I Wake in Vain: Jacob Black

CHAPTER #1
I can still see the smile on that girls face when we first met. I can still remember the promise we made in fifth grade. "i promise that i'll never hurt if you'll never tell." she laughed so hard that she had to sit done."WHAT ARE YOU LAUGHING FOR! THIS IS SERIOUS! If anyone finds out i'll have to leave you!" looking me in the eye, she stoped and everything was dead quite."why would i tell ANYONE that my best friend is a werewolf! who would even bealeve me?" i was so releved that she wouldn't tell that the onlt thing I could do was smile at her. then i broke down in tears.between...

lol i wrote this in about fifteeen minutos and then I couldn't stop. I loved the way the story was flowing so I kept writting. I now have 4 chapters this being the first, though i think i could tweak it a bit to make it better. Let me know please!

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[Chapter 1]

On the southern coast of the state of Texas there is a small town that is call the “beacon” of our wonderful state. This towns name is Port Isabel, and this town, indecently is where I grew up. My name is Lily Embers, and I used to hate this town I reside in. Oh how I resented living in this corner of the United States. It was...