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New Moon came out the 20th. Since then, I've seen it 5 times. Each time, I noticed a few things I didn't catch the first time.

I'll start off with the things that were the same everytime I watched it.

-Taylor's Acting: I tried to give him the benefit of the doubt, but he did a terrible job. Not necessarily as Jacob, but as an actor. I may sound harsh, but he went over the topo, início in many scenes. I'm not saying Kristen or Rob's atuação was extraordinary, but Taylor's was extremely blatant and noticeable. Scene in particular:
- the movie theatre scene: "Do you want me to put you in the hospital?!" I understand Jacob's character has dramatic changes, and he feels out of control all the time, spontaneous mood swings, but this was over the top.
- but what I did like: when Jacob went to Bella's room. Taylor's atuação was still terrible. But his facial expression when he looked at the dream catcher on her headboard, it translated as sadness. I could feel his sadness that it wasn't the same as before. I thought he translated that well in that one look.

- Victoria. I felt Victoria's storyline wasn't closed in New Moon. In Twilight, at the end of the movie, we see her leaving their prom, with a rageful, plotting look. In New Moon, the last glimpse we see of Victoria is in the water. This ties in with the cliff hanger. I didn't have a problem with it, but I thought they could have done it differently. They could have stayed closer to the book. In the book, the proposal, Bella actually answered yes. In the movie, when it cuts off to before she answered, it can be interpretted as doubt and reluctance. That's not at all how it was in the book. She is shocked that he would ask that of her. She doesn't know if he's serious. I know the idea of a cliff hanger is to keep the audience guessing, but that particular cliff hanger strayed from the book. A different way to end it could have been Bella saying yes. Then the cliff hanger would be with Victoria. In the script draft, they had Victoria driving to Seattle in a taxi. There was a New Moon still with Rachelle as Victoria in a taxi driving. That means, they did shoot that scene. Chris Weitz, in a recent interview, said it would be on the dvd. Why not have it in the movie? it would have nicely tied up Victoria's whereabouts.

If Summit wouldn't allow that to be in the movie because of Rachelle not being in Eclipse, therefore refusing to have Rachelle have mais screentime, then they need to suck it up. The fãs all hate their douchebagish decision, but not doing the movie right because they don't want the fãs to be too attatched to Rachelle as Victoria is wrong. I'm impartial to the ending, but I would have ended it with Victoria going to Seattle, just like they had it in the script. Leaving the cliffhanger to Bella and Edward's engagement, Eclipse should have romance. But, with the recent news about Eclipse, it doesn't sound that way, and now, I am very nervous for the third installment.

Little things I noticed that had an big impact:

- during Bella's depression, the 4 mês spin around of her in the chair, if you notice her room, with each passing month, her room becomes mais empty. The pictures on the mural vanish.
- when Bella sets out to find their meadow, when she arrives, she falls on her knees. Like in the book, she clutches herself, trying to keep her insides from falling out.

As for the rest of the movie: I thought they stuck very close to the book. I particularly liked how they incorporated Bella's frases from the book in emails [to Alice]. Even though that [the emails] didn't happen in the book, I thought it showed how much she missed the Cullens.

The Italy scene, even though I wished it were longer, particularly Edward and Bella's reunion kiss, it was still good. I liked how they had some of the frases from Chapter 24: Truth in there.

Their post Italy talk was a little disappointing. I wished it were longer as well. Even though there were some great frases in there such as "He won't forgive me so easily. Can you? Because honestly, I don't know how to live without you." I wish the famous "Before you Bella, my life was like a moonless night..." quote was in there.

But, I was very pleased with this movie. The always shirtless wolfpack was unnecessary though. My friend asked me why they were always shirtless and she thought it was unnecessary as well. Did I like it better than Twilight? I think so. It follows closely with the book, and the look and the feel of the movie is mais cinematical and professional. The middle of the movie without Edward was slow moving to me. But, maybe that's how it's supposed to be.

Hope you liked this review. It's not as complex as I thought it would be and it didn't go into very much detail. But please comment if you'd like :)
posted by superfan43
part3 immortls find vampires.happy now old man?asked dukin.yes boy scout.said methos as he put down the cerveja bottle.dukin had not had a scoch like he usely does.what is wrong boy scout? asked methos.nothin" old man.said dunkin.okay.said methos.as methos said that he notest that dunkin was faloing a silver volvo.
dunkin were are we going?asked methos.were ever that car go's said dunkin.why?asked methos.i don't know methos now be quiet.said dunkin.fine mummbled methos.i heard that.said dunkin.as the volvo went into the woods so did dunkin.bloody scott get us out of here.said a mad methos.no i...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
TS32 choice two
Jake's POV
I went to go tell Sam everything that happen with Taylor. He told me to go down to the hospital and call if anything was to serious. I drove to the hospital because I knew it would faster than running at a human pace. I quickly found a parking place. I went to the front desk. Is there a Taylor Kullen here? I asked the front escrivaninha, mesa lady. Yes, are you family? The lady asked. No, I am her boyfriend. I said. The lady raised her eyebrow. Can you tell me who her doctor is right now? I asked. No, sorry you have to be family. The lady said. Where is the waiting? I asked. She...
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posted by RATHBONE07
Victoria?” Embelline breathed on my face, the smell of James blood intoxicating. She reached out for me and crushed me towards the floor. “Now, tell me, cause I really don’t get this. How would you feel if some downright stranger just happened to cruz your path, and then roubou your man away? Huh? Ever have that happen to you?” She yelled as she sat in topo, início of me, spilling her guts out. James was no where to be seen. After Embelline had called her little workers in (Mary and Thomas), they had both left with him. Mary’s face was devilish when she saw me, a huge grin had crossed her...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
ZC30 published
We don't want to start a fight! Carisle said. Your protecing a crimial. Aro said. Why on earth did they keep calling me a crimal? My anger was at it's highest, so I thought that it was best to fight. The fight started but no one moved, we out numbered the Violturi por 1 but they had a vampire with 3 special power that was with them. My family was really good at fightig since we had Jasper but the Volturi we trained to fight. No one on my side of the family wanted to mMs the first move, if we did we could be killed fir attept to kill the Volturi. Jane was trying her best to get...
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posted by EBRCBrit
Ok people this is my first story ever! Dont laugh please! This is new moon from bellas POV after edward leaves her.I Changed it alot.


Its been 6 months since he left me in the woods after saying the most horrible goodbye in my existence. I want to talk to somebody but i dont know if i can or if i should eventhink about it.

Its Friday morning,im laying in my cama thinking if i should even get out of cama to go to school today. I have to cause i have a test in History ive been studying for. When i was done with my chuveiro and got my keys i started my truck and drove to school trying not to see the...
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posted by anna0789
this one is short but am going to a party !!!

bella's pov
1800's

i walk into my room and change into my night vestido i was tired so i went to sleep

my mother wake me up she was saing
"o Isabella you have to get ready there is going to be a breakfast it will be like a the party you'll have fun and must important James will be there" my mother smile widely again

in all my life i had always been a people pleaser but now i speek up
"mother i don't want to marry James" i used my determine and stubburn voice

my mother look at me shook and then she look as if she hadn't heard me

"well i send the maid so...
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posted by ctaim2
From the Twilight Fanfiction Spot:


Ever since the Twilight Fanfiction Spot was created so very long ago; I have wanted to hold a Fanfiction Contest. It seems like we are all composição literária amazing stories here and I for one, would like to know who is the most well rounded author.

So I propose this contest with the following rules and expectations.

1. Author must belong to the twilight Fanfiction Spot.
2.The author shall enviar a one-shot with 500-1,500 words. título must contain the words "Fanfic competition"
3.The one shot can not be cut out of a posted story.
4. The story must be suitable for teenage...
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Alice's pov

***in the way to volterra

Noah,aro, elezar,jane, and i where on the plane to italy
Noah and me were very quiet. the volturi were quiet but jane and elezar were touching aro's hands
i wanted so much to look into my family's future to see them again but i knew i couldn't becuase aro would know.....

i hate this i thought

noah was looking at nothing he look so miserable probably the same way i was

"we have to be strong noah" i muttered and patted his shoulder

noah just nodded
"i know alice but i just hate this " he muttered

me too i thought but i didn't say anything jane was looking into...
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noah's pov

i had never feel this pain, this desperation
how could it be that i had to leave the only person i had ever amor leave her to stay with the dog jacob a person that i dispise so much

but i had to i know that i had to i only had a mês with my amor with renesmee
renesmee

i knew that the best way was to start to get away slowly but i couldn't imagine letting go of her in my last mês with her

***

jake's pov

my coração froze when nessie hug the blood sucker but i feel such joy when i realize that he was going away finally !!!!

it hurt me that nessie cried so much over this but i knew she would...
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renesmee pov

noah step out the room
my eyes follow him but jake grab my chin so i look at him his eyes were beautiful as always

"ness you know i amor you right?"

o another hard converstion ...

i nodded "yes jake and i amor you too but i also amor noah am sorry"

jake patted my hand "it's ok baby we are suppose to be together don't worry i'll be here until you think this out" he smile at me

again he sounded so sure maybe he was right

"im sorry about this jake" i said
"Stop apologizing about nothing it's ok i understand you had kind of a crush on noah he is your kind" jake said and shrugged

but this...
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posted by teamalice_0
Thanks you guys for reading!
teamalice_0
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Do you want to know how you mover thirty odd kids? Bus.
There wasn't enough room, for me to sit por myself, so I had to sit near this annoying girl.

"Mary!" At least she used my nickname. Usualy everyone says 'Mary Alice' or "Brandon."

So it was off to a better start than most.

I walked down the aisle and sat seguinte to her. SHe started talking about how exciting this was to go on a feil trip, and to a hospital, and ect.

I said things back, at the correct times. But part of me didn't want to encourage her, she was...
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posted by surfergal
When I woke up, I felt like Emmet or another Vampire was sitting on my shoulder. I can't describe the pain.When my vision was clear Alice, Carlisle, Esme and Jasper were in the room. Carlisle walked over to me and said.
Addi, how do you feel? He ask.
My shoulder its hurting really badly. I told him.
Okay. Carlisle said and then walked out of the room.
Where is Nathen? I ask.
Alice looked at me and said, He's fine.
Oh okay. I said.
I didn't know where he was but I shouldn't have to know where he was as long as he was okay. I didn't want to be so clingy, like always asking what are you doing, where...
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The seguinte morning, Maria woke early and staggered into the bathroom. She leaned heavily on the sink and peered into the mirror. Her eyes were sunken and heavy with sleep, her hair a enrolados mess atop her head. She attacked it with a brush and splashed water on her face, attempting to wake herself up fully, still shuddering from her nightmares. This proved to be an impossible task and so with a resigned sigh she left the bathroom. It didn’t matter about her hair. She’d looked worse.
She dressed quickly, flung her bag on her back and proceeded to leave. At the door she paused, chewing her lip....
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one week later and a day
It's march 31st and Vickie's birthday is April 4th and she's going to be 2 year's old!im exsited see loves sweets.i got her a bracelet that say's
"you are my world"on the coração thats silver and on a silver chain that as she gets older she can change the size of it!and i also got her a new toy.

it was sunny today so edward and alice would not be there as i drove over to the dia care i seen edward's car there alice and him where there
"hey bella"alice said as i got out of the jeep
"hey waz up?"i asked her
"since its sunny out side and we cant go to school can we watch Vickie?"alice...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
A girl came to the door that was younger than me. Hi, is this the Oneil house? Sawyer asked. Yes, can I help you? Lilly said. I'm your brother Sawyer. -He said. She stared at him and than spoke " you can't be he has been dead for a couple of years" - Lilly said. Than she scream mom, dad, Jesse yall come here. They came to the door, Lilly who are these people. Well one of them is Sawyer, I don't know the other. Lilly said. I am Zoey, Sawyer's girlfriend. I told them. They just sort of smiled. Is it really you Sawyer? We thought you went missing or got kidnapped! Mrs. Oneil said. I had to do...
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posted by bellavampire11
How did i think of this story?Well,it all started with this other story.But this story is completly different.I never knew the título of it.


One night i was walking down the side walk with my friend,Lucy.So what are you going to do tommorow after school?I don't know.Gwen, you don't know?No.Maybe you can come bowling with me and Sara.No,thanks.Why?I really don't like it.Come on.But...Please?fine.YES!Aren't you gonna ask your dad?Well,I am but i say that he is going to let me.And don't forget my mom.Haha.We started laughing.
Then, i noticed that we were in front of my house.Well,bye.bye!See...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
We asked them and they said yes! We both went to our rooms and packed, since we were trying to look like humans. Which car should we take? I asked in as if he was in the room with me. I dont know. Which one do you want to take? -Sawyer asked me. What about the motorcycle? I asked him. Nah, lets take a car. -Sawyer said. Which one. I asked him. Can we take Emmett's Jeep Wrangler?? - Sawyer asked. I hope, I amor his jeep. I told Sawyer. Don't forget pj's, Sawyer told me. Oh yeah, thanks for reminding me! We finished packing and went down stairs to say good bye to everyone. We told everyone good...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
Some one came up behind and started to put there arms around me just as I flew into the air. I flew up so fast that I landed behing him and wrapped my arms around him. I started laughing, Emmett started laughing sort of but he was saying oww. Bella was trying to sneek up on but I truned around and said "Hi Bella!" We all started laughing accept me. Emmett your sorta of squeezing to hard. Emmett was now carriering me acroos the stream. I was starting to get sick cause Emmett was squeezing me too hard. Emmeett, if you squeeze me any tighter I puke! I was so full, I over did it with the moutain...
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PART 2

"wow, well thats weird"said Tj his arm across his chest
"tell us your story alex the ill tell you ours"jaz said he had his hands around my waist
and i was leaning on him dazzed but lissten to her story
"well i remember most of my human life but it fads"she said"you and my dad dividido, dividir up when i was 11 and i stayed with him but you came and seen me often untill you started dating mark and then you seen me once a mês with him i thought it was wierd how when i seen him he allways whore sun glass and it was raining out and you stopped seeing me when i was 16 years old i never seen you again."she...
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
I always thought I would want to be a vampire, until I got the chance to become one. I was scared out of my mind at the fact that I would become a vampire in less than a 4 days! I didn't want to tell anyone but I knew they knew cause of Edward and Jasper. When ever they were trying to talk about me being a vampire, I would always change the subject or act like I needed to be some where. I hated that they knew my fear! I got up jumped in the chuveiro and got out and dressed. I didn't feel like drying my hair so I left it wet. I went down stiar and just sat on the couch. I was bored and I didn't...
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