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This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon:
Plummeting through the air at a million miles an hour. I was soaring, cutting my path through the low hanging clouds. I was on topo, início of the world, I was queen. I could see nothing but blue. Suddenly, the air was gone. I was covered in liquid, submerged in a pool of terror. I would have swum to the surface, I could see it, but my legs were failing me. I was going to die if I just stayed here, frozen. I started having hallucinations, seeing myself break the trance and save myself from certain death. I saw myself rip to the surface and take a deep, satisfying breath. The hallucination was making my throat burn for air, I could see myself alive, breathing in the salty sea air from above in my mind, but I could also see the bottom of the ocean from where I was in reality. I was frozen, locked in place I sank away into the deep depths of the unknown. My vision was hazed and my lungs were on fire. Out of habit I opened my mouth and took what was to be my last breath, in that dividido, dividir segundo what seemed like all the water in the ocean filled my lungs. I was coughing and spluttering, frantically trying, and failing to displace the water weighing me down. It was no use; I faded into the pitch-black background of existence. All I could think of was him, I was dying and my mind was crammed with memories of our time together. I internally cursed myself for still being unable to think of his name, even in my dying moments I could not forgive him for leaving me. I knew this would kill him, but it was not his fault, he should not be punished for my selfishness. Then it clicked, I had to live, if not for me, then for Edward. There I said it, Edward Cullen! In the dividido, dividir segundo it took me to realise what I was doing was wrong, I also realised it was too late. I was no longer breathing, I could no longer see anything and I could feel that I was no longer attached to the body I was clinging to. I was dead.
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This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon:
Plummeting through the air at a million miles an hour. I was soaring, cutting my path through the low hanging clouds. I was on topo, início of the world, I was queen. I could see nothing but blue. Suddenly, the air was gone. I was covered in liquid, submerged in a pool of terror. I would have swum to the surface, I could see it, but my legs were failing me. I was going to die if I just stayed here, frozen. I started having hallucinations, seeing myself break the trance and save myself from certain death. I saw myself rip to the surface and take a deep, satisfying breath. The hallucination was making my throat burn for air, I could see myself alive, breathing in the salty sea air from above in my mind, but I could also see the bottom of the ocean from where I was in reality. I was frozen, locked in place I sank away into the deep depths of the unknown. My vision was hazed and my lungs were on fire. Out of habit I opened my mouth and took what was to be my last breath, in that dividido, dividir segundo what seemed like all the water in the ocean filled my lungs. I was coughing and spluttering, frantically trying, and failing to displace the water weighing me down. It was no use; I faded into the pitch-black background of existence. All I could think of was him, I was dying and my mind was crammed with memories of our time together. I internally cursed myself for still being unable to think of his name, even in my dying moments I could not forgive him for leaving me. I knew this would kill him, but it was not his fault, he should not be punished for my selfishness. Then it clicked, I had to live, if not for me, then for Edward. There I said it, Edward Cullen! In the dividido, dividir segundo it took me to realise what I was doing was wrong, I also realised it was too late. I was no longer breathing, I could no longer see anything and I could feel that I was no longer attached to the body I was clinging to. I was dead.
PLEASE rate and comment. Thanks XOXO
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In my story, Edward is a smart over achiever, Emmett is in jail, and Bella is a mysterious seguinte door neighbor with some issues.
Edward has to decide if he's going to risk everything for Bella, or if he's going to continue to please everybody around him and forget about her.
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