Twilight Eclipse 09/09/09

I'm composição literária a fanfic called "Almost Alice" about Alice, Jacob, Jasper, and Bella, and I'd really like it if you'd review. If you like it, I can put up a link to the story (which is much farther along than the first chapter, I can tell you that). And if you're gonna be mean about it, don't bother commenting. Thanks!
-Alice <3

Almost Alice
Chapter One: Smoke


“I win,” Alice said smugly, holding out her hand towards Edward. “Again.”

Edward rolled his eyes as he searches his backpack for Alice’s “prize.” I smiled. She was getting to be exactly like Jasper, always betting on something....

Mysterious love

-chapter one-



It was my first dia of 11th grade.My alarm clock went off I stayed in cama for a little while I didnt want too get up.But after a miniute or two I just got up.I went too my closet and pick out some clothes really it was just what I seen first.After I dressed my self I went down stairs too see my father in the cozinha makeing coffee.Soon he would be on his way too work, just like every day.My father is a lawyer for the town of Bartonville,Arkansas. Every body liked him thoughs who didnt did not know him very well,but he is very queit kinda like me.Him and my mother...

bella's pov

edward took my hand and we walk toward my parents

when my mother look at me her eyes got wider and my dad look surprized
edward was still holding my hand i was getting mais nervous with each step a took foward

"Hello mother , father" my mother nodded and also my father
after a minuto of silence
then my father look at edward
"Are you carlisle younger brother Edward??" my dad ask and look at me when he said his name

probably remembering when i interrupt him and said edwards name i look at edward and he was repressing a smile probably someone was thinking something funny
my edward was...

bella's pov

edward sigh heavily took my hands between his and started to talk

"it all started one dia at the hospital a couple months ago.." he said slowly he look at my face my face was curious and interest in hearing mais
he touch my cheek and continue mais quickly
"so i lied at the party when i told you i didn't knew you "

" I was workin in the hospital as a helper of my brother i was organizing some papers when i heard that all of the young male thoughts turn excited and extreamly happy"

wait the thoughts he heard????
but i didn't said anything i thought that maybe if i interrupted he wouldn't...

The car is warm and as we drive off the reservation, my mind can only think of my dreams. They were so real so life like. They felt like the were really happening . My future couldn't already be set por my nightmares, could it?

"What are you thinking about?" Jacob ask's me, never removing his eyes from the road. He is so good at setting the mood.

"Life, in general." I answer, not wanting him to worry. His face looks emotionless.

"I'm a good listener." he turns to me and smiles. "Really whats up?" He ask stoping the car.

"I'm just worried thats all."

"Do you want to go se Carlisle?" His expression...

I watched my Aunt pack my bag. She barley told me that I was going to stay there a whole year. " Do you want to take this Ipod" she asked. I didn't say anything. " You know this silence treament won't do you any good" She said. "Ok grab your backpack and let's go" she whispered. I followed her to the car. We arrived at the airport and she hugged me and cried." Be good and listen. The sonner you start to talk the sonner you get to come home. I didn't want to come início and pass por the empty lot that once held my home. "Bye. amor you. You better leave the plane to Arizona is about to leave" she...

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In days gone by, there once was a land where the moss and vines grew thick, and the trees hid the forest floor from the sunlight. This was a place where gray-billowed clouds covered the sky, sucking the shadows from the Earth and spewing them back as fog and rain.

It was the perfect...

Chapter 7

*Edward’s pov*

I heard a knock from the door.
“Can I come in?” Alice asked.
I took a deep breath.
“Sure. “ I said.
Alice opened the door. Her face was expressionless. She sat beside me.
“How are you?” she asked.
“Not so good, “I whispered.
“I’m sorry.” She said, sadly.
“I told you, you don’t have to blame yourself. It’s not your fault.” I told her.
“It’s not yours, either.” She said
“Yes. it is.” I muttered.
“So are you going to tell me what happened? Or I’m going to guess?” she asked.
“Do you know Ashley Walker?” I asked her.
“Nope.”
“Well,...

hope you like it if it is looking to much like twilight sorry a twist is coming promise

his car wasnt that fancy like the cars i was used to seeing or driving but it was clean and new.and he look great driving it...i ask one of the perguntas to distract me
"so do you have any family how old you really are do you have any powers why did you chose to live in here?" ok i ask mais than one question
he smile at me "calmly i will answer all your pergunta "he smile and started
"i am 25 years live old but my growing stop i think you could say 18 or 19 years old never a way to be sure right?" he look at...