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These last few hours had been the worst of my life. Nothing was normal, and it wouldn’t be until this was sorted out.
Alice’s vision had horrified all of us. She had seen thousands of clips of me sitting in a dark room, screaming and withering in pain, and then she had seen me dead and tortured. She had also seen me in hospital, and in Jacobs’s arms. The meanings of this had been discussed over and over in the following hours but we had only come to one conclusion, it was Nahul who would put me in this situation.
Everyone was on full guard, all except Alice and Edward who sat on the sofa watching for mais clips that would not show me in pain. Jacob would not leave my side and I was not allowed to go anywhere. We were still leaving for Forks tomorrow because mum and dad think it will be safer for me.
Jasper was really shaken up por Alice’s vision; he loves her so much and would probably go insane if any pain came to her. Despite his protective side for Alice he has been calming me down and helping to protect me from anything that will bring me to the dark room.
“Everything’s going to be fine Nessie,” dad murmured breaking my thoughts, “we won’t let you get to the dark room. I promise” he said, sounding like he was reassuring himself mais than me.
“I know,” and I did know that, but I couldn’t help thinking. Jake leaned in then to kiss my hair, I was instantly calmed.
“Hey you know what, when all this is over we still have Kate’s wedding to look progressivo, para a frente to!” I said trying to change the subject.
“Yeah, it could be us one day,” Jacob whispered into my ear, this was obviously not meant for mum and dad’s ears.
“No, it will be us,” I whispered back, slipping under his arm and snuggling into his warm shoulder.
I thought dad would have asked about our little conversation but he now blocked out Jacobs mind out as well as the rest of the family. It was like we were the happiest family in the world in one of the worst situations; it was heaven right in the middle of hell.

Twenty four hours later and my life has changed completely.
It was about two in the afternoon when we pulled up at the big house in Forks. As much as I liked Carlisle and Esme’s massive house, I preferred mine mums and dads little cottage in the woods. I hadn’t been to freshen up since we had left Denali with the rest of the Cullen’s and Denali coven and immediately excused myself to freshen up. Nobody knew that this choice would affect all of our lives dramatically.
After I had splashed my face with cool water, I decided to redo my hair. I was just brushing it through when I saw a pair of burgundy eyes reflect in the mirror; Nahul. I opened my mouth to scream but I did not have time as Nahul grabbed my waist and pulled me through the closed window. I screamed now, not just out of fear but pain to; the glass had cut my arms, face and legs and there was a heavy flow of blood pulsing out of me. Nahul was running at least 100mph but I caught a glimpse of mum, dad and Jacob rush into the bathroom and jump through the broken window. They were coming after me; they would never reach me in time. I would never see my family again, my Jacob; I knew where my future laid, the dark room.

It had been hours since Nahul had stolen me from my bathroom. Nahul had a car waiting on the highway and he had reached it way before my family, they couldn’t save me now. We had driven for hours when Nahul suddenly stopped the car outside an abandoned warehouse. It wasn’t dark yet so I knew I still had some time before the pain started. I didn’t try to run away when the car stopped, I was feeling weak from loss of blood and I had no idea where I was. Nahul led me to a small room with no furniture and locked me in. I walked to the middle of the floor and lay down; I remained there for the seguinte five hours crying until my tears ran dry.
I was still lying on the floor when the door opened.
“Nessie...” he started, but I cut him off,
“Please, don’t call me that,” I whispered, it had been jakes name to start with; i couldn’t urso to think of him.
“Renesmee, I am so sorry I truly am. But I have to do this, it’s the only way.” He whispered in a strangled voice.
“Torturing me to death is the only way?” I demanded suddenly furious, “I was happy Nahul, you ruined that.” I whispered.
“No not you, but if you are dead then Jacob will be in the most unbearable pain. That sick dog has had it coming to him.” he spat in a disgusted tone.
“DONT YOU DARE...” but my words of rage were chocked of por his throat clamping itself around my neck as he threw me into the opposite wall. I heard several bones crack with a sickening snap, from the pain that followed I realised that it was my ribs. As I slumped down the mural my hand clutched the damage.
“Please...” I gasped, but it was too late he already had a good grip of my arm. He literally flew out of a closed window, I let out a gasp of pain as I felt my scalp rip open near the crown. When we were outside he kicked his leg around hitting me in the shoulder, sending me flying into a tree.
I could not get up this time the pain was too much.
“I am so sorry Renesmee,” Nahul cried. That’s when I saw it, he was holding a small silver blade above my heart.
Three things happened at once. There was a sudden scream from the voice I loved, the voice pushed Nahul away from my coração and the silver dagger plunged in to my stomach.
I could not repress my blood curdling scream this time.
“Jake, help me Jake!” I managed to scream before I got chocked up por a fonte of blood that spurted from my face. In a last attempt to tell him how much I amor him, I reached up to touch his face and I imagined an image of our wedding.
“No Nessie, you are not going to die,” Jacob sobbed over my chest.
Then I sunk into a painful sleep.
“I arrived at Daphne’s house in the afternoon. Lex was watching TV. Shannen was not there. Lex said she was going to see where she was. She went upstairs, while I waited. A few minutos later she and Shannen came downstairs. Shannen was atuação strange. Her hair was messy and she wore her clothes inside out. And when I told her she turned all red. I wanted to know more, but then Daphne’s husband Emmanuel came downstairs. I didn’t even know he was in the house. I thought he was at the hospital. When he left I asked Shannen what she was doing with him upstairs and she confessed that she...
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Confused and tired of all the lies and secrets Cas came back home. He entered the house and walked into the kitchen, where Zoey was still sitting at the table. Her head lay on Daphne’s book; she had fallen asleep.
Cas tapped Zoey on the shoulder and she jumped up. She saw Cas leaning over her and she sat up. She rubbed her eyes. “I fell asleep” she said difficult. She yawned and stretched her arms. “How was your day? Alex wasn’t a pain in the ass?”
Cas shook his head.
“Is something wrong? You act a little strange” Zoey noted. She yawned again. “Well, of course, you must be...
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Cas slowly opened the door of Daphne’s room. She looked his way and smiled weak. Cas took that a seguro sign and walked towards the bed.
“Are you still angry with me?” he asked careful.
Daphne shook her head. “No. Are you?”
“No” Cas answered, though that wasn’t completely true.
Daphne sat up and sighed. “Listen, Emmanuel, I’m sorry for the way I’ve been treating you”
“I know the reason and I understand” Cas replied.
“That doesn’t make it okay” Daphne said. She sighed again. “I’ve had some time to think and I’ve realized something. I don’t amor you the...
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Daphne didn’t even bother to turn off the engines. She hadn’t fastened her seatbelt, so she just had to open the door and get out. She left her door open and ran through the woods, in the direction of the lake.
Cas didn’t see her coming; he was still lying at the same spot, Alexia still lying with her head on his belly.
Zoey, however, did see her coming. She sat up. “One furious sister/wife coming our way”
Cas lifted his head and covered his eyes. “I’m not sure what you’re talking about”
“Oh, you’ll find out in one…two..three” Zoey counted as Daphne reached them.
“What...
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Daphne was lying on the bed, Mitch on topo, início of her, when they heard the door open. Daphne pushed Mitch off of her. “Quick, get under the bed”
Mitch reluctantly shoved underneath the cama while Daphne put on her clothes. She walked downstairs where Cas was waiting in the hallway.
“What were you doing?” he informed.
“Not that it’s any of your business,” Daphne started with raised eyebrows. “but I was sleeping. I was tired”
Cas nodded in understanding.
“What’s that?” Daphne asked, with a nod at the vase.
“Oh” Cas said. “Macky gave this to me as a token of his gratitude”...
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Daphne was cooking jantar and Cas was putting the table. He was doing it with so much caution it made Daphne giggle. He looked at her and frowned. “What? Am I doing it wrong?” he asked concerned.
“No, honey, but it’s called putting the table. You don’t have to put so much effort to it”
The door opened and Zoey walked down. She raised her hand. “Wait…Just hear me out” she said. “I’m sorry. I totally overreacted. I didn’t mean to be such a bitch. It’s just that I’m worried. I’m trying to look out for my little sister”
Daphne smirked. “And I amor you so much for...
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One week later

A corrosive, burning pain spread across Caroline’s face and with a shriek she woke up. She wanted to wipe the vervain of her face, but her hands were tight. She was sitting in some kind of room. There was a cama and a desk. There were curtains and a carpet. You couldn’t say Klaus was no good host. But despite the nice room, Caroline would amor to get out of it, after spending a week in it. A hand holding a napkin stretched to her face and cleaned it. “I’m sorry I had to do that” Caroline opened her eyes and looked at the girl. “Yeah, I bet you’re sorry” Caroline...
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Meg took Cas’ scarred hands in hers and looked at them closely.
“Where did you leave the bandage?” she asked.
“Bathroom” Cas mumbled numb.
Meg let go of him and climbed off the bed. She left the room and headed to the bathroom. She opened the door and held her breath.
Cas pushed himself up and stumbled out of bed. He staggered to the window and opened it. He looked down and tried to figure out the best way to fall down. He had to be dead, not crippled.
Meg cleaned up the blood and collected the bandage, before she went back to Cas’ room. She opened the door and dropped the bandage....
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Jeremy was walking outside. After his meeting with Veronica he didn’t want to go straight home. He told Alaric he’d go see Bonnie and since Ric would definitely check his alibi he was now on his way to Caroline’s.
When he was almost there he saw there was light burning upstairs. A window swung open and a guy, who Jeremy didn’t recognize, climbed over the edge and climbed downstairs using the pipes. He landed on his feet, but then lost his balance.
For a moment Jeremy considered helping the guy, but then decided to stay put. The guy scribbled up and walked away.
Jeremy pulled out his...
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The seguinte morning
Elena had just left for school and Damon was cleaning the table, when he heard strange noises.
“Show yourself” he said annoyed. What was it with people thinking they could just walk in here like they owned this place? He did. And Stefan and Elena did. Anyone else should learn how to knock.
The weird noises stopped and an old familiar appeared.
“No, not you again” Damon groaned. “Whatever you’re selling, I’m not buying it”
“I need your help” Derek said nervous.
“Why is that?” Damon said sarcastic.
Derek conjured his cell phone and showed Damon the last few...
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chapter 18 and 19 happen at the same time ;)


Jeremy opened his eyes and looked around. He was in the hospital, but everything was bright and it was extremely quiet.
“Hello, Jeremy”
Jeremy turned around and couldn’t believe what he saw. Or who he saw.
“You seem to be a little shaken. What’s wrong?”
“Am I dead again?” Jeremy asked.
“No, don’t worry. You’re unconscious. Though you almost died. Your friend Bonnie tried to kill you again”
“Do you have any idea how contradicting that sentence sounded? Friend and kill are two words that don’t fit together”
“This had to happen....
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Caroline was in her mom’s study room she used to do some paperwork, searching Amber Lindy’s file. After what Matt told her it was easy to put the pieces together. A girl she had never seen before and who could hear everything? A girl who could drink without having to show her id? It was close to obvious who this chick was, but Caroline wanted proof before she informed Damon and Elena… and Katherine.
“What are you doing here?” Caroline turned around. Her mother was in the doorway, an austerely expression on her face. “Nothing” Caroline said fast, too fast. She raced to her mom...
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Caroline was standing at the edge of the woods, waiting for Matt. They would meet each other here, to have lunch. She was about to call him, when she saw him coming her way. “Sorry I’m late” Matt apologized. “I was occupied por this annoying kid who had all sorts of perguntas about me. I didn’t even know who she was” Caroline pulled a wondering face. “What kind of questions?” she carefully asked. She motioned with her head to the woods and they started walking. Matt shrugged. “She asked if I believed in monsters. I don’t know where it was coming from, she just started talking...
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Okay shapter 10 is finally ready and chapter 11 is well on its way (I think you will like chapter 11!) so keep looking for it!
aMBER/ tWILIGHTSAUCE

Everyone was on guard; I was still recovering from Nahul’s... I couldn’t think about it brought back the unpleasant memories.
I had been right about what Jacob and dad had been doing, Nahul was dead. There was however one consisting problem, the newborns. The strangest thing was that everyone went on as normal except that they whipped around at the slightest sound that could mean an intruder. It was funny, everyone was on guard but they all acted...
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Dean opened the door of Cas and Meg’s house and whistled when he entered the fancy hallway. “Wow” he said. “You sure you don’t need an extra room mate to fill in the space?”
“We have plenty bedrooms” Cas replied. Dean turned around and raised his eyebrows. “I was joking”
“Oh” Cas said soft, looking away. He felt something soft in his back and stepped aside; Sam was passing through with his luggage.
“Where can I drop these?” he asked, lifting the bags.
“Here” Cas answered. He tried to scratch his neck again, but Dean grabbed his hand. “Aaahh!” Cas exclaimed...
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Isabel braced herself before she opened the door to the police station. She hadn’t been here since the slaughtering a few weeks ago. Her superior had sent her on a vacation.
“Isabel, what are you doing here?” a man asked, as he looked up from his desk.
“Hi, Victor” Isabel greeted the man and she smiled weak. “I’m just…picking up a few things I forgot. Personal stuff” she explained as she walked to her office.
“Why didn’t you give us a call. We would’ve sent someone” Victor commented.
“I wanted to save you the trouble” Isabel shrugged and she entered her office....
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Hullo my lovelies. My name is alexischaos2004 or Alexis. Today, I am going to review a fanfiction based off of Naruto, and it is pretty bad. I got the bits from the fanfic from another review on it. So, let's go!


"ARE YOU &&& KIDDING ME? I can't believe we && &$& $& &&&)(&# &$#&T&S two trips to the dentist!"

First, who says actual text symbols in a sentence? Nobody could actually say them. Next, please work on your grammar. I'm not really sure the world of naruto even has dentists. (It was written like this on the other review on this...
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Elena was too ashamed to leave her room and she didn’t open when someone knocked. And thus Caroline invited herself in. She found her best friend sitting in a corner, her arms thrown around her knees.
“Ah, poor thing” Caroline sighed compassionate as she walked to Elena, a box in her arms. “Damon told me what happened. You okay?”
Elena shrugged and wiped her tears. “He’s says this is normal. How would he know? He’s a dude, isn’t he?”
“But he’s right” Caroline said and she sank down seguinte to her.
“My stomach hurts” Elena sobbed. Caroline searched through her box and...
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Elena’s POV
    The night got colder as I walked further away from the Founder’s dia party. Just a few mais steps and I’ll be at the school.
    I reached the school’s front door but when I tried to open them but they wouldn’t budge. I gave up and sighed. I crossed my arm’s trying to keep warm. Looking around trying to find another way in, though the only way I knew of was the doors in the back of the school.
    I slowly walked my self to the back doors. I grabbed the frost bitten door handle and pulled it open. Once I walked...
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