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This is my first attept at composição literária poesia so please tell me your honest opinion and how i can improve it.

"Life is a long journey with Infinite detours and surprises

You can not get anywhere in life por just going straight on the path.

The path of life is long and eternaly changing,

The greatest trial in life is life itself.

Don´t just mind yourself, let people in.

Being alone is being cruel to yourself.

There is nothing worse in life that being all alone."

Like i said this is my first try and i don´t even know if this can be caled a poem or just gibberish.

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The class party was just about to begin and Maria had come early to help the out with setting everything up.
Maria was 17 years old and she hated to spend mais time with most of her classmates than she had to but this time she was hoping to meet Kevin so she had decided to go anyway.
The party started and Maria stood in a corner watching the others having fun and showing affection for their partners on the dance floor and felt mais alone than usual.
Kevin arrived around 20 minutos after the party had started and he hoped that Maria were still there because she was the only reason he even bothered...
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