Tiva fã Fiction Article: My TFFF Contribution for Round 2 "ETERNAL FLAME (Tony, I'm Pregnant)"

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My TFFF Contribution for Round 2 "ETERNAL FLAME (Tony, I'm Pregnant)"

posted by BarbaraCocaCola

Her hands are trembeling, her eyes are closed and she takes the deepest breath that she ever taked before. She opens her eyes. Positive.
-Damn!!! -She says.
Tony comes into the bathroom and smiles to her.
-Hey. -He says.
-Hey! -Ziva says faking a grin and hiding the pregnancy test behind her back.
-It's everything alrigth, Zee-vah?
-Yeah, it is everything fine, why are you asking that?...
-You're weird.
-No I am not.... I've got to go...-She runs to the door and he grabs her harm.
The pregnancy test falls on the floor.
-Zi, what's that?
-Nothing... I've got to go...
She runs away and lets him with his coração pounding...
-Was that a... -He asks to himself. -...No it can't be!!!
Ziva is in the elevator. God, she has to tell him... but first, she'll tell Abby. Maybe it will be easier.
-Hey, Ziva!!! -Abby says adjusting a ponytail.-Everything OK?
-No Abby!!! I can't say this of another way... so here it goes: I'm pregnant.
Abby google her big greenish eyes and says:
-What? Really... I am so happy!!!! -She holds Ziva in her harms. -Wait... Who's the father?
-It's him....
-Him? Him who?
-Shhhh... Please don't shout! Him...-She whispers.
-Oh, Tony... -Abby whispers too. -Wait TONY? OUR TONY!? TONY DINOZZO!!! -Abby screams.
-Shhh... yes that Tony, our Tony, Tony DiNozzo.
-Oh my god! How did that happen?
-Abby, I think you know how these things happen, no?!!!
-No, I mean when? Where?!!!!
-Paris...
-Paris... but you said that you take the sofá in Paris!
-Yeah, we both did...
-Ziva, why did you lie....?
-It was only a nigth, a escape of everything.... but it felt so rigth...
-I knew it, I knew it... You like him!!! It was not 'only a nigth' it was 'the nigth'. You amor him, don't you?
-No, no, no... ok, maybe... I do. God, Abby how will I tell him?
-That's easy: TONY, I'M PREGNANT!
In that precise moment Tony comes in:
-Abby, you're pregnant?
-No, no... Not me...-Abby says quickly.
-Tony, I'm pregnant. -Ziva says.
-I'm going... now... -Abby says.-You need to... do that... blah blah thing... i'm going... now... bye.
The room stays in silence.
-So... who is the father? -Tony asks, his eyes staring at her.
-Tony, you are the father.
Once again the silence rests in the room. It's a cold and sharp silence, as a knife. And it hurts, she's waiting for him to say something, and that hurts.
-Ziva, I...
-Sorry, I should know before that you would never assume this child... I should know that... -Tears start to fall, and her voice is sad and hurt.-... that...that was only a nigth...
-Ziva... That was not only a nigth, that was special, unic. And I will assume my kid, our kid. And you know why? Because I amor you, and now it is I who I am sorry, I should have told you this before. Do you amor me?
Her coração is beating so... is this real? Oh, god, she hope that is. She knows that is.
-Give me your hand. -She says, and he holds her hand that she leads in the direction of her chest.
There a música starts playing "Close your eyes, give me your hand... Do you feel my coração beating, do you understand?"
-ABBY!!!-Ziva says.
-Sorry, sorry, I'm going, now, realy...
He feels her coração beating.
-I'm tottaly exposed to you. This is hard for me. To show my feelings.
-What do you feel?
-No. What do you feel?
-I feel a heart, a very strong heart, and it's beating mais than ever... So what does it means?
Ziva approximates her lips to him. He leans and approximates his lips to her too. Nobody wants to be the last to taste it, so exactly at the same time, like they share a heart, a body and a soul their lips touch first softly and then mais strong, and mais and more.
The música starts playing again: "Is this burning? An eternal flame..."
Finnaly they stop and concerted they say:
-ABBY!!!!
-What?
-You're going to be godmother....
-YAY!!!!

lovelife93, BoNeS-h0uSe and 3 others like this

ziva_rocks So cute Barbara, i love it :)

mossheart1235 I loved this part... -ABBY!!!! -What? -You're going to be godmother.... -YAY!!!! It's so good!

NCIS_Addict_87 The ending was my favorite part... that's totally Abby to stick around. lol

Char30 Awww this is so adorable. I totally agree with you NCIS_Addict_87. Its not like abby 2 miss a good show :P Well done

BarbaraCocaCola Thanks very much girls =)

Ms_Montana Very cute!

BarbaraCocaCola Thank you Jenna i love your TFFF contribution too =)

iheartwheaterly so,cute,i havent even posted 1 yet bcause i dont understand! I know im not that bright.

Char30 you are bright iheartwheaterly!! every1 is ok. I havent posted 1 either, bt im on my way doing so.

BarbaraCocaCola You are all brigth, girls =)

BoNeS-h0uSe so cute!!!

zivaannmarie I love the story,love how Abby is played in this because I could so see Abby doing this

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Our Dirty Dancing-Chapter 3

posted by BarbaraCocaCola

Tony POV

Ziva's really beautiful tonight. Her dark brown curls are so perfect, resting on her shoulders. Her body is carved por that amazing dress. I don't think I will be able to do what Gibbs asked. Ziva is a distraction, a big one, a huge one.

Ziva POV
We're in the car. This silence is killing me.
-I hope you know how to dance salsa...-I say, trying to break the tension.
-Do you?-He asks.
-I... I think so.
-I'm a great dancer.
-Sure...-I say.
The silence is installing again.
-Finally!-I blow, seeing the club at the bottom of the street.
Tony is leaving the car and he goes toward my door. He opens...

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Our Dirty Dancing-Chapter 5

posted by BarbaraCocaCola

Ok, this is the last chapter I know it took too long.... This is a very short chapter, anyway, I hope you like it!

TONY’S POV
I hold her in my harms, I feel her coração beating and her inconsolable sob.
-Calm down…. –I say, passing my hand through her hair. –I… I shouldn’t have kissed you, I’m sorry Ziva… I didn’t want you to stay like this, ok? Stop crying…
Finally I set her free from my harms, she’s looking at me with her beautiful brown eyes tired of crying.

ABBY’S POV
-This is kind of sad…. –I say.
-Abby, I’m not sure if this will result… -McGee says.
-Shut up McGee!...

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Blank Canvas - Chapter 2 "When the World Falls Down"

posted by Lie_to_Me_123

I am absolutely confident that there are lots of medical mistakes and the like. I am also fully aware that the police would’ve taken Tony’s phone at the crime scene, but for the sake of the story, I’m asking you to overlook it.

WARNING! Characters VERY OOC.

CHAPTER TWO
When the World Falls Down

This chapter takes place a very short while after the first.

Gibbs liked to work on his barco late at night. It gave him time to reflect on the latest case, remind himself that he made a difference in the world and why he did what he did.

As the scent of sawdust filled his nostrils, he registered another...

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[Coming Home, My Love] - Chapter 4: Little Secrets

posted by ahmoniqued

A/N: Small chapter, I apologise but I promise the seguinte one is like OMG!Tiva. I used a bit of the dialouge from promos in this chapter, just to clarify things. I'm trying to make my own fic but incorporating spoilers too. Not much to say here... Awkward.
Disclaimer: I do not own NCIS.
Song: Little Secrets por Passion Pit.

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They all knew one thing, it was going to be a long day...

Who really cares if Eli was...

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Why Is It You?-Chapter 2

posted by iheartwheaterly

Here's the follow up.
DISCLAIMER-As many of you already know,my name is not Don Belisario. Therefore,I do not have any control over NCIS. I do not own the characters. I don't own Paranormal Activity either.
Ziva's POV...
I skimmed through the journal. He had quite the vocabulary.
JOURNAL
I can't help but amor her. I can't do a lot of things. Like sweep her off her feet. I'm such an idiot! Michael made her happy. I should've just let him kill me. Maybe she'd be happy.
Narrator's POV...
Ziva heard the bathroom door open. Using her ninja skills,she spread herself out on the bed.
"Hi,Tony." she said in...

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Saving Her Life, Saving His coração (Chapter 3)

posted by BarbaraCocaCola

Carry You Home-James Blunt

He is walking for over two hours.
-Damn! I'll never find her... -Tony says.
He see a man, first he looks just like another man, but there is something in his eyes that disturbs him.
Tony follows him, the man runs to a corner where there is an old swimming pool.
They are in a dark and wet room, the same dark and wet room where Ziva was. But she's not there, Tony doesn't see her. He only sees the man, with that evil eyes pointing his gun.
-Looking for someone?-The man asked.
-Where's she?!
-She? Who?
-Ziva. I know that you have her...
-Your little friend is not here.
In the...

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if you give a girl a gun

posted by NCISCHIK

If you give a girl a gun,

She'll want something to shoot.

So you'll have to get her a target.

While she's shooting, she'll remember her first mission.

She'll also start remembering her first partner,

And she'll want to find out how he's doing.

So you'll get a McProbie to hack into Mossad,

So she can find out where to send a letter.

As she's composição literária the letter, she'll remember that time she killed a man with a pen.

She will chuckle to herself, and you'll ask what's so funny.

She'll tell you it is nothing, and she will finish the letter.

You will walk down to the mail room together,

But on the way,

She will...

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Observing [[Not for TFFF b/c it's too long]]

posted by NCIS_Addict_87

Disclaimer: Unfortunately I don't own NCIS. So disclaimed.

My therapist told me that if you want to inspect something thoroughly simply hold it in your hands. It slows us down por affecting our perception. When he said it I laughed and asked him “What am I suppose to do? Grab the girl and slowly twirl her around while never releasing my grip?” Ha! And he thinks I’m the one in need of a therapist.

10:00 pm

It was funny… all the things you noticed about a person if you watched them long enough. The small things; some done out of habit and some done when they thought no one else was watching....

Agent Chronicles (Cast List!) (+) Means OC

posted by NCISJess

Author's Note: This is my first shot at publishing a work of fan-fiction on my own. I amor to write and Role Play. I hope this comes out well.

The Cast List in my fic is located here:

NOTE: I have added characters who are deceased on the show to add mais depth to the story and provide a good balance between Good/Bad Guys

DISCLAIMER: I own nothing, except My Own OC’s, which will make appearances throughout this work.

NCIS:

Leon Vance (Director, NCIS)
Ross W. Plant (Assistant Director, NCIS) +

(SAIC) L. J. Gibbs
(Sr. Agent) Anthony D. DiNozzo
(Jr. Agent) Timothy McGee
(Field Agent) Dwight J....

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black cinto, correia vs assassin chapter 3

posted by NCISCHIK

chapter 3 yay i realy like the way this is going but i really want to know what you guy want also
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tony’s pov
Loud música was blaring in the apartment when he knocked on the door when they finally opened the door the girls were mad even mais mad then they were before and when he got up the nerve to ask if he could come in he was hit on the back of the head hard
That is when they registered the ding and there furious expressions turned to livid ones
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ziva and abby ‘s pov before tony arrived
When...

sister,sister authors note ( HELP)

posted by NCISCHIK

i need help cus i have writers block and i need help chapter 2 was complet crap so some one give me ideas
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oh and i want a vote do u think i should delet the the intier 2 chapter or try to just write an fix it hope that i can fix it to your liking pleas coment and tell me how to make it beter

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WHEN PASSING NOTES GOES WRONG

posted by NCISCHIK

OK WE WERE IN CLASS AND IT WAS THE dia WE HAD TO TAKE THAT RETARDED A.C.T. TEST I DONT KNOW WHY WE HAVE TO DO THIS IN 8TH GRADE IT IS JUST STUPID BUT THE POINT IS THAT WE DID AND OUR ROOM WAS DONE AND WE WERE ALLOWED TO PASS NOTES AND THE WE GOT IN TROUBLE FOR MAKING THEM INTO PAPER BALLS AND THROWING THEM AT EACH OTHER SO THEN ONE KIDS YELLED OUT "WHEN PASSING NOTES GOES WRONG'" AND ALL I THOUGHT ABOUT WAS TIVA SO HERE IT IS BTW I GOT MY COMPUTER STUCK ON ALL CAPS SO PLEASE IGNORE IT AND IF YOU KNOW HOW TO FIX IT THEN PLEASE TELL ME (OH AND I DID TRY THE boné, cap BOTTON HEATHER SO DONT GO THERE...

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[Coming Home, My Love] - Chapter 3: Tonight

posted by ahmoniqued

A/N: I apologise for the delay between the chapters, I've had exams and alot of school stuff do. Thank you for everyone who has reviewed, added my story as an alert or favourite and read it. I apologise if I have any spelling mistakes or whatever, despite me being fairly good at English, I often miss things when I reread my work. Enjoy!
Disclaimer: I do not own NCIS.
Song: Tonight por Enrique Iglesias featuring Ludacris.
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[Coming Home, My Love] - Chapter 2: In My Veins

posted by ahmoniqued

A/N: Thank you everyone who reviewed,you all rock! Y'all definitely brought a smile to my face, the mais feedback – the fast I update. Apologies for any spelling or grammar mistakes, just eager to get this forno and done with and didn't spellcheck – will do later. Advice? Listen to song while reading, gets you into my state of mind.
Disclaimer: I do not own NCIS.
Song: In My Veins por Andrew Belle.

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[Coming Home, My Love] - Chapter 1: Innocent.

posted by ahmoniqued

A/N: This is how I expect the November Two-Parter to go in my mind, without any reference to any of the current spoilers. This is my first Tiva/NCIS fiction and my first time to write in third person, so, be kind to me – I’m new to this. I amor feedback and how to improve my writing, especially since composição literária this was kind of my preparation for my English exam. This may not be exciting but I promise to make it as better as the story goes further – it is a four/fiveshot.

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It was a cold Friday night where the moon hung in the sky which illuminated the city, accompanied por the stars and...

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From Hebrew to Italian to amor *FOR THE TFFF*

posted by mossheart1235

OKAY. HERE'S THE DEALIO.

THIS TOOK FOREVER FOR ME TO WRITE. HEBREW IS SOOOO CONFUSING. I HATE google TRANSLATE. ANYHOO, IF SOMETHING'S WRONG, CORRECT ME.

I KNOW THERE ARE NO QUOTATION MARkS. SORRY. NOT ADDING 'EM ALL IN.

ENJOY.

Tony was bored. Really, really bored. There were no cases, only mountains of paperwork. Stealing a glance hat his brilliant ninja partner, he noticed she was simply sitting there, as bored as he was, also. He grinned and shot her an IM.
שלום זיוה (Hello Ziva)
She gave him a strange look at his use of Hebrew but answered him anyway.
Cosa vuoi, Tony? (What do you want,...

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Chapter 8 - A Million Little Pieces

posted by NCIS_Addict_87

Another sleepless night, another note, another dia without Ziva. He didn’t know if he could deal with anything other than another rescue. He folded & unfolded the paper in his hands, replaying the words in his head – Flight 646 6:20 pm accompanied por the words you won’t want to miss this. He looked at the clock… only 8:45 am. What the hell was he supposed to do for the seguinte 9.5 hours?

McGee and Abby stood around the corner, out of Tony’s line of sight whispering quietly. “Timmy he doesn’t look good. He hasn’t slept, he won’t eat and he hasn’t even showered. I’m starting...

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*TFFF ENTRY!!!!!!*-"Contents, priceless"

posted by soccergal39

so I'm dead tired right now, but i have NO other time to write before the deadline, and i have no idea what I'm composição literária yet, so here goes nothing. ;P sorry if it's too ooc for some of ya, but it just worked out better.

Disclaim: if i ran ncis, tiva would have happened in season three, so i obviously don't own it. ;( plus, Michael would have had to suffer A WHOLE HECK UVULA LOT mais THAN HE DID!---sorry, I'm in a really anti-rivkin mood. ;/

******Friday morning.**********

Ziva heard the faint ping of an elevator approaching the squad room floor. she adverted her eager eyes to the fonte of the...

Tiva fã Fiction Fest, My Entry! Round 3 [I'm observing you, Tony]- "Bitter and Blue" por Tegan

posted by freshfunkpride

amargo, amarga and Blue- 1462 words

Tony had been atuação strange for the whole day.

It was almost like he didn’t want to work.

Not that that was weird for Tony, as normally he spent his hours lounging back on his escrivaninha, mesa chair and shooting spitballs at McGee. But this time…it was different. It was almost like he was late for something. He was trying to use any excuse he could think of to get out of the office. Ziva’s mind worked in overdrive.

At midday

The sun beat down on their backs as Ziva clicked the camera around the crime scene.

“DiNozzo,” barked Gibbs, “Go to your...