Authors Article: Revenge

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Revenge

posted by HaleyDewit

When you bleed, you can start dying
You can finally stop denying
There's no reaso for you to keep on trying
Just admit that you've been lying
You better find a place to play hide and seek
'Cause the things I'll do to you will make you weak
Remember all the things that you have said
'Cause I can't get the revenge out of my head
Soon you'll be dead

One dia I'm coming back
I'm getting ready for the attack
I'll fight you like before
You won't hurt me anymore
You better start to run and find a place
'Cause a lying cadela, puta like you has no saving grace
Remember all the things that you have done
'Cause my revenge will give you a reason to run
Soon you'll be gone

And you kept thinking I was your friend
Guess you're not the only one who can pretend
I hided all my sorrows inside
But now it's my time to fight
You better wipe that grin off your face
I don't want anymore time getting wasted
Think of all the things that I can say
'Cause my revenge is coming your way
Soon you're gonna pay

And now I'm lying in my bed
My tears are making me wet
But why would you bother
You've never care about another
You better stop whispering in my ear
The words only the devil's supposed to hear
Think of all the things that I can tell
I would finally get my revenge as well
Soon you'll be in hell

And when you're in hell
I can start living
I can finally start believing
That my life's not over yet
'Cause my revenge has lead you to your dead

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Lulu50000 This is a very interesting poem. The concept is very clear and it takes the reader into the mindset of the, character, I suppose I can call them. However, there are a few spelling mistakes and quite a few lines that done perfectly rhyme.

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I hoped it was over
I hoped no one would try to put me through that again
I suspected a lot of people
But you were not one of them
You were my only friend
When I was at the bottom of my desperate mind
And I had the climb out to see the light
and clear my mind to finally realize

That it was you all along
You’re the reason why things went wrong
I believed you saved me from drowning
But all this time you held me under water
You’re a very good manipulator
How could I ever see you as my savior
You might as well just say goodbye
‘Cause I’m not in for your lies

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