The poem is all in Flynn's perspective. It's just about all the things he loves about Rapunzel and about them. Hope you like it and if you didn't, criticism is warmly welcomed! Please leave some comments below! Also, any ideas for a proper title? :)
Caution: FLUFF ENSUES. IF YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE FLUFF, STEP OUT OF THE FICTION.
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A radiant glow and a bubbling charm,
Big esmeralda eyes and a smile to disarm.
Ingenuously laughs and giggles like honey
Everywhere she wonders always seems sunny.
You're so creative and so wonderfully bright.
With every portrait of me, you always got my nose right.
Your lively spirit is oh so beguiling.
Every night, I go to cama smiling.
She was a flower, deprived of sun.
I was a thief, always on the run.
She was faultless, I was flawed.
When brown met green, my coração was thawed.
Stumbled into a tower, I didn't have a clue
How my world would be shifted, once I saw you.
Forever and now is all we have to share.
The hair may be gone, but the magic's still there.
30. cinderela brainds
29. Rapunzel long and loose
28. cinderela wedding updo
27. Ariel loose with flower
26. Tiana bun
25. Ariel wedding updo
24. cinderela maid updo
23. Ariel with blue bow
22. mulan short hair
21. Snow White with red bow
29. Rapunzel long and loose
28. cinderela wedding updo
27. Ariel loose with flower
26. Tiana bun
25. Ariel wedding updo
24. cinderela maid updo
23. Ariel with blue bow
22. mulan short hair
21. Snow White with red bow
After doing the mais modern princesses, I switched to the classics, who are accused of being Mary Sues a lot. (I might not do ones for Merida and Tiana, since they pretty obviously aren't Mary Sues). Starting with Cinderella.
Unique traits without contacts or hair dye- No. She has blonde hair and blue eyes, common traits.
An odd name- Yes. It'd make sense if it was explained cinderela was a nickname and her real name is Ella, like in some versions, but it isn't in the film. 1.
Looks constantly commented on- Yes. cinderela is described as beautiful, and the prince considers her the most...
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Unique traits without contacts or hair dye- No. She has blonde hair and blue eyes, common traits.
An odd name- Yes. It'd make sense if it was explained cinderela was a nickname and her real name is Ella, like in some versions, but it isn't in the film. 1.
Looks constantly commented on- Yes. cinderela is described as beautiful, and the prince considers her the most...
This is another Mary Sue test. I decided to do Elsa after Anna. I think she's accused of being a Mary Sue mais (though neither of them are accused much).
Unique traits without contacts or hair dye- Platinum blonde hair isn't super common, though it can be explained por her ice powers (but it isn't made clear that's the explanation like with Rapunzel). .5
An odd name- No. 'Elsa' isn't that odd of a name.
Looks constantly commented on- No. I can't remember Elsa's looks being commented on much.
Always the hero- No. I can't remember her saving anyone aside from herself.
Multiple characters falling...
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Unique traits without contacts or hair dye- Platinum blonde hair isn't super common, though it can be explained por her ice powers (but it isn't made clear that's the explanation like with Rapunzel). .5
An odd name- No. 'Elsa' isn't that odd of a name.
Looks constantly commented on- No. I can't remember Elsa's looks being commented on much.
Always the hero- No. I can't remember her saving anyone aside from herself.
Multiple characters falling...
Ariel blonde, so pretty! Prettier then Belle and Aurora!
This time with black eyes but still amazingly beautiful
" Look at me, aren't I am pretty, so blonde?"
Well, Om Nelle may not be a disney princess, but mulan isn't actually a princess either. Her heroism made mulan a princess, even though she had nothing to do with the royal family. Om Nelle does a lot of heroics. Just like a Mulan. Moreover, it even has a crown. A tiara with a cute blue stone. But there are a few problems. For example, this crown is actually a belt. Also, even if this was a real crown, Om Nelle has nothing to do with royalty. Om Nelle is a creature, so not a human. That's okay because Nala in The Lion King is also an animal but is considered a disney Princess. Now the only problem is, disney didn't create Om Nelle. So she may be a princess in her own right, but never a disney princess. She would still make a great disney princess out of her.
Love is in the Air!
She's gentle, kind, and clumsy and is Valente enough to stand up to Clayton even when he has a gun -BB2010
I amor how awkward yet interesting she is; I admire her bravery and empathy, and I like how she has a talent for drawing and curiosity for the jungle life. I amor her relationship with Tarzan, one of my favorito disney couples; her design is really pretty as well -WhiteLagoon13
Everything! She is smart, she is dedicated to her work, but I also amor that her "damsel" moments are the result of her being in an unfamiliar situation, and that she learns to adjust to her new environment por the end of the movie. -Swanpride
I amor how awkward yet interesting she is; I admire her bravery and empathy, and I like how she has a talent for drawing and curiosity for the jungle life. I amor her relationship with Tarzan, one of my favorito disney couples; her design is really pretty as well -WhiteLagoon13
Everything! She is smart, she is dedicated to her work, but I also amor that her "damsel" moments are the result of her being in an unfamiliar situation, and that she learns to adjust to her new environment por the end of the movie. -Swanpride
