Hi, I really like your poem. Posted over a year ago

poem,,,,,,if anythng wrong plz correct it

(I)every time has meaning,
meaning has no pretend mean,
tht time i saw something,
from which i got a trouble life..........
(2)when surrounding life became a heap,
indeed i was like sweep,
fogo was on burning ,
rain continue on blowing,,,,,,,,,
(3) utter in my few words
tht become a rush ,
getting into poem of my life
words become sentence of light
.......ashish sharma Posted over a year ago

if ths magic create me like ths to write poem ,,,,which i never thoght ,,,my words become sentence,,, Posted over a year ago

I Utter few words ..tht like a rain in my heart,,,,but i want to write smthng abt whole world Posted over a year ago