Ok I've never written anything before, this is my first shot and if no one likes it it may be my last. I want to write between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn from Edwards perspective.
A lot of the first chapter is taken from the end of Eclipse, just to set the tone for the rest.
Chapter 1:
Remembering the happy day
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I sat on the sofá in my bedroom thinking back on the dia that Bella finally agreed to marrying me. We were in the meadow relaxing when I realized that she was just doing everything for everyone else. She wasn't thinking about herself like usual and had already agreed to let Alice plan the entire wedding with only a few limitations that Alice had to agree to. Those were that the wedding had to be planned por August 13th, that Bella had the ultimate veto on the guest list and finally that if she went overboard on anything Bella would NEVER speak to her again. Now Bella should have realized that Alice already knew all of this, and had already started the planning but she could find out all of this after the wedding.
We were lying there when I decided that it wasn't fair that she was always the one that had to give in, she had to give up most of her "normal" life to be with me and maybe I should just give in to her one....well she called it her demand. She said that the only thing that she wanted was for us to be together before she wasn't human anymore. I had argued and tried to convice her that this was all very dangerous and could end with her hurt or worse. She was explaining why she was giving everyone what they wanted before she had to break ties with them for either a long time if not forever when I stopped her with a kiss. She fought me for a segundo before giving in and began beijar me back. I could feel that she was not fully into this and pulled back far enough to look her in the eyes.
She explained that she wanted to do all of this "right" before she joined my family forever. I layed on my back stairing up at the sky trying to figure out this woman that I loved mais then anything. She was defined por what she thought was right and wrong, she knew that she wanted to be with me no matter what I was and that meant giving up a lot of what she knew. She also knew that it was wrong to cut out the family that was her world and the friends that made her who she was.
I was lost in my thoughts as the rain began to fall, I heard Bella sigh and knew that this meant it was time to leave our perfect little place and return her to her house.
I was about to get up when she said that she wanted the ring back and it was time to tell Charlie the truth. I sat there staring at her for a minuto before i realized that she was serious. I smiled and reached into my pocket pulling the glittering ring out and placing it on her finger.
I started laughing, looking around my room. I realized that in a few days time I would be married to Isabella Marie and she would be mine forever, well longer then forever but who was keeping track?
A lot of the first chapter is taken from the end of Eclipse, just to set the tone for the rest.
Chapter 1:
Remembering the happy day
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I sat on the sofá in my bedroom thinking back on the dia that Bella finally agreed to marrying me. We were in the meadow relaxing when I realized that she was just doing everything for everyone else. She wasn't thinking about herself like usual and had already agreed to let Alice plan the entire wedding with only a few limitations that Alice had to agree to. Those were that the wedding had to be planned por August 13th, that Bella had the ultimate veto on the guest list and finally that if she went overboard on anything Bella would NEVER speak to her again. Now Bella should have realized that Alice already knew all of this, and had already started the planning but she could find out all of this after the wedding.
We were lying there when I decided that it wasn't fair that she was always the one that had to give in, she had to give up most of her "normal" life to be with me and maybe I should just give in to her one....well she called it her demand. She said that the only thing that she wanted was for us to be together before she wasn't human anymore. I had argued and tried to convice her that this was all very dangerous and could end with her hurt or worse. She was explaining why she was giving everyone what they wanted before she had to break ties with them for either a long time if not forever when I stopped her with a kiss. She fought me for a segundo before giving in and began beijar me back. I could feel that she was not fully into this and pulled back far enough to look her in the eyes.
She explained that she wanted to do all of this "right" before she joined my family forever. I layed on my back stairing up at the sky trying to figure out this woman that I loved mais then anything. She was defined por what she thought was right and wrong, she knew that she wanted to be with me no matter what I was and that meant giving up a lot of what she knew. She also knew that it was wrong to cut out the family that was her world and the friends that made her who she was.
I was lost in my thoughts as the rain began to fall, I heard Bella sigh and knew that this meant it was time to leave our perfect little place and return her to her house.
I was about to get up when she said that she wanted the ring back and it was time to tell Charlie the truth. I sat there staring at her for a minuto before i realized that she was serious. I smiled and reached into my pocket pulling the glittering ring out and placing it on her finger.
I started laughing, looking around my room. I realized that in a few days time I would be married to Isabella Marie and she would be mine forever, well longer then forever but who was keeping track?
I LOVED this book series! The segundo I picked up, I was done. I just couldn't put it down! I'm sorry but Harry Potter mover aside! The way the author used such detail was amazing I loved it. I wish to one dia see the filmes but for now Ill just keep on leitura like the nerd I am. I got all my friends sucked into it and many of them very much enjoy it.
I think in the whole series, my favorito character was Nellie we didnt get much of a glimpse about her but i was fascinated por her.
I think in the whole series, my favorito character was Nellie we didnt get much of a glimpse about her but i was fascinated por her.
