HELP: wrinting a editorial for english needs to be 300-500 words i got 200 need mais ideas.

First of all, you should make it clear in the first place that you're composição literária this as an exercise of analyzing Jack Knowels' "A Separate Peace."

Secondly, I'm sorry, but I haven't read the novel, so I don't think I'll be of much help. Could you give me some background on the novel, maybe?

EDIT: I CAN help you with grammar.

"After some time início Phineas returned, shortly after he returned he was questioned about his injury with all the confusion of what happened, Phineas ran out of the building and slipped on the steps."

You're a bit redundant here. Also, this is a run-on sentence. Change some commas to periods. Consider this bit, too: "After some time início Phineas returned, shortly after he returned..." You're repeating yourself, see? I'd take out one of those clauses.

There are a few other redundancies in your text which I think you'll discover as you reread it.

As for suggestions to help make the piece meatier, you say a lot about what should be done but you don't explore how these things should be implemented. What if the school is short-staffed and can't spare teachers to watch kids at all times? What if they don't have the money to hire more? What do you mean when you say "teach students to be seguro and responsible"? seguro in what way? Will a mais structured lesson plan and less time to relax stress the students out more?

Also, you introduced the idea of blaming someone in your first paragraph, but never suggest who you, the editor, think should be blamed for the incident. You imply that it's the teachers and lack of supervision, but if this is really an editorial, your opinions should be far mais apparent and scathing. Think of yourself as a movie critic. Editorials are opinionated. They're one of the few pieces of journalism that's allowed to be opinionated. So... give your piece an opinion!