Meet Dexter...

She could feel it creeping up her ankle and legs. It was hardening, making it impossible for her to move. A laugh sounded as it went higher.
“Sorry Devin but things must be done. You must be taken out of the picture.”
“What did I do, Amber?!”
“You betrayed me! You left Sensai, you roubou BACK your Angel's light, and you risked everything for one human! That betrayal will never be forgiven!”
“Amber...I'm sorry. I never meant to hurt you but I had to save him! He was my brother!”
“You think apologizing will help?! No! It's time you payed the price!”
“What do you plan to do when...

Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. por no means am I forcing you to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless...

The blonde pulled off the silver capacete off and smoothed down her pixie-cut before approaching the door. She paused with her hand raised the keypad to type in the code when she realized the entrance was open just a crack. Aryess slid the dagger from its sheath as she entered the base cautiously.
The assassin sensed nothing out of place. The same dim fluorescent lights flickered along the ceiling of the cavernous hallways, guiding her past the same closed doors; there was the same distinct scent of metal and wet cement in the air. It was exactly as she remembered it. Though she had been away...

(well part two enjoy)

They walk in to the back of the stage and whisper in hush tones
"you know the plan so get ready" stated Alex before walking to the door heading to the stage
"well lets go brain" Ajax said jokingly before climbing onto the ceiling his black cloths blending in with the shadows
"right then pinky" Kane laughs straighting his tie and walking to cadastrar-se the other people dancing.

Hearing the signal he headed to the door....on the far end of the room so sighing he moved through the crowd
Hearing Alex cantar was strange he never thought to think of it when he accepted the mission nor...

Kay, couple OCs, sorry it took so long, I've been busy, busy, busy!


~Skylar's OC~

Piper Jacklin.
Black hair, scrawny build, brown eyes. Beaten as a kid, taken in por his his friend. Can turn invisible, phase, and likes to play soccer. Cocky at times, but usually lovable. He'll probably sit in your lap if he has the opportunity, so be ready. Is an intelligence resource to the team and several underground organizations, and often uses música to channel thoughts into code and, when he has nothing to do, songs. Sweatshirts and sagging jeans are usually what he goes around in, but his costume is a full...

The guards quickly lined up as they aimed their rifles at the intruders. Before any of them could take a shot, smoke emitted from the bullet Richi had shot, and a smokescreen hid the teens from view. They scattered, leaving the guards gagging on the foul-smelling smoke. One of the guards managed to get out, "Find- *cough* them! No *cough* prisoners!" As the smoke faded, the guards dividido, dividir into teams and separated, each eager for blood spill. The same guard spoke into their comms, "Remember your orders."

Cain spied on his 3 pursuers as he hid in the rafters above. "Where are you, you brat?" One...