate them!!!!

A mare approached in front of Nikki...

???: Hi!
Nikki: Uhh..Hi?
???: You hate Diamond Dancer too, huh?
Nikki: You know her?
???: And hate her. I work for her.
Nikki: Really? What your name?
???: I'm Sugar Sprinkles. Nice to meet you.
Nikki: What do you do for her?
Sugar: I'm her maid.
Nikki: I feel so bad for you.
Sugar: *giggles* What are you doing out here? It's raining.
Nikki: The train broke down and stuff.
Sugar: Hmm..Well, would you like to stay with me?
Nikki: *smiles* Really?
Sugar: Of course!
Nikki: Thank you so much!
Sugar: No problem. Follow me.

A few...
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posted by karinabrony
''King Sombra must have gotten them!'' Twilight Sparkle said. ''You're right. You must have to defeat him with your own power.'' Celestia said. They all nodded and ran out.

Nightmare Moon laughed and said, ''Now I will get to rule Equestria!''. King Sombra didn't care for anything as long as he got the crystal heart. He already had 1,000 crystals gathered.

''Twilight!'' Shining Armor and Cadence said. They needed her and her friends' help. ''I thought we can use our power with yours so we can defeat him.'' she said. ''But since he has all of the crystals, he is much too powerful.Right now he...
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posted by Dragon4322
 the spotlight
the spotlight
My sister and I left Twilight's house and went back to our house. I slowly crawled into cama when arco iris, arco-íris Dash came in and said ,"Goodnight Scootaloo please go to sleep" she told me with a smile ,"Okay Dash I will" i told her. arco iris, arco-íris closed the door and turned all the lights out in the house. I stayed in my cama for a few mais minutos and then silently crept out of my bed. i looked out the hall to make sure lights weren't on. Slowly hoof por hoof I made it to our back door and opened it quietly. I kept moving towards our back fence but at that moment a bright spotlight turned right on my body....
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posted by applejackrocks1
Back with the story....

(Meanwhile in this scene, this song starts to play:
link)

Applejack: *is very tierd* *coughs* Stop! Ah beg y'all!
Brawny: Stop being a wimp! Let me kill ya!
Applejack: *tries to swim Faster*
MP3: *blocks Applejack*
Applejack: AH! Get-
Brawny: *grabs Applejack*
Applejack: NO!
Brawny: *drags aguardente de maçã and ties her up*
Applejack: *coughs* No...*coughs*
Brawny: *grabs Axe*
MP2: FINISH HER BRAWNY!
Brawny: It's fair to give you some last words. Go on. *smirks*
Applejack: *sigh* *stands up weak* *eyes are wounded and red*
Brawny: >:(
Applejack: *whispers* I-I...Love you..*kisses Brawny*...
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The last solstice

Chapter 7: Battle at Ivory Tower


The heat is suffocating. It settles on the capital, like an invisible mass. There’s absolutely no natural air movement. No clouds on the light blue sky. Everypony stays indoors, if they can. Only a few figures saunter on the streets. Mostly young fillies and colts, roasting eggs on the hot pavement, or amor birds, chatting at cafés, under the shadow of tall oak trees. Everything’s quiet, as the fiery orb above continues to pour its light and warmness on the Equestrian landscape. This is the worst heat wave that struck Canterlot in over...
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Twilight: Not only did I lose my wings, but Celestia put a spell on me to make me sound like a black man!
Rainbow Dash: Wow. You can stay with us until Celestia makes you a princess again.
Twilight: thanks gurl.
Sean: *walks in house* Twilight? What happened to your wings?
Twilight: Man, I done too much stupid shit, and they got taken away.
Sean: Why do you sound black?
Twilight: That's another thing ah got for being idiotic.
Rainbow Dash: Who said you're idiotic? Sure you made a few wrong choices, but that doesn't make you retarted.
Sean: Yeah, I'm pretty sure Albert Einstein made some dumb choices....
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