My own song!!!((A place with no name))

I just wrote a song called ((A Place With No Name)).The inspiration and título came to me por MJ's own ((A place with no name)).It's a slow and dramatic song.Lyrics are under.So after leitura tell me what you think even if it's BAD!!!
(This song is dedicated to Jill_17)

I look at this house with curisity,Something is making me stop,I look at the house,trying to know this place,trying to find out what these are.
But it seems that there's nothing to help me.
I look around this place,but there is no name
It's like a white horse with no name

(2 Times)And this place has no name either

(Chorus)(4 times)A place with no name
I go inside the place,looking for clues,but i find nothing there to help me,i look around,to find something,but then i see a mirror,then i see the ((MAN IN THE MIRROR))
I then try to stop looking at the mirror,but it keeps showing me the past,but i can't take it no mais and i break it.
I go out to see the light,but then my mind starts to remember,looking at the place in wonder the place looks familiar to my mind,it looks familiar to my mind.

(Chorus)(4 Times)A Place With No Name

The place is familiar to my mind,making me to remember,but then something glows in the house,makes me go inside the house,i go in,looking around,but i find you petrified,i find you there paralyzed,you've been waiting for me all this time,waiting for me to come back,but i need you now mais than ever,i need you to come por my side,i need you back por my side,forever,i need you ((For all time)).

(Chorus)(4 Times)A Place with no name

It's like ((A horse with no name))
I need you por my side,i need you to help me,help me remember,but you seem paralyzed,i see the blood on the floor,i want to know ((Who is it))?
Who is ruining my life?Trying to eradicate me?
But it all comes back to me,i now know this whole place,But if you even don't answer me i want you to know...
((I amor you))