Is this good?

He suffered for years

My eyes are filled with tears

But unable to cry

I stood por and watched him die

I hated myself for not trying to lend a hand

But I didn’t know what to do

He suffered from an addiction each dia

I didn’t say anything and I pretended like everything was okay

I knew for so long That there was something wrong

As he grew mais distant from me

Then that dia when I saw the pictures of him getting high

It was a sight that I couldn’t bare to see

So I made myself believe that he couldn’t

And he wouldn’t Hurt me that way I was living a lie

Months passed por

And finally he came clean

And promised you would quit

Though he kept it

And it hurts me to say

The addiction is what killed him

I all I could do is pray

That God won’t take my dad away

But He did

God relieved him from his suffering

I want him here with me

But when I saw him there

He was so free from the pain

I couldn’t wish him back, so he could suffer again

You had an addiction

And it kills me to say

The addiction is why you’re not alive today
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Yes Its Awesome
silvaria_fan23 posted over a year ago
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...you dont have a dad either..
PuNkRoCk123 posted over a year ago
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that was so butiful.......im so sorry u lost your dad but the poem was breath taking and so buitiful
meranda123 posted over a year ago
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I started to cry :'(
Breanna1 posted over a year ago
 E-rock posted over a year ago
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amethyst44 said:
really good. has much depth into it. even though its a poem, i wish there was mais to it. i liked it so much i want to read more!! again, very good. is this from your own experience?
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posted over a year ago 
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Yess. my best friend od'd with heroin
E-rock posted over a year ago
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oh how sad :( a very good poem i think (he?) would be very proud that you did this for him.
amethyst44 posted over a year ago
XxemoeeveexX said:
Astounding...
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scarsdntfade said:
Wow this poem is really good and im sorry to hear about your friend. That must have been horrible for you to go through that.
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princess829 said:
It's awesome. The only part that I don't really quite understand is that if it's about your best friend then why does it say: That God won’t take my dad away? Just wondering if thats a typo or something? Just curious.
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posted over a year ago 
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Yeah i lost my dad too so i messed it up :\
E-rock posted over a year ago
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Oh, well thats ok. I feel really bad for you-my coração goes out to you
princess829 posted over a year ago
leahp12 said:
this is relly good!
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dearjohnlOv3r23 said:
yeah i like it. e-rock::
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and i lost my mom when i was little. so i can feel u brother.
dearjohnlOv3r23 posted over a year ago
TOTALFan said:
Wickedness, I write poems myself, this is por far the best I've read from a not famous poet.
I hope mais people notice ur talent.
U feel the poem.
U know it.
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kwlski4ever said:
It's awesome =)
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meranda123 said:
wow thats..... like realy.... wow u are very poetic it was buitiful, im very sorry u lost your dad. i dont no what to say.
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