This is just a trailer of my new story coming up...
Well, obviously, this isn't the first chapter, but I'm wanting your opinion on a few of things.
-Title
-Characters
-Etc
So, anyway, if you want your character in it, comment.
So, let's get on with it.
[10 Years ago]
"Son, take this with you."
I looked up at my father with tears in my eyes. I was only a few years of age, and I hadn't learned much. I was on training to becoming an Invader, but I had no interest in it. It seemed pointless to become one. I thought as soon as you became one, you were sent on a lethal mission to your own death, so I slacked off during class and only payed attention when my father talked. He talked of many things, like the planets he conquered, and something called Conspirators of the Dawn. I had no idea what they were, but I knew they were against my father and his work, but from my what my father told me, it was a myth. I learned that dia that it wasn't.
I grabbed my fathers golden bottlecap, wondering what it was, and why my father wanted me to have it. I had only known my father for a short time, and I begged any God out there to save my father from whoever was against us, but as hard as I prayed, nothing happened to him. His lifeless corpse was in my hands.
I knew that dia that it was my job to find them... Through all the explosions, and souless bodys crying for help, a voice wrang through my head.
It was screeching in a tone that I couldn't understand, but I could make out two words, Marcario Delva...
(Well, that's the trailer, thanks for reading. POST A COMMENT! :3 )
Well, obviously, this isn't the first chapter, but I'm wanting your opinion on a few of things.
-Title
-Characters
-Etc
So, anyway, if you want your character in it, comment.
So, let's get on with it.
[10 Years ago]
"Son, take this with you."
I looked up at my father with tears in my eyes. I was only a few years of age, and I hadn't learned much. I was on training to becoming an Invader, but I had no interest in it. It seemed pointless to become one. I thought as soon as you became one, you were sent on a lethal mission to your own death, so I slacked off during class and only payed attention when my father talked. He talked of many things, like the planets he conquered, and something called Conspirators of the Dawn. I had no idea what they were, but I knew they were against my father and his work, but from my what my father told me, it was a myth. I learned that dia that it wasn't.
I grabbed my fathers golden bottlecap, wondering what it was, and why my father wanted me to have it. I had only known my father for a short time, and I begged any God out there to save my father from whoever was against us, but as hard as I prayed, nothing happened to him. His lifeless corpse was in my hands.
I knew that dia that it was my job to find them... Through all the explosions, and souless bodys crying for help, a voice wrang through my head.
It was screeching in a tone that I couldn't understand, but I could make out two words, Marcario Delva...
(Well, that's the trailer, thanks for reading. POST A COMMENT! :3 )
It was a normal night. I went to go on Fanpop, but was suddenly sucked into another dimension. I got up. It was a Psychonauts/Invader Zim/Danny Phantom/Fanboy and Chum Chum/JtHM world! She stayed for a very long time.
But
they
didn't
have
Wi-Fi!
DUHN DUHN DUHN!
Then I ticked Nny off, he killed me, and I came back to life.
Naw what REALLY happened is I didn't have Internet ALL summer cuz my Pop was being stupid and got rid of it, then I moved in with my Aunt, and forgot about fanpop for a while. CUZ DA TEMPTED ME.
But
they
didn't
have
Wi-Fi!
DUHN DUHN DUHN!
Then I ticked Nny off, he killed me, and I came back to life.
Naw what REALLY happened is I didn't have Internet ALL summer cuz my Pop was being stupid and got rid of it, then I moved in with my Aunt, and forgot about fanpop for a while. CUZ DA TEMPTED ME.
Its alright because I like the way it hurts.....
My coração has been burned. My soul has left. He left........I never thought he would do that. We changed schools. He stopped talking to me......He's with an other girl.......I hate you, don't come running back....Thanks Noah......
You just stand there and watch me burn
I'm left, its my turn
I will never go back
Don't turn on me....I'm there
Waiting..........for your scare
You hear me pray.....
Go away....
I hate you.
Something thats not on fanpop but I just wanted to write this.........
My coração has been burned. My soul has left. He left........I never thought he would do that. We changed schools. He stopped talking to me......He's with an other girl.......I hate you, don't come running back....Thanks Noah......
You just stand there and watch me burn
I'm left, its my turn
I will never go back
Don't turn on me....I'm there
Waiting..........for your scare
You hear me pray.....
Go away....
I hate you.
Something thats not on fanpop but I just wanted to write this.........
Okay, I'm having a contest on DevaintART.com. I need picys of Zim being evil or a badboy and becoming emporer of earth, and Bim(StarBurst) marries him, making her the emperess. And, Oogie Boogie (NightMareBeforeChristmas) has adopted zim as a son.
Rules: NO PORONOS!!!
NO KILLING THE MAIN CHARACTERS!!!!...except Dib XD OH OH AND TAK!!! AND OTHER ZIMFANGIRLZ!!! XD jk
NO PICS OF ZIM BEING NICE!!!!
NO PICS OF ANYONE HURTING OR KILLING ZIM!!!!
Okay, i think i cleared that up. X3
Do ur best, u may use bases if u want.
Why am i doing this? I'm making a vid on youtube of Zim being the emporer of earth, i'm using the hard rock version of Toxic for background music. X3
I have not thought of a deadline, but. The winner gets a ano of free requests from me. X3
Who ever gets the most views wins. X3
Good luck.
Rules: NO PORONOS!!!
NO KILLING THE MAIN CHARACTERS!!!!...except Dib XD OH OH AND TAK!!! AND OTHER ZIMFANGIRLZ!!! XD jk
NO PICS OF ZIM BEING NICE!!!!
NO PICS OF ANYONE HURTING OR KILLING ZIM!!!!
Okay, i think i cleared that up. X3
Do ur best, u may use bases if u want.
Why am i doing this? I'm making a vid on youtube of Zim being the emporer of earth, i'm using the hard rock version of Toxic for background music. X3
I have not thought of a deadline, but. The winner gets a ano of free requests from me. X3
Who ever gets the most views wins. X3
Good luck.
My message: okay, the picture you posted came straight from my DA account. Its my photography. Why did you steal it? I took the picture myself and you just posted it here. Then your accepting compliments from people when it's not even your art! I'm very upset por this! Why did you steal MY photography?!
Her reply: WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT BITCH?! I DIDNT STEAL NO ONES ART! FUCKING ASSHOLE FOR ACCUSING ME OF THIS!! I BLOCKED YOU AND ANY OTHER PUSSY friends YOU HAVE! YOU KEEP ACCUSING ME OF STEALING ART WHEN REALLY, YOU roubou MINE FUCKER!!! I FUCKING HATE YOU LITTLE MOTHER FUCKER! FUCK OFF YOU BITCH! GO WORK A CORNER AND RUB YOUR MOLDY PUSSY ON SOMEONES HEAD! FUCKING BITCH!
I would like you guys to write her each a response letter. Im so pissed right now, I'm actually atuação civilized.
Her reply: WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT BITCH?! I DIDNT STEAL NO ONES ART! FUCKING ASSHOLE FOR ACCUSING ME OF THIS!! I BLOCKED YOU AND ANY OTHER PUSSY friends YOU HAVE! YOU KEEP ACCUSING ME OF STEALING ART WHEN REALLY, YOU roubou MINE FUCKER!!! I FUCKING HATE YOU LITTLE MOTHER FUCKER! FUCK OFF YOU BITCH! GO WORK A CORNER AND RUB YOUR MOLDY PUSSY ON SOMEONES HEAD! FUCKING BITCH!
I would like you guys to write her each a response letter. Im so pissed right now, I'm actually atuação civilized.
invader-kia:Hey emo were are my tickets to the show, concerto invaderzimemo:.... invader-kia>:( invaderzimemo:hehe long story invader-kia:TELL ME invaderzj]imemo:ok ok FLASH BACK i was holding the tickets because my pak was already ful until i saw invader-kia:let me guess ash(as a wolf) invaderzimemo:LET ME FINISH THE STORY!! so i saw ash and i i throw the tickets and chased after ash invader-kia: THOSE TICKETS COST OVER 100 MONIES WHY DO YOU LOSE THEM TO CHASE A lobo THAT ALLWAYS SCRACHES YOUR FACE invaderzimemo:because shes such a cute lobo :) invader-kia: DO YOU EVER TAKE ANYTHING SERIOUSE invaderzimemo:no invader-kia:GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR