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Blue Bolt- The new resident of Ponyville

posted by Dragon-88

Blue Bolt, the newest resident of Ponyville

Last story was halfway good, so this time I'm making it to where Blue Bolt's personality is fully revealed in this story. It all starts with Bolt arriving in Ponyville. He is new here, so he doesn't know much about the town or the residents. He is very shy, so he was nervous to talk to anyone. He thought his way of speech would make him appear weird. So he enters the house he was promised por some pónei, pônei who had blue curled hair and wore red glasses. He doesn't know who she was, but he will learn soon!

Bolt: This is a nice house. Who was she anyways? I just hope the residents are nice...

It is daytime, and he nervously looks outside, seeing many different ponies walking around and socializing. Pinkie Pie, who wants to find someone new to play with, goes to the house that used to be empty.

Pinkie: Hello? Anypony home? Can I come in? OK!

Pinkie opens the door(which was surprisingly unlocked) and walks around. She spots several pieces of paper on the ground, followed por several drawing utensils. She is amazed por this.

Pinkie: Whoa! This guy or girl must be quite the artist! Rarity wouldn't believe this!

Bolt is hiding from her, because he is shy around girls. He watched her pace back and forth, and accidentally blasts out a raio, ray from his horn.

Bolt: How do they control these things?

Pinkie: Huh? Someone there? I coulda sworn I heard a discharge of magic. Maybe he or she is a unicorn! Would you like a cupcake? You're a shy one...

Bolt: Yes...I would like one....

Pinkie: YIKES!! Who are you!?

Bolt: I'm a new resident. I'm B-Blue Bolt. Please don't hurt me.

Pinkie: ? Your'e just like Fluttershy! I'm Pinkie Pie! You like parties?

Bolt: I'm not into parties. People might think I'm weird.

Pinkie: You need to get out more. I like your name! Cool cutie mark. See you later, Bolt!

Pinkie leaves, leaving Bolt to make a decision. He chooses to go walk around town and see what it's like. He is still nervous about talking to anyone. He heads for Carousel Boutique to ask for help, but isn't sure how to present the question.

Rarity: Thanks, come again, darling! (notices Bolt) Hello, can I help you with something....Aren't you that shy unicorn I gave that house to? It's seguinte door to mine.

Bolt: Um....I suppose so. I didn't see your house, I'm new here...

Rarity: Something wrong, darling? I can show you around.

Bolt: (blushes) My, your beautiful....whoops!

Rarity: (blushes) Goodness, how kind of you to notice. You should go see Fluttershy. She's shy too. I'm sure she'll be great friends with you. That's what we're all about. Friendship!

Bolt walks outside, still blushing. Rarity was a beautiful pony, and he almost embarrassed himself. He just hopes he didn't look awkward in front of her! As he is walking around getting to know what's what and where, a blue pegasus with arco iris, arco-íris hair runs into him in mid-flight. It was arco iris, arco-íris Dash. Uh-oh...

Bolt: Excuse me....

Rainbow: Hey! Do you mind watching where your'e going? I almost broke my wing again...Huh? Are you that unicorn who lives in the house seguinte to Rarity's?

Bolt: Um....

Rainbow: What's the matter? Can't you talk? Your'e weird! (takes off)

Bolt: This isn't going well. She sounded like she wanted to kill me!

Bolt goes around shyly asking where Fluttershy's house is. He goes to her house, not knowing whether she was like arco iris, arco-íris Dash or not.

Bolt: (rings doorbell) Here we go...

Fluttershy: (opens door) Hi....Who are you?

Bolt: Uh...I'm Blue Bolt....Sorry, I get nervous around girls.....

Fluttershy: It's fine. I'm shy too.

Bolt: No way! That's awesome! por the way, you know the pónei, pônei with the blonde hair and wearing a cowboy hat?

Fluttershy: Applejack?

Bolt: So that's her name...Well, I caught myself looking at her, and when she looked at me, I blushed and ran.

Fluttershy: So you like her?

Bolt: (blushes) Y-yes. It's my secret.

aguardente de maçã walks in, bringing in a look of surprise.

AJ: What the hay? Are you that unicorn who was lookin' at me? You ran off without sayin' anything!

Bolt: Oh no, another violent one...

AJ: What? I'm not like Dash, not one bit. Do ya like me sugarcube?

Fluttershy: Oh, my....(looks at Bolt)

Bolt: (blushes) Um...oh gosh..yes.

AJ: Well, aren't ya' sweet! (kisses Bolt)

Fluttershy is stunned.

AJ: Congrats, big boy. I'm your girlfriend. See ya later!

Fluttershy: Um, what just happened?

Bolt: amor happened. She's so cute! I'm off to see more.

Bolt sees a purple unicorn being followed por a small purple dragon. It was Twilight and Spike.

Twilight: Spike! I told you to not eat the ingredients like a thousand times! We haven't even gotten início to start cooking....

Spike: Sorry, I was hungry....

Bolt: Hello....

Twilight: Hi! I've never seen you before. You new here?

Bolt: Yes, and so far only arco iris, arco-íris has me at a distance.

Spike: Hey, he wears glasses, and he's a unicorn. He can help you with spells.

Bolt: If I knew how to control this stuff....I almost zapped Pinkie por accident!

Spike: Can I try on your glasses?

Bolt: I need them to see.

Twilight goes to tell Celestia about Bolt, followed por Spike. Meanwhile, arco iris, arco-íris is flying and sees Bolt.

Rainbow: I hope he doesn't hate me for what happened earlier. I can be so stupid sometimes! Hey, new guy!

Bolt: Oh, it's you. Are you going to yell at me again?

Rainbow: It was just an accident, I get carried away sometimes. I'm arco iris, arco-íris Dash, the fastest flyer in Equestria! What's your name? I see you have quite a unique cutie mark. You fast?

Bolt: I'm Blue Bolt. I'm one of the fastest among unicorns, probably. The thing I'm truly good at is drawing. Gaming is just one of my activities. Drawing is my main hobby.

Rainbow: Cool! We should hang out sometime, Bolt. You got yourself a friend.

Bolt: segundo friend. Fluttershy's my first friend.

Rainbow: No problem. I'm ok with it.

Bolt is now becoming mais confident after taking a walk around Ponyville. He met the mane six (he met Pinkie at his house), and had a good idea what was where. He is still shy, but is also confident. He is in amor with Applejack, who loves him back. His personality is shy, cool, and admires girls, not to mention secretly competitive. Maybe at some point he'll have ground races with arco iris, arco-íris Dash! This is about Bolt learning about Ponyville, what everyone is like, ad where everything is. I tried making it sound like Ponyville didn't revolve around him.

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NocturnalMirage Hmm, it was much better. It felt more "real" than last time. Yeah, I just realized I'm speaking of reality in the world of technicolor pastel ponies... haha! Anyways, nice job! :) Just one thing: it felt to me like you've rewritten the story in a way to show what I had in mind. It is always a good thing to try to fulfill the desires of your readers, but it is also important to keep your own writing style at the same time. But most importantly: enjoy yourself while writing something. Oh that reminds me. Do you consider a sequel? Cos now that you've established your character, the possibilities are limitless. :)

Dragon-88 Good idea! I'l make a sequel! I just don't know how to fulfill the desires of those who read my articles. Do they want the sequel to be more awesome? More Rainbow Dash/Pinkie Pie? Princess Celesia spending time with Blue Bolt? What more ideas could they want? Maybe in the sequel, Applejack and Blue Bolt will take their relationship to the next level! Or Pinkie will show him how to party!

NocturnalMirage Two things... 1. write what you wish to write, the ideas you said above can all be the foot-stone of your story. 2. I can understand it is hard to know what your readers think when most of the people don't reflect to the story. Only a few people here take the time to make a comment. But that doesn't have to be a reason to become discouraged. I don't know about you, but for me, writing is a hobby... gratification. It's a good way to enter the magical world of ponies and get away from the complexities and ugliness of life for a while. If people like your work, that's a good extra. One pretty basic tip I always find useful. One of my teachers said in Creative Writing class: "Don't tell the reader, show it to them!" It means you manage to create a certain atmosphere to the story. There are different writing styles and each writer has to find their own way to convey their thoughts to the reader. In your case, the dialogues move the plot forward. You've done a pretty good job on that already, so I'm looking forward to read form you in the future. Oh and if you need any help, you can almost always find me here on fanpop. :)

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Pegasister of the Week: sweet_cream

posted by MissMichele

How does it feel to win Pegasister of the week?
It's a great feeling! I never expected to win. Thanks for everyone who voted for me! :D

Did you like the Season 3 premiere?
Yes, I loved the cryst ponies! Also, Princess Luna and Celestia having conversation I was expecting that! And we get to know mais about Princess Cadence.

Favorite stallion? favorito mare?
Braeburn and Applejack.

What do you think of King Sombra
He is a great villian, but I wish he had mais important roles like the other villians.

Did you like the crystal-y Mane Six? If so, which was your favorite?
Yes! aguardente de maçã and Fluttershy were...

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my little pony:tree friends are magic chapter 4

posted by flippy_fan210

Chapter 4: The irresponsible

it was a week after Flaky came to Ponyville, she was getting along well with Fluttershy and didn't talk to very many other ponies.

Flippy was sitting in Twilight's library, where he lived now. He was leitura a book about video games in case Nutty started liking them again.

Twilight ran into the room Flippy was in, she had to tell him news she had just found out from the princess. “Flippy, you might wanna hear this.” she said.

“what?” Flippy said, setting down the book.

“another árvore friend is coming today, it's a dad with his son.”

“what, them? The guy...

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Hedgeghog in ponyville part 8

posted by Seanthehedgehog

When I get back to the battlefield, I accidentally turned the radio on, and A view to A kill por Duran Duran starts playing at high volume. Every pónei, pônei was fighting off Robotnik's army until the elements of harmony were found. I decided to get back in the battle, por running over some enemies, and shooting at others I missed. Meanwhile aguardente de maçã jumped on a badnik that attacked Big Mack. "You allright?" She asked her big brother. Big Macintosh replied with his trademark "Eeyup." Then he kicked a nazi behind him, while Pinkie blew his brains out. "Oh no, I'm out of ammo." Pinkie said, but she threw...

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Hedgehog in Ponyville part 4

posted by Seanthehedgehog

After breakfast I drive out of Sweet maçã, apple acres. I planned to go check out Canterlot, perhaps stay there for a few hours, and go check out the train station. Mobius never had trains because we didn't need them. I planned on changing that, and maybe having my own private rail line. I would let some people on if i wanted, but if I didn't know who a person was that wanted to get on my train line, they would be dead. As I think about trains my car runs out of gas. It was a good thing I came prepared, having 3 canisters of gasoline in the trunk, because there were no gas stations in Equestria....

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Hedgehog in ponyville

posted by Seanthehedgehog

My name is Sean The Hedgehog. I was born in a place called Mobius, and lived there with my cousin Sonic. Mobius is nice, but it gets attacked a lot por a guy named Robotnik. He noticed how powerful i was, and decided to turn me into a robot. So i moved out of Mobius, and ended up somewhere i liked, but did not know existed. It happened when I used chaos control. I was in my car, with all my stuff packed, shoes, guns, ammo, etc. I drove for a while then used my chaos emerald. "Chaos Control!", and thats when it happened. I ended up here in one shot which was surprising because it usually takes...

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A short excerpt from The mystery of happiness

posted by whiteclaw

Somewhere beyond the bloody murders and misery, there is a calm and tranquil desert. Near Appleloosa, there is a group of photographers, taking professional pictures of nature for an article. And among them, there is a potro, colt named Featherweight. He is intrigued and oblivious to his surroundings, he is only focused on what he can see through his camera lens. How unfortunate that he could not see the oncoming guards.

They were wielding a loaded magnum and shotgun. He shouted at the topo, início of his lungs; "WHO ARE YOU INTERLOPERS?!" the group surrendered and assured him they were just photographers....

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I was here first! CHAPTER ONE

posted by Canada24

It was anouther beauitful dia in Ponyvile.

Twilight was trying to tidy liberary room. Spike was fast asleep, and Twilight eventually had to wake him up.

"I don't want to get up" Spike groaned, lazily.

"Oh come on Spike, there's alot to done today" Twilight replied.

Spike groaned, but started getting up.

"Good boy" Twilight said, smiling.

Twilight and Spike were walking through Ponyvile.

Spike was carrying a little red wagon, and Twilight was using magic so she could look at her to do list.

"Okay, first on the list, is return that book I borrowed... Spike, you still have it?"

"Wait here" Spike said,...

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another blue rose part 5

posted by epicskyrimfan56

i couldnt sleep so i walked around the castelo hallways. i went up to the balcony. and thats when i saw her. a dark blue pónei, pônei that looked like the princess. i went to talk to her. she said her name was luna. she told me all about her inprisonment on the moon. its funny i always thought someone was watchin me up there. we got along verry well. the sun was rising. i let her sleep . me and the rest of the ponies then headed for the everfree forest. along the way they asked me about myself. itold them and they seemed sad. even pinkie. they tried to help me out. it was kind of them. we then arrived at the everfree forest....

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Discord is Back part 3

posted by applejackrocks

So, AJ and Pinkie Pie walked and walked and walked, but it never seemed they were closer to Canterlot. Suddenly they got lost, and it was dark....

Pinkie: are we there yet?
AJ: No
Pinkie: how about now?
AJ: no
Pinkie: now?
AJ: NO!!!

*silence*

Pinkie: oi AJ?
AJ: yea?
Pinkie: Do you know where we are?
AJ: .....no....
Pinkie: what are we going to do now? we need help! we're going to die!!!!
AJ: calm down pinkie....we'll be okay...for now....
Pinkie: brrrr! its cold out here...
AJ: here, take my scarf (hands over scarf to pinkie)
Pinkie: thanks, but what about you?
AJ: I'll be okay....
Pinkie: can we rest?
AJ:...

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The Equestrian Army chapter 1

posted by DE4DLIESTP0NY

(Originally written at link por me )

Equestria, a thriving land for ponies everywhere. Protected por the elements of harmony, its impervious to any intruders. Nothing bad ever happens and all is nice, but it wasn't always this way. Years atrás there was a dark time, a war that changed the future of the land, and made it the peaceful and perfect place that it is today.

It began one fateful dia on the hills outside of Cheval City, one of the earlier settlements. Nova Sunshine, (OC) a young, intelligent mercenary with a red mane and tail, yellow body, and light rosa, -de-rosa eyes; hoof-picked...

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Equestrian Tales~Chapter Nine

posted by Tawnyjay

Chapter 9: arco iris, arco-íris Dash

When I woke up, the first thing I thought was “Where’s Pinkie?” I hurriedly scrambled to my hooves and let out a yell.
    Discord—yes, Discord-- was peering through the “door” (more like a big scoop taken out of the boulder). I instinctively flapped my wings, and, streaking toward him, kicked him hard on the face.
    Twilight awoke when she heard his screech of pain. “OH MY CELESTIA!” she screamed as she saw him. Fluttershy whimpered and ducked behind Rarity, who was now on her hooves.
    Applejack...

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Ju-On The Gruge

posted by pikachu700

me: *walking with my dog but all the sudden sniffs something*
*walks nerby a factory*
me: Don't go in there dog there might be something in there
Dog: *TOO late*
(sees pónei, pônei in factory)
DOG: *Chases her*
me: DOGGY NUUUU
me: oh that devil *aculal name* Running off like that i wonder what she saw this factory looks like it hasn't been used forever well, she's not comeing out on her own... i'd better go find her
*goes inside*
*door locks itself*
me: WTF *trys to open it but door knobe broke*
*sees Devil (my dog)* *door closes*
me: *opens door* *sees bloody pónei, pônei right in front of door*
me: OMFG *slams door*
*grabs...

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Twilight's Adventure In Darkness Part 3

posted by Mylittlecute12

After Twilight and esmeralda left from Zecora's House they saw Chaos in ponyville! Twilight what's happening said Emerald! Its its Discord Said Twilight. Twilight Say hello to my little friend said Discord
(roar!) said Dark shadow. Run! said esmeralda and twilight. What are we going to! Said Emerald. Oh great its dark again and we don't know if that monster is chasing us! said Twilight.
(Roar!) Said dark shadow. Yes he is chasing us said Twilight. Go get them Dark shadow says Discord. Oh no he got us cornered were trapped said Twilight! Say hello to your fate Says Discord.

To be continued.....................

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Locating The Elements Of Harmony(Part 1: Princess Celestia's Letter)

posted by noahnstar1616

"This can't be happening", said a weak Twilight after using her horn to blast magic beams at changeling minions. She lied on the ground, defeated. "If only we located the Elements of Harmony in time..."
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It was a normal dia in Ponyville. Everypony was doing what they always did. Twilight was reading, AJ was bucking apples, RD was clearing the clouds, Fluttershy was tending to her animals, Pinkie was baking cupcakes, and Rarity was making dresses.

Just then, Spike burped out a letter....

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Pinkie's journey pt. 2

posted by mariofan14

Pinkie Pie, along with Trixie, ventured into the Everfree Forest in hopes of finding both Pound and abóbora Cake before their parents find out they were gone. It was going to be a long and hard quest, for there was a lot of danger inside the forest. Would two ponies really survive in the wilderness? It's time to see...

Both Pinkie and Trixie had walked through a lot of places inside the forest without taking the wrong step, because Trixie had been using her navigation skills for help. From Froggybottom Bog to the Ursa's cave, they kept on going, and going, and going... But they meet a dead end...

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Gilda's return pt. 4 (epilogue)

posted by mariofan14

After a lot of work for-a the forgiveness party, Pinkie Pie had everything prepared for-a the occasion. She-a then began inviting everypony to-a the occasion, including Gilda, but she-a had to-a apologize to the Ponyville citizens for-a the trouble she-a caused to them. They-a then forgave her and trust her. What's there to-a not forgive, huh?

Anyways, the party needed one mais guest: arco iris, arco-íris Dash. "Are we gonna have a good time or what?" Gilda asked. Of course we are, Gilda!" said Pinkie Pie. "Dashie would never want to miss any party being thrown por me or anypony else!" Everypony was eager...

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Gilda's return pt. 3

posted by mariofan14

As-a we catch up on-a the griffon, we-a also see arco iris, arco-íris Dash chasing her, but also being as silent as-a can be. The griffon then makes a stop, but where? An maçã, apple cart, the exact one she-a roubou from, but-a why? She had to-a pay for-a what she-a took. Slowly, but surely, Rainbow's suspicion grew.

Along came Pinkie Pie, who-a was trotting along down
the bustling town streets, until she-a bumped into Gilda. "AAAAHHHHH!!!" She-a ran away, but-a Gilda went after her, and-a the arco iris, arco-íris pegasus flies after the griffon, still being silent.

Gilda soon got a hold of-a Pinkie Pie. "What do you want from...

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Once upon a Fluttershy...pt. 8(The Song)

posted by noahnstar1616

The beginning of this story starts with a song. It will go back to Fluttershy's perspective in the seguinte part.
.....
Queen Chrysalis
*walking through Ponyville as Fluttershy*
Not that I'm back,
No pónei, pônei shall stop me
From the attack
Of my minions of changlings

Fluttershy
*running through Everfree forest*
I must stop her
From wreaking havoc
On Ponyville
And if I don't
It will be tragic

Q.C.
Soon, and very soon
Every pónei, pônei shall see
I will once again
Reign supreme

Fluttershy
I must get
Out very soon
Or else Pony-
ville will be doomed
*makes it out of Everfree forest*

Q.C.
*arrives at arco iris, arco-íris Dash's house*
Now this is where things get....

Fluttershy
Oh goodness this isn't....

Q.C. and Fluttershy
Fun!
.....

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Derpy Returns

posted by drwhoovesluvr

My Little Pony: Friendship is magic
Derpy returns
Written by: Drwhoovesluvr
Scene 1:The Bin
(fan save derpy)

Derpy:
Hi. My name is Derpy Hooves. I used to be loved por many. I made them laugh. Then one dia I decided to come out and talk to them.
(tears up)
They called me names: stupid, retarded, offensive
(tear drops)
I just don't know what went wrong.
(another tear)
I'm sorry every pony.
(sniffles a lot)
I-I-It's okay. It's okay-
(Pinky jumps in)

Pinky Pie:
Actually yes! It is!

Derpy:
Wha-?

Pinky Pie:
Celestia says that oi apologized! She's giving you a queque, muffin comprar right seguinte to my bolinho, queque shop! OMG and you get to have me throw you a party!!!!
(Derpy glows as Pinky walks her back to Equestria from the "Bin")

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Once upon a Fluttershy...pt. 5(The Adventure)

posted by noahnstar1616

.....
The seguinte day, I was feeling much better. I still couldn't fly because of my wing, though. So I just stayed in my house and played with Angel. "I wish my wing would heal already, Angel."

"I think I could help." Twilight Sparkle came in.

I turned to face her. "What do you mean?"

"I know a spell that could heal your wing."

"Really? Do it! Do it, please!"

"Okay, okay." Twilight closed her eyes and her horn started to glow.

I saw my left wing glow, too. "It's working!" I started flapping my wings together. "Thank you, Twilight!"

"You're wel-"

I flew out of my house at lightning speed. "Must. Find....