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"EDWARD!!!" I screamed and started to run towards him but he was being pulled into the forest, so I pushed my self to run faster, as I got to the forest edge some one wrapped their arms around me, to restrict me and then they whispered into my ear....
" My cousin wouldnt want you to get hurt now would he, not after all the planning it took to get everything ready for you, and dont even try to scream for him because if you dont come quietly mais of us will go out there after him and destroy you precious Edward."
I went numb and froze, if I didnt co-operate they would kill Edward, I wouldnt let that happen, I would rather die the most horrific, painful death than have him in danger even if he did leave me, before I knew what was happening I was in the back of a car bound and gagged, tears were streaming down my face but I wouldnt sob I wouldnt let these monsters see me weak, so I sucked it in and stopped the tears. I had only just got Edward back and now we were torn apart, it felt as if I was only here in body because I knew my coração and soul is with Edward and that I would stay strong for him.
"About time she stopped crying, I dont want my car seats smelling like salt water,"
Someone from the front spoke to the person seguinte to me, I hadnt realized till then I was sitting seguinte to anybody, his face was blank as he looked at me ignoring the comment the person in the front was saying, his eyes were boring into my face and then a smile pulled the corners of his mouth up, was this bunda really smiling at me after what he and the woman in the front had done to me, he attacked Edward, and she kidnapped me and he was smiling at me. My facial features felt cold and numb, I couldnt even glare at him I had no strength, I just turned my face away and closed my eyes.
When I woke I was laying on a sofa in what seemed like a sitting room, my hands were no longer bound and I wasnt gagged, I rubbed my wrists were the rope had rubbed and looked around the room,my eyes froze on the chair in the corner, the guy from the car was sitting there staring at me.
I sat up and I felt my temper rise but I took a deep breath and said " why did you do this, why did you take me away from my family and who are you." The tears started to run down my face again, the guy sitting in the corner had got up and was now sitting on the end of the sofa still looking at me and then he said " Dont cry you will be happy soon, Im David and I want you to be comfortable here, the girl that was driving the car do you remember her, her name is lacey , she's my cousin we're both vampiros and she helped me get you," All I did was stare at him, he was the person behind all this, he was the cousin the girl was talking about, the one who wanted me. I shuddered at the thought of this vampire wanting me, was this all just a sick game he played before he killed some one, then the sentence " início grown comida " came into my head but it was then interupted por a loud bang on the door and david got up and let the person in, he was tall, blonde and beautiful but he would never be as beautiful as edward, my Edward, the blonde guy and david were both staring at me and I could here a faint humming noise, they were obviously talking about me too low for me to hear.
David took a deep, unneassary breath, came and crouched out infront of me and said " you remember when I said you will be happy soon, well that is sooner than you thought,"
Everything went black
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The pain was worse than anything I had ever thought possible, it felt as if I was being tortured slowly and painfully, I just wish death would come for me, get it over and done with. I screamed but it didnt help, no-one came for me, no one would listen to my one and only request " kill me, please, kill me!" was the only thing I screamed. I felt as if my coração and lungs were being crushed then burned then pulled apart and that was the pleasant side of it, there was no way to describe the worst side of it, this was the most horrific, painful death I said I would take for Edward to stay safe.
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I opened my eyes and everything seemed so loud,so bright and so confusing, where was I, WHO am I. I looked around the room for anything that would help me answer my questions, some one had hold of my hand and some one was stroking my face, he was, well all I can say is breathtaking and that wasnt even half way to describing it, I pulled my hand up to his face to make sure he was real, when my hand reached his face his eyes closed and he layed his face in my hand. Now was the time to ask my perguntas "Who am I, who are you." He smiled and ansered my pergunta " your Isabella, you like to be known as bella and Im david, we're both vampiros and you are my wife."
"EDWARD!!!" I screamed and started to run towards him but he was being pulled into the forest, so I pushed my self to run faster, as I got to the forest edge some one wrapped their arms around me, to restrict me and then they whispered into my ear....
" My cousin wouldnt want you to get hurt now would he, not after all the planning it took to get everything ready for you, and dont even try to scream for him because if you dont come quietly mais of us will go out there after him and destroy you precious Edward."
I went numb and froze, if I didnt co-operate they would kill Edward, I wouldnt let that happen, I would rather die the most horrific, painful death than have him in danger even if he did leave me, before I knew what was happening I was in the back of a car bound and gagged, tears were streaming down my face but I wouldnt sob I wouldnt let these monsters see me weak, so I sucked it in and stopped the tears. I had only just got Edward back and now we were torn apart, it felt as if I was only here in body because I knew my coração and soul is with Edward and that I would stay strong for him.
"About time she stopped crying, I dont want my car seats smelling like salt water,"
Someone from the front spoke to the person seguinte to me, I hadnt realized till then I was sitting seguinte to anybody, his face was blank as he looked at me ignoring the comment the person in the front was saying, his eyes were boring into my face and then a smile pulled the corners of his mouth up, was this bunda really smiling at me after what he and the woman in the front had done to me, he attacked Edward, and she kidnapped me and he was smiling at me. My facial features felt cold and numb, I couldnt even glare at him I had no strength, I just turned my face away and closed my eyes.
When I woke I was laying on a sofa in what seemed like a sitting room, my hands were no longer bound and I wasnt gagged, I rubbed my wrists were the rope had rubbed and looked around the room,my eyes froze on the chair in the corner, the guy from the car was sitting there staring at me.
I sat up and I felt my temper rise but I took a deep breath and said " why did you do this, why did you take me away from my family and who are you." The tears started to run down my face again, the guy sitting in the corner had got up and was now sitting on the end of the sofa still looking at me and then he said " Dont cry you will be happy soon, Im David and I want you to be comfortable here, the girl that was driving the car do you remember her, her name is lacey , she's my cousin we're both vampiros and she helped me get you," All I did was stare at him, he was the person behind all this, he was the cousin the girl was talking about, the one who wanted me. I shuddered at the thought of this vampire wanting me, was this all just a sick game he played before he killed some one, then the sentence " início grown comida " came into my head but it was then interupted por a loud bang on the door and david got up and let the person in, he was tall, blonde and beautiful but he would never be as beautiful as edward, my Edward, the blonde guy and david were both staring at me and I could here a faint humming noise, they were obviously talking about me too low for me to hear.
David took a deep, unneassary breath, came and crouched out infront of me and said " you remember when I said you will be happy soon, well that is sooner than you thought,"
Everything went black
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The pain was worse than anything I had ever thought possible, it felt as if I was being tortured slowly and painfully, I just wish death would come for me, get it over and done with. I screamed but it didnt help, no-one came for me, no one would listen to my one and only request " kill me, please, kill me!" was the only thing I screamed. I felt as if my coração and lungs were being crushed then burned then pulled apart and that was the pleasant side of it, there was no way to describe the worst side of it, this was the most horrific, painful death I said I would take for Edward to stay safe.
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I opened my eyes and everything seemed so loud,so bright and so confusing, where was I, WHO am I. I looked around the room for anything that would help me answer my questions, some one had hold of my hand and some one was stroking my face, he was, well all I can say is breathtaking and that wasnt even half way to describing it, I pulled my hand up to his face to make sure he was real, when my hand reached his face his eyes closed and he layed his face in my hand. Now was the time to ask my perguntas "Who am I, who are you." He smiled and ansered my pergunta " your Isabella, you like to be known as bella and Im david, we're both vampiros and you are my wife."
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-Renesmee-
I terminate the call, and scream at the topo, início of my lungs. It takes Carlisle and Rosalie thirty two segundos to reach me. The other Cullens are out hunting.
I find I can only speak in short bursts, so I focus only on Carlisle's voice, asking me what happened. I try to answer, but then, oh joy, mais pain.
* * *
I've been in labour for the past eight hours now. Imagine, just for a moment, that Rosalie is capable of PMS. And that simultaneously, someone's hidden her hair products, her iPod, her BMW, and her laptop. I was currently in a mood that would make that look like a kitten having a tantrum.
I broke Jacob's wrist por accident.
I terminate the call, and scream at the topo, início of my lungs. It takes Carlisle and Rosalie thirty two segundos to reach me. The other Cullens are out hunting.
I find I can only speak in short bursts, so I focus only on Carlisle's voice, asking me what happened. I try to answer, but then, oh joy, mais pain.
* * *
I've been in labour for the past eight hours now. Imagine, just for a moment, that Rosalie is capable of PMS. And that simultaneously, someone's hidden her hair products, her iPod, her BMW, and her laptop. I was currently in a mood that would make that look like a kitten having a tantrum.
I broke Jacob's wrist por accident.
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Bella's Pov.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme said wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing you all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking you out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper said calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will show you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme said wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing you all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking you out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper said calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will show you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.