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Severus Snape & Original Female Characters Pergunta

Simply Speaking, I need ideas.

My Severus/OC fanfiction is kicking me in the rear because I cant write the beginning of my story. I have alot of individual "scenes" written, but its all towards the end (fourth book forward) I need ideas for the opening scene and the first three books.
Clara Vance is her name.
Former death-eater, now Hogwarts Professor, pardoned from Azkaban for her "seer" abilities(after taking half of her sentance of course)

To Mary-Sueish?
 Misguided_Angel posted over a year ago
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Severus Snape & Original Female Characters Respostas

LadyNottingham said:
From the background you give of her, she doesn't look like a mary-sue.

We would need mais specific description, physical and mental.

Beware, mary-sues are perfect. They do things perfectly and they save the dia on a daily basis. If your OC is flawed, behaves sometimes like a jerk and does not strive to save the dia and everyone around, then it cannot be a mary-sue.

She may have a particular talent/gift, no problem. Being a seer would be interesting, considering if you intent on have her as a Hogwarts teacher, in competition with Trelawney (now that would be funny !). Besides, I can't see Severus pretty much impressed por the talent/gift of "seeing" - which may promise nice banters between them two.

That's all I can say about mary-sues. That's something I'm very careful too, so I know the tune.

As for your ideas for the opening scene, I'm afraid I cannot help you. My only piece of conselhos is you should have everything planned, like in a scenario/synopsis/storyboard for a movie.

Hope the above will help. Leave a link to your story once it's posted.
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posted over a year ago 
:) I live to avoid mary sues in writing, lol. Clara and Trelawney do not get along at ALL, but Dumbledore insists that Trelawney remains the Divination teacher. Severus does get quiet annoyed when Clara becomes arrogant over her abilities, its amuzing actually.
Misguided_Angel posted over a year ago
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