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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. por no means am I forcing you to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless you truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before you start posting. It can be as little as a bio, or as big as an entire artigo series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no mais than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he or she is in, can pull out another trick out of his or her hat.
4. If you absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his or her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely aleatório and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when you have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the seguinte dia you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own or is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the recent outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, or claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If you must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, or so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if you do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot or stabbed in the heart, then pop up minutos later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull or flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to or dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to or dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created por you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing or potential character is a Mary Sue, or if you suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, you can take link. If you want, you can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case you were curious, which you probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all you want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, por no means do you have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
*Giggle* Sorry Writer, I had too!






"Okay! Places everyone, chop chop!" The Director said(this time, its a real director, not the creepy lady.) clapping her hands, holding a script in between her torso and arm.
"And in 5...4...3...2..." Lights flashed on, I was in the middle of a small kitchen, standing over a small counter, with a blender, fogo extinguisher, a bag of nails, and a stack of balonga. I had a motorcycle helmet, and on avental on.
"Herro people!" I said, waving, inside of the cycle capacete I was smiling, the glass wasnt tinted, so you could see my face.
"Okay, so you see here, a stack...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
 Before the incident
Before the incident
Had this idea in my head for quite sometime, finally finished it yesterday on my way home!

Name: Daniel "Danny or Dani" Clancy (whichever you feel like spelling!)
Alias: Spectreo (Thanks! ^.^
Age:17
Powers: -ghostly powers: flight,intangibility, and invisibility.
-gains super strength and enhanced abilities and agility his human form does not possess
-ghost sense that manifests as a blue wisp from his mouth that announces the presence of nearby ghosts.
-ghost raio, ray early on which has become one of his most frequently used powers;becoming an energy ball that can expand in size and corresponding area...
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posted by Mclovin_69
She smiled leaning in the doorway " ready to go? ", " in just a minuto " he muttered standing in the bathroom mirror playing with his hair, she smiled still letting out a giggle and walked in and stepped infront of him brushing the hair out of his face, he flicked his hair back and it fell back in his face. " Bentley! " she whined out pouting playfully, he let out a giggle as she reached for his hair again as he tried blocking her with his arms. She sighed droppping her arms and put a hand at her hip and gave him a playful look " i cant quite understand you Thompson " she said. Bentley smiled...
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posted by The_Writer
DC Comics should just cut out Cartoon Network and start their own “DC Nation” or “DC Channel”. I mean, they have so much material they could air that they could be a 24/7 TV channel and get away with it. They could have new episodes of Young Justice: Invasion, Green Lantern: The Animated Series, Beware the Batman, and Teen Titans Go! on every Saturday morning (with new shorts). They could air one DC Universe Animated Movie every night of the week. Every Wednesday night they could put out the new episode of Arqueiro while the CW does the same. Every Friday night they could air Smallville...
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 aleatório pic!
Random pic!
This artigo has been in my Drafts section for TOOOO long.
To keep note this is what I originally wanted Shadow to be when I first got introduced to this "OC club thingy". But since I thought about the character I thought it was just "Not modern".
I don't know if this should be made into a different person or what, your choice. (write in comments please!)
I just wanted you to see it 'cause from memory, it took me AGES to make her.
Note: ^ I just added that now. Down is the bio.

Name: Maria Kyle

Code Name: Black Phantom

Other Aliases: Sakura, Cheery (Only in civilian life)

Age: 13

Occupation: Ninja/Hero/Orphan...
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posted by InfinityYJ
Earlier that week everything had been perfectly normal. Fin, Delta, and Robin were relaxing on the couch, flipping through channels (Connor was not pleased that they’d fixed the static--he’d disappeared into his room some time atrás complaining about his favorito show.) M’gann was in the kitchen, Artemis was sitting on the counter. Wally was eating the burnt biscoitos, cookies that M’gann had pulled out some time ago, and Kaldur was sparring with Nathan in the main room.
Fin’s hand began to go even faster, smoke coming off the remote as she sped up to a Wally-like pace. The T.V. couldn’t keep...
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New York City
May 3, 22:09 EST

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“Are we in position, Draxx?” Revenge whispered.

“Yes. All positions secure.”

“Excellent.”

“Are you sure Grant won’t mind us doing this?” Draxx asked. “I mean this is his company.”

“What Grant doesn’t know, won’t hurt him.”

“That’s usually not true.”

Red Revenge laughed.

It took almost two hours for the assassin to appear. She slipped stealthily among the shadows.

“Target spotted.” Revenge said, picking up his gun and aiming it squarely at the feminine figure.

“On your signal.” Draxx radioed over.

Revenge aimed the sights, lined up the crosshairs, and pulled the trigger. The assassin began to scale the building.

“Now.” Revenge said, leaping from the roof of his company at the same minute.
New York City
April 24, 04:09 EST

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Sam yawned and slouched down even mais in his seat.

“Sam!” azevinho, holly exclaimed.

Sam groaned and hauled himself up-right in his chair. “How much longer?” he asked, yawning again.

“Thirty minutos ago.” azevinho, holly said, glancing at her watch. “They had a storm over Hong Kong when she took off, but I don’t see—“

“She’s fine.” Sam said, placing a hand on his girlfriend’s shoulder. “Except she’s late.”

Holly sat in silence for herself. Had Sam been awake, he would’ve noticed his girlfriend fighting an inner-battle...
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posted by Mclovin_69
He jumped a building and did a front flip landing on the ledge of the building looking out at the city. A small robotic aranha climbed into it's web and a red light on it's back blinked a couple times zooming in and focusing on him, he watched from one of the monitor screens infront of him and sat staring at him in intrest, He wanted him...... He needed him on this side....he was an interesting character that made him mais desireable to him... He acted as if he had powers though he did not have any and the skills he possessed were very powerful. How would he catch this boy though... He has...
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posted by CoaxochYJ
Cuz I really needed to write this. And we dont see Lexi in enough artigos in my opinion!



In the cave,

Lexi was chewing on her blanket, sitting on the couch. I came in zeta, she giggled and put her blanket over her head. I smiled.
"Im, gonna get you!" I told her playfully, smiling. She screamed and got off the couch, she started giggling, and she tied the blanket around her neck like a cape.
"You cant catch me!" She taunted and started running around.
"Le gasp!" I said, I ducked behind the couch, and waited for my prey to come around. She ran by, and I pounced, pulling her close and curling into...
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posted by SilverWings13
Dozens of commuters passed Declan in the busy underground station. He leaned against a wall, out of their way. None paid attention to him as they went on their ways, ignoring him as if he were invisible. He preferred it that way.
A boy played violão, guitarra a few feet off and a girl sang along. The song sounded familiar to Declan, but he was too caught up in replaying the scenes from the night before to pay enough attention to recall it.
Infiltrating the sweet, shutting off the power, attacking the men, and leaving all in five minutes. And collecting the photos, files, and all the information on himself...
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posted by InfinityYJ
Fin was not pleased. Twenty-two hours of sitting cramped in a bus with blindfolds on, suffering with Epsilon’s constant mindless chatter and Ciel’s soft humming (which started to bug her after the first 10 minutes). Then, getting out of the bus... only to get loaded into a jet which brought them right back where they started! She’d memorized how Gotham looked and she wasn’t an idiot, but she feigned curiosity.
They were brought along a dark hallway in a warehouse. Something about the place was oddly familiar, but she couldn’t place her finger on what it was, so she ignored the little...
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posted by ShadowYJ
If people are wondering why I’m making so many OC’s, its for an upcoming project...

Name: Spectrum

Secret ID: Jillian DeRocco

Age: 15

Occupation: Heroin

Appearance: An attractive girl with a pale complexion. Whitish blonde hair waist length, bluish-grayish coloured eyes, skinny and tall.

Personality: A bright and bubbly personality. Is also shy when meeting new persons.

Powers: The Spark that keeps her coração beating and alive, gives her the powers of throwing very blindly coloured light beams of energy from her hands, eyes, and fingertips. It can act has a laser, light, force field, explosives...
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posted by khanna266
Enough about Ari before I make anymore artigos with her you should know about her mom the woman who made her able to excist.

Name:Payton Niebanck(I named her after my fave karate instuctor)

age:29(soon to be 30)(way different from my instructors age)

family:Ari,Ari's sister,Dick and Bruce in a way

looks like:Pale white skin,silky black hair,Dark brown eyes,Sleek average sized body,and her hair is mostly up in a white ribbon.

cassies:Black long skirt,white buttondown shirt,and black heels

hero outfit:white long sleeve top,longred skirt,black mask,and brown sandals w/socks

alibies:Payton and The Red...
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posted by The_Writer
Symbol of the Knight-

Prologue:




"Recognized, Robin. B-02."

"How did Joker get out of Arkham?! I want to know, now!"

A few younger members of the Team stumbled back in fear as the seventeen ano old Boy-Wonder stormed into the Cave. A look of murder on his face.

"Robin, whoah! What is it?"

"Out of my way M'gann! Where's Batman?!"

"Right here." the grizzly voice came. Robin rounded on the Dark Knight. "How did he get out?!"

"That's a good question. Another good pergunta would be why are you so upset?" batman replied calmly.

"Because he almost killed Batgirl!"

Stunned silence.

"Is she--"

"She's fine, Cassie."...
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posted by Punk__Heart
The artigo to go with my updated bios

She ran down the rua as fast as she could, she tried to light her hands on fogo but the fact that she was soaking wet didn't help.
"Dammit" she swore under her breath, he was right on her tail and she couldn't defend herself. She continued running wondering how she could have gotten herself into this situation, powerless and with the team not coming any time soon.
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Sometime earlier at the cave

"So you're saying you have no idea who the white haired phsyco, who happens to be after you is?"...
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posted by MafiaYJ
((sorry it is so short))


5 years ago:
“You cannot leave us SUKA*! How dare you even suggest that to me?” Malafik shouted at Mafia. His eyes angry and it made Mafia want to fall to her knees and cower. But she would not, she had to much pride to do so. And what he did to her parents made her mais valiant. She would not back down. “I want to get out Malafik. I was born into this, it was never my choice. And you know it.” Her last words came as a hiss. Malafik narrowed his eyes at her tone, “You dare speak to me in such a way! Zmeya**!” He lifted his snake staff and swung it at her....
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posted by AislingYJ
Okay sorry about the wait. I'm finally back from camp so here it is...part 5!! It's kind of a transition part, but there is something important in it, even though it does seem weird at first...Okay I'll shut up now.
2 days later.
“And then, Chan,” Annabelle grinned. “You and Darren could have babies!” The six kids, Lily, Chandler, Annabelle, Nikki, Darren, and Terrie, were seated in the living room of the Wayne manor, talking about relationships, for some unknown reason. Darren glared at the nine-year-old. “Annabelle, don’t believe every fanfiction you read!”
“Why?” Terrie whined...
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Daily Episode

Day Forty: SEASON 1 FINALE!!!!!!


Static Shock Episode Twelve: "Tantrum"
Link: link

Summary:
A purple monstrosity goes on several rampages through the city. Thomas Kim, a student upset that he is one point under a 100, is suspected por Virgil and Richie as being the creature. Meanwhile, Virgil must deal confront the death of his mother when a special ceremony is prepared in her honor.   


IT'S THE SEASON 1 FINALE OF STATIC SHOCK!!!!!!
ONE WEEK UNTIL YJ JOINS THE COUNTDOWN!!!!!!
FIVE WEEKS UNTIL YJI PART 2!!!!!! SPAZZING HERE!!!!!!!
This is the first time Static's mom is discussed in...
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posted by SilverWings13
The pesquisa was just for the heck of it, but then the idea was stuck in my head! And I got approval from McL for this.

"Ready?"
"Give it your best shot," Bloodmist replied with a cocky tone. Even if she couldn't see it, SilverWings was aware of the smirk beneath his mask. She threw three punches, which he easily blocked. Then she launched a sidekick at him.
Bloodmist caught her ankle and tossed it up and away from him, unharmed. Silver lost her balance and landed with her hands planted beneath her. Quickly, she pushed herself up, back onto her feet.
"Is that all you got?" Bloodmist asked.
"Well, I...
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