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posted by TakTheFox
~Tip number one
When I make an rp, I usually make it long or medium so that it doesn’t look like a random/boring/quick idea, and to get rpers (along with other reasons), but sadly that comes with a problem.
A lot of times, if I make an rp (or other people I know do) It’ll say something like
“*SHRUBBERY HUNTER*”
“Your character hears a scream from a marshmellow. They ask the marshmellow what is wrong, and he says “MY SHRUBBERY IS GONE!” Do you help him find the shrubbery?”
So what one would expect is a
“No”
“Yes”
“Pie”
“TALKING MARSHMELLOW”
“NII!”
Or SOMETHING that has to do with what just happened.
But instead, some people go “Character: *walking in the woods*” or “Character: What’s wrong?” Why do they do this? Because they don’t read the whole thing. A lot of the time they say “I only read the important stuff” or “I just read the title” or “I wasn’t paying attention”. This messes up the rp, and makes it very confusing.
PLEASE PEOPLE! PLEAAAAAAAAASE read the whole thing. Sometimes I’ll be rping fifteen comments into an rp and STILL be trying to tell them “THAT’S NOT WHAT IS GOING ON! WE’RE IN A FOREST NOT AN EGGSHELL!!”

~Tip number two
IMAGINATION!
Now in my opinion it’s the responsibility of the person who MAKES the rp to come up with most of the action scenes and dialog detail, but with both that person and the person they are rping with, you should ALWAYS use your imagination in an rp.
Examples of what NOT to use
1.    *attacks* Attacks? Attacks how? There could be an enemy that is water proof, and you have ice, so if you just go *attacks* it doesn’t accomplish anything. Also it makes it hard for the person to reply with something to counter or continue with that attack. If that just kept going it would end like
*attacks*
*attacks back*
*attacks back harder*
*attacks and wins*
Which leads to gary-stu rping.
2.    *…* Now someone else mentioned the infamous triple-dot-threat, but I’ll just refresh. DO NOT DO THIS! Unless it is COMPLETELY impossible for you to make a move, like being knocked out or something, DO NOT USE THIS.
Example
Character1: We should eat pie.
Character2: …
There are three things this can imply (and maybe more)
1.    ) Your character dislikes pie.
2.    )You’re not paying attention to the rp.
3.    )You’re being lazy.
Unless you’re doing number one, you don’t really have a good reason to do that. “…” Leads to REALLY boring rps, and then people don’t like rping with you.
4.    BE DETAILED!
Being detailed makes things REALLY fun for both people. Now that doesn’t mean *shoots your character in the head, then kicks them, then eats pie, then flies off* That is gary-stu rp. What I mean is to do stuff like *Takes out gun and tries to shoot at your character* then wait… then when it’s your turn *kicks your character on the side of their leg* then wait your turn *eats pie* wait *tries to fly off*. NOTICE “TRY”. Try implies that you are NOT a gary-stu. You don’t have to say this all the time, but you should do this when fighting or stressed areas appear. When you simply say “*Shoots then kicks then eats pie and flies off*” it implies that you can do whatever you want, and we don’t want that.

~Tip number three
USE WEAK CHARACTERS OFTEN
I’ve actually found that using characters that aren’t very strong, or have no powers, to be mais fun than powerful characters. Now this doesn’t mean BORING characters, just characters that aren’t all “I AM ALLPOWERFUL FOOL!”.

~Tip number three (part two)
Let your characters get whatever-ed. That includes
1.    Controlled
2.    Hurt
3.    Slapped
4.    Hugged
5.    Flattered
6.    Tackled
7.    Shot
8.    SHRUBBERIES FORCED DOWN THEIR THROATS!
Especially with rps that involve hypnosis, controlling, or flirting, rps get REALLY fun. And you CAN have your character NOT do these things if it goes against their powers, or if it annoys you to do it too much, but it IS fun, and it makes rps really funny a lot of the time.

Hope these helped.

NOW GO RP!

EAT PIE AND PROPSER!

OWLS X{D
posted by sierradawn9
The dragon tried to pull the bars of the cage back, with no such luck. The bars were platinum, the dragons' weakness. She had received a cell phone that only gets calls, doesn't make them. The dragon screamed, shooting flames out of her mouth in the process. Whoever put her in a platinum cage had a death wish. She flapped her wings in frustration. Her bright laranja mane hung in her face. Her bright red eyes glowed in anger. The cell phone rang. She quickly dropped from the topo, início bars of the cage and swiped up the phone. She hit the 'recieve' button and held it to her ear. "Hello?"
  "Chasidy....
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posted by XxXLolaXxX
1~ The New Kid? Not Again!


When she first walked in through the two giant cream coloured door, the first thing she noticed was that the strange school had been filled with classical music. She also noticed that all the girls wore skirts or dresses, all the boys wore a tuxedo or some type of uniform. What the hell? How did she get here?

All she heard were whispers and that taunting music. Someone tapped on her sholder. Quickly she turned her head to the left. No one there. Then the right. Found her... Aya.

"Come. We must go see Miss Heather." Aya took her hand and pulled her to some strangely-shaped...
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Milla:*Throws a travesseiro at mollie*augghhh
Mollie:augghh wake up Stephanie: *Hits a mallet at her head at school*Teacher:Mollie Please Take Stephanie To The Nurse Mollie:Emerald Why Are You The Nurse Emerald:*whispers*I Heard They Get Free Lunch NOW SIT DOWN! Mollie:Sheesh you dont have to act mean Emerald:Okay SO What Happended Mollie:I Think She Hit Herself With A Mallet Emerald:Then Why The Heck Would She Hit Herself With A Mallet?Mollie:i think she wanted to go início and i need to get back to class Emerald:Okay You Back Im Calling Stephanies Mother Mollie:Okay Ill Go ill will let you handle...
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Ok ppl so now are heroes are going to find out what happen to Jason and his sister's mom n dad?!? Flashback time!
Jason:Momy what's my new sister's name?
Mom:Crystal is her name Jason and it your job to c-
Dad:Molly came here!
Molly:Yes Jack?
Jack:Icefire is here.
Jason:Who's Icefire?
Well that's all folks! I know right! I'm baesy so yeah. And I ran out of ideas! What should I do! Here's a preview:
Molly:She's you new babysiter.
Jason:But Momy-
Molly:No buts Jason!
And that's all I can think of! Help me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So yeah.
posted by MephilesTheDark
100 themes challenge 3

-Making History-


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Tearing across the desert at speed great enough to turn the sand into a storm, no-one saw the albino Hedgehog making his way to the pyramids. The exact same way that no-one would see the even mais bizarre sight- He was running right seguinte to another person. The other, unable to run as quickly as the albino, was being half-towed along, his feet skipping over the ground.

“NINGIZZZIIIIIIDDDAAAAA!” The yellow one screeched, “SLOW DOWN! OH, GOD! SLOW DOWN!”

“Aw! Don’t worry Sim! We almost there!” Ningizzida grinned at his companion, who was now...
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One dia shadow and sonic were outside playing with there dog Jet. Then a truck came and want to a house. " oi Shadow looks like we have a new neighbor." sonic said. "we
should go and check it out"Shadow said. So thay went to go
and welcom there new neighbor. " oi my name is sonic and this is -" Shadow pushes Sonic." I can say my own name!" "ok ok sorry but don't do that seguinte time!"Sonic said."So my name is Shadow and what's your name?" "Oh! My name is Amy." " feno Amy welcome to the neighborhood." Sonic said. Than out of no were Jet comes out."Is this your dog!"Amy said."Yes he is, his name is Jet."sonic said."Oh relly were did you get him?" Amy said." We found him two years atrás when he was a puppy"Sonic said.
posted by MephilesTheDark
Hello, I am talking to you! Yeah. I bet you didn't know that.

So, a lot of people message me with 'Can you draw-?'

So this is a detailed thingee of what I will draw for you people.

Why am I doing this? Because I care about you of course! Heh... Yeah, I care. I reeeeally care.

A lot of my status's say 'Friends only' to requests and shit. And then everyone swarms at me with requests because apparently, you're all my friends.

LOL NO. STOP TALKING TO ME AS IF I'M YOUR BEST FRIEND AND GTFO.

My friends are as follows;

thetacoman
IAmZim
DanniWolf09
seuris
ripperoo1
ShadowFan100
Dib_
SierraDawn9
PhoenixRoyale
Johnny_C...
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The Stus all fell over. They were dead. They disintegrated. "I guess that's how overpowered they are." Sonic said. They saw a body standing with his fist in the air. He had fedora and tie. Amy gasped and fainted. Sonic gasped and fainted, along with everyone else. Shadow, Zim, Tak, and gir were the only ones standing. "What losers. I can't believe they-ahhh." Shadow said, and fainted. "Huh?" Zim and Tak said. The body walked away. "That was strange." Zim and Tak said. "Maybe he was the one that killed them all." Zim said. "No... He's probably not a magician." Tak said. As the figure walked...
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{most persons want to commit suicide after readin this}
IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-15 DONT READ THIS
READ THE OTHER CHAPTERS FIRST

"oh my god" i said as we were all standing at the foot of the arctic mountains of the south, it was the biggest mountain range unknown to the rest off the world cuz everyone thinks its the himalayas but its not. "well lets get going peeps we dont got all dia and plus we dont the winter sisters seeing us and we dont got all dia the temp drops to -59o here and we didnt bring heaters" sanybelle says and starts jumping up the mountain "i wonder y the sisters cant see...
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{even ask Shadowfanlover7 this fanfic is terrible}
IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-7 DONT READ THIS

The soldiers were coming over the path and WE WERE STANDING THERE LIKE STATUES!!! whisper had tears in her eyes. i was holding on to dare, and misery was standing extemely close to tuesday which i found quite odd but also not that much after seeing them hug earler. flana and coral were balling their eyes out. truth looked mais scared that ever...or just her eyes did. arc tried to stay strong but ended up crying on dahsers shoulder. we were in trouble and we knew it. but rane seemed so calm, like...
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{its a fanfic based on the weather it must b terrible}
IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-7 DONT READ THIS

The soldiers were coming over the path and WE WERE STANDING THERE LIKE STATUES!!! whisper had tears in her eyes. i was holding on to dare, and misery was standing extemely close to tuesday which i found quite odd but also not that much after seeing them hug earler. flana and coral were balling their eyes out. truth looked mais scared that ever...or just her eyes did. arc tried to stay strong but ended up crying on dahsers shoulder. we were in trouble and we knew it. but rane seemed so calm, like...
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{dont waste your electricity bill on this stuff it sucks}
IF U HAVE NOT READ CHAPTER 1-6 DONT READ THIS

when i woke up from miserys chaos over load, we were on topo, início of the mountain. everyone else was unconsious but me. but on the edge of the cliff stood a strange hedgehog with green fur. she turned around and said "hiya" i lay there in the gravel dirt of the mountain staring at this green hedgehog i never saw bfor. "u stare at me like im forign beast. no i no beast. im Windy the hedgehog. u persons seemed in trouble cuz men in shiney suits were coming into yer cave and u all were sleeping from...
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Three more!
--------------------------------------------------That night, they couldn't sleep in peace. They slept underground and they knew they were being hunted down por the whole Mobius. "Wake up." Tak said, always being the first one up. They were all awake and were digging back up to the ground. They didn't crawl out. They stopped to look, and saw a giant mob hunting them down. "I think it would be easier if we just used Chaos Control." Tak said. They all shouted "Chaos Control" and they were back at the base. It was flooded. "Hey! You roubou the emeralds!" A red echidna said. "Chaos Control!"...
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Bluebell woke up in a cage, hanging por the roof, but very close to the floor, about 1 inch off the floor. She sat up and looked around. H-Hello..? She said, very frightened. W-where am I...?

Then, after a while, she saw the tall man again, but with a fat body, and a mustash. She looked at him. Great, someone else that's fat.. She thought to herself. Hello there, little girl. The man said, with an evil smirk. H-Hello, mister... w-where am I...? She replied back to him. Don't worry, girl, I'll only need to do a few things on you Bluebell was silent for a moment, she looked around the place...
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Bluebell kept running till she was out of the dark forest, she looked around, panting like crazy.
Alright, so where about is this place... She spoke to herself, she always spoke to herself so she could think better, she never knew how or why, she just knew. She walked a little further, then came to a busy looking town, or, that's what she thought it was, but it was a city. She always had those 2 confused.

Her coração was racing as she slowly came into the city, she didn't know what was going to happen when she passed the first person. She thought back at the camp, THAT was a lot of people, but...
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Demons,Soldiers,Helicopters,Jets,Tanks,A burning City,A Lightning Demon,And Typhoon's Group.

That's just GRRREEEAATTT isn't it?

Typhoon,Slahsing Demons left from right,Running across the Hellish City,Then he jumped and kicked down another Demon and slashed it's head off.

Haze,Being the Swords man he is,Cut down every last Demon he saw,He chopped off the legs of the one in front of him,and Stabbed his face.

Nocturn,With his Shotgun,Walked down the street,And continued to shoot down every Demon,He put a shot gun up to a Demon's face and shot it clean off.

Mother,Being the most Ferocious,Ripping apart...
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posted by thetacoman
Siria left her Brother's castelo confused.
The Old One was determined to stop his son.Siria never told anyone, but she often served as the Old One's secret keeper.
'I never allowed your Mother to hear the true Prophecy. She shall urso 5 children, but only you shall be her true children.'
Siria took that as one of his delusional rants until now, when her Mother claimed to be with a 5th child.
Should she now have a new sibiling? And if so, how should not be her true sibiling?
We shall see, she thought, in a few months if we are just a group of insane Few.
After all, shouldn't the queen of Nature and...
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posted by thetacoman
The King toiled in his bed.
He wouldn't fall asleep again.
Not after that awful night-terror.......

There was a man in a dark purple capa with his presumed son strode around a carcass-strewn battlefeild.
"Daddy?" the son asked.
"Why are we here? And where's Mommy?"
The father continued to walk, examining the dead. "What wonderful new soldiers," he mumbled to himself, completeley ingnoring his son.
"Daddy?" the son pulled on his father's cloak.
The man had grew tired of answering to people a long time ago.
He pulled a faca from a man newley killed.
"Here," he shoved the faca into his son's face.
"Lick...
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posted by thetacoman
It seemed a coincidence. The pair slowly made its way to the city center. But the elements seemed to unite against them.
Wind howled its complaint.
Water smacked against their bodies.
Fire snuffed itsself out.
Nature hurled dirt to nuvem their vision.
Light attempted to blind them.
But all was in vain.
Darkness formed a barrier around them.
And they would need it for this ceremony.
The child got out the ancient tome, as the Gaurdian prepared the altar.
"When, Gaurdian?" asked the child.
"Very soon...." he answered.
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From the pit in which he resided, Seth felt the energy. It called to him like a fresh...
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A/N: This is the usual typical story of one being ‘mind-swapped’. Typical, repetitive, boring, overused… Yeah, I know. Whatever. I’m trying to put my own spin on it anyway… Well, allow me to clear some stuff up before we begin.

This is based around ME, Mephisto N, and my Invader Zim FC, Mef. The ‘me’ of this is older- I’d say I’m around, what, 25 in this? Mef’d be 120 years, or around 15. In this, I’ve accomplished my dream of going big with ‘The Three Legged Chook,’ which is a key part in the story.

I can kinda imagine myself to end up and described here. I don’t...
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