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posted by TakTheFox
~Tip number one
When I make an rp, I usually make it long or medium so that it doesn’t look like a random/boring/quick idea, and to get rpers (along with other reasons), but sadly that comes with a problem.
A lot of times, if I make an rp (or other people I know do) It’ll say something like
“*SHRUBBERY HUNTER*”
“Your character hears a scream from a marshmellow. They ask the marshmellow what is wrong, and he says “MY SHRUBBERY IS GONE!” Do you help him find the shrubbery?”
So what one would expect is a
“No”
“Yes”
“Pie”
“TALKING MARSHMELLOW”
“NII!”
Or SOMETHING that has to do with what just happened.
But instead, some people go “Character: *walking in the woods*” or “Character: What’s wrong?” Why do they do this? Because they don’t read the whole thing. A lot of the time they say “I only read the important stuff” or “I just read the title” or “I wasn’t paying attention”. This messes up the rp, and makes it very confusing.
PLEASE PEOPLE! PLEAAAAAAAAASE read the whole thing. Sometimes I’ll be rping fifteen comments into an rp and STILL be trying to tell them “THAT’S NOT WHAT IS GOING ON! WE’RE IN A FOREST NOT AN EGGSHELL!!”

~Tip number two
IMAGINATION!
Now in my opinion it’s the responsibility of the person who MAKES the rp to come up with most of the action scenes and dialog detail, but with both that person and the person they are rping with, you should ALWAYS use your imagination in an rp.
Examples of what NOT to use
1.    *attacks* Attacks? Attacks how? There could be an enemy that is water proof, and you have ice, so if you just go *attacks* it doesn’t accomplish anything. Also it makes it hard for the person to reply with something to counter or continue with that attack. If that just kept going it would end like
*attacks*
*attacks back*
*attacks back harder*
*attacks and wins*
Which leads to gary-stu rping.
2.    *…* Now someone else mentioned the infamous triple-dot-threat, but I’ll just refresh. DO NOT DO THIS! Unless it is COMPLETELY impossible for you to make a move, like being knocked out or something, DO NOT USE THIS.
Example
Character1: We should eat pie.
Character2: …
There are three things this can imply (and maybe more)
1.    ) Your character dislikes pie.
2.    )You’re not paying attention to the rp.
3.    )You’re being lazy.
Unless you’re doing number one, you don’t really have a good reason to do that. “…” Leads to REALLY boring rps, and then people don’t like rping with you.
4.    BE DETAILED!
Being detailed makes things REALLY fun for both people. Now that doesn’t mean *shoots your character in the head, then kicks them, then eats pie, then flies off* That is gary-stu rp. What I mean is to do stuff like *Takes out gun and tries to shoot at your character* then wait… then when it’s your turn *kicks your character on the side of their leg* then wait your turn *eats pie* wait *tries to fly off*. NOTICE “TRY”. Try implies that you are NOT a gary-stu. You don’t have to say this all the time, but you should do this when fighting or stressed areas appear. When you simply say “*Shoots then kicks then eats pie and flies off*” it implies that you can do whatever you want, and we don’t want that.

~Tip number three
USE WEAK CHARACTERS OFTEN
I’ve actually found that using characters that aren’t very strong, or have no powers, to be mais fun than powerful characters. Now this doesn’t mean BORING characters, just characters that aren’t all “I AM ALLPOWERFUL FOOL!”.

~Tip number three (part two)
Let your characters get whatever-ed. That includes
1.    Controlled
2.    Hurt
3.    Slapped
4.    Hugged
5.    Flattered
6.    Tackled
7.    Shot
8.    SHRUBBERIES FORCED DOWN THEIR THROATS!
Especially with rps that involve hypnosis, controlling, or flirting, rps get REALLY fun. And you CAN have your character NOT do these things if it goes against their powers, or if it annoys you to do it too much, but it IS fun, and it makes rps really funny a lot of the time.

Hope these helped.

NOW GO RP!

EAT PIE AND PROPSER!

OWLS X{D
Ok Storm,the uh heroine(?) of this story has entered the forest of. Strangeness(not real name just called that),let's see who she meets XD

(I'll message if a oc of your is used)

I walk through the woods cantar fogo por 2NE1 thinking about choclate cake when I see a person playing the bag pipes.Even to me,storm,that is strange so i walk over even though I have no idea if the person is dangerous or not"hello strange person with bagpipes!"

"well hello"says then blows the bag pipes,stomps their feet to the beat of poker face por lady gaga on the pipes.

"uh why you here!?"I say cause now I think of...
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posted by Scorch-Werehog
Name: Scorch the Werehog
Gender: Male
Powers: Strong, and fire
Likes: Hunting, fighting, video games
Dislikes: lobo vein plant, demons, too many mais to list...
Appearance: Red with laranja fur, black claws (nails), sharp teeth, and has brown eyes. His (My) shoes are green, purple, and blue.
Short Bio: When Scorch was born, he was actually born a hedgehog. But a evil echidna didn't like that Scorch even existed. So, he put a curse on Scorch that made him a werehog dia and night. Scorch's parents weren't too thrilled about that but tried to raise him as a normal kid. (you can see how I turned out)
In what just seems like seconds: Slick makes it to his position; por the mural of the vault, outside of the security's lines. "*through the walkie-talkie, secretly unsecured por Yogi so the enemy could not listen in on their conversations, stats that he is in position* Ready"
At the same time as Slick, Dash reaches his destination. He should've gotton there sooner but he had to evade some security. But soon he made it to the walls of the secondary vault; just in case they mover it to this vault. "Made it"
"Get out here and die like a man!" the General yelled in direction to Rioul.
"this is bad. Way...
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Why the fuck does everyone find it necessary to copy Mephiles? you unoriginal bastards, there are plenty mais ways to be able to show your amor for those people, you know. Unless you chose me as one of those people, then you should write twenty-four.

I'm not going to name people, but I could see, like six of these artigos on the club, and it is annoying. So, Instead of doing one of people I love, I shall do one on people I hate. Enjoy.

1. Appreciate you are number one. Gary-stu spammer.

2. ur rely opistvie

3.(I'm sorry, but your username sounds like something I would call a homosexual who enjoys...
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ONE hora LATER... Chris ran away, trying to find his house, forgetting that he didn't have one. He stopped, then realized that he didn't have a house. He had to think quick. He started to dig a hole with his hands. Luckily, the ground was soft so he got pretty far por about two minutes. He crawled down the hole and rolled up in a ball. MEANWHILE, AT A CRAZY GREEN HEDGEHOG WITH MAGENTA STRIPES AND A MAGENTA jaqueta PLOTTING THE DESTRUCTION OF MOBIUS... A green hedgehog was watching TV. "What?!" He shouted. "What happened?" A red raposa with four tails said. On the screen, they showed all of the zones,...
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Prolouge
Many years ago,far away in o espaço where darkness awakens and waits for destruction. In a distant planet, where darkness rises, lives a ruler, whos plan of ruling the whole galaxy, but then thats when his planet which was called planet X was about to get detsroyed por the Sonic and his friends.The Sonic team had found out out if this palnet por an alien who managed to escape the destruction f his palnet and told everyone what the ruler of palnet X has done. So the Sonic team decided to get rid of the invaders, so Tails builds a brand new battle ship and they knew they needed alot of power...
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{warning it get really boring and stupid around here most persons stop leitura at chapter 6}
PLZ READ CHAPTER 1-19 BEFORE leitura This

i awoke in a pitch black room. the walls and floor of the room seemed to made of clouds. dark stormy looking clouds "so u have awakened Princess Wednesday Jaxee Shocker III the Hedgehog" said a voice from the far end of the room. the mysterious person knew my name my FULL name! then the mysterious person emerged from the darkness. it was a cloaked figure with yellow eyes that u could see from under the capa and i could tell it was a female. "i am the fate of...
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?????? HERP DERP
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~"Time: 11:10. Status: Waiting for 11:11. Name:-" Zim was cut off por Tak. "Shut up. You sound like Dib. I didn't like Dib. You didn't like Dib."Tak said. "OHMIGODITS1:11!" gir shouted. I wish for... WORLD DOMINATION!!!!" Zim said in his head. He waited... and waited... nothing. 11:12... nothing. "NOOOOOOOOO!!!!! NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!" Zim shouted and fell to his knees. "Dramatic much?" Tak said. "Ugh. I'm gonna watch this movie." Zim said. "A Nightmare in esmeralda colina Zone? Scary. I'll watch with you." Tak said....
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posted by Yosuki-Hiroshi
Allignment:Opponent to Ally
Power:Ice,Snow,Wind and Hail
Weapons Used:Bows and Arrows,Claw,Sword,Rapier,Blade,Mace,Ankh,Piece,Naginata and Scythe.
Battle Difficulty:Extremely Very Hard.
Battle Describes:Tricky,Fast,Strength,Powerful and Very,Very hard to trap and/or to defeat.
Power get on Frozen - Uma Aventura Congelante Hydro(Ice,Snow and Hail.) and Cold North(Wind).
Utilities:Condense,Frost,Cold Snap.
Pet:Ice Dragon,Hail Dragon and Snow Dragon.
Pet Description:Tricky,Fast,Powerful,Very hard to kill,large,hard,sharp.
Boreas Attack:Snow Coat,Avalances,ColdCombat,Tornado,IceScissor.Iceberg Shower,Ice Missle,Snow Punch,Hailstorm,Blizzard,Glacier,Tundra,Hail Slash,Cold Swing,IcebergMeteor.Create Snow Monsters.Gel Surf.Comet Ball.Comet Ball Duo.Infinity Comet,Super Counter Attack(Counters Range and Melee atacks)Death Sythe.
Tell me if you see MS qualities in this new character.
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a fantasia world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.

DID taco MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!
Demons,Soldiers,Helicopters,Jets,Tanks,A burning City,A Lightning Demon,And Typhoon's Group.

That's just GRRREEEAATTT isn't it?

Typhoon,Slahsing Demons left from right,Running across the Hellish City,Then he jumped and kicked down another Demon and slashed it's head off.

Haze,Being the Swords man he is,Cut down every last Demon he saw,He chopped off the legs of the one in front of him,and Stabbed his face.

Nocturn,With his Shotgun,Walked down the street,And continued to shoot down every Demon,He put a shot gun up to a Demon's face and shot it clean off.

Mother,Being the most Ferocious,Ripping apart...
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Damayz,Sitting at his trono like he was a king,Requested EVEZ to come in his trono room,Where Xiz and Dezray sat beside him.

"EVEZ,I request that you go attack a city,And bring me mais souls,I thirst for them." He said to EVEZ.

"But sir,I'm just a lonely Demon,I can't just ATTACK a city BLINDLEY without any help." EVEZ Responded.

"That's Why I'm bringing an Army of Demons to help you,Fool,Now go,And bring me mais souls." He said.

EVEZ nodded and ran off.

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"Dang,I can't Believe that Caboose is gone." Typhoon sighed.

"Well,At least he's in android...
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“We all know about those days when criminals break lose at the most unexpected times. We all know about those crazy, insane, sometimes even psychotic people, that have the tendency to kill off many innocent beings for no apparent reason. But this woman…is no different.”
    “She started off her childhood at a rough pace. She was a murderous demon, trapped in the soul of an innocent woman of age nineteen. Many spirits beyond the grave never understood the reason why they were killed off. She caused others to commit suicide, or die of a broken heart.”
    “She...
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It was winter.

I was walking through thick, clear white snow. It was chilly, of course. I knew about Kalla Potter.

She was a nice girl. Never talked back. Made peoples' hearts skip a beat. She always brightened up their days like borboletas and rainbows filling the clear blue sky.

But of course--Then came the death of Kalla. People felt...lost. Depressed. Not their true self without her.

All thanks to Zak. That sniveling little director. Sending out all his assassins on missions that don't even make any sense.

Kalla's death was a complete joke. When I heard the news, I thought it was a joke. But...
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Ifuen leaned over the table, keeping himself up por propping his arms on the table. He stared at the holoscreen, formulating a secret plan in his head. Now usually, he wasn’t this quiet; whenever he had some life-threatening, daring plan of action, he would usually require a little help to think it up, but now he couldn’t trust anyone. He wanted to trust his best friend Jace, who had been at his side since they were little. He wanted to trust Anya, who he had always loved from the bottom of his heart. But letting someone in on the plan would be dangerous; not to him, but to everyone else....
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added by sara_tarek
added by CosmoLuvsTails
added by MephilesTheDark
Source: Me.
oi peeps! This is Mephisto N here, with a super-special-awesome guidline as to how to make a decent, likeable Sonic fancharacter!

Let's start off simply with the prime examples of a Mary-Sue in the Sonic fandom. This is what you DON'T want.

-Is paired with a canon character. Especially not Shadow.

BIG NO-NO. Very few people can get away with this, especially with Shadow. This is usually a 'I luff Shadow he give me 3 babies!!' cry.

-Is related to an official character.

SONIC DOESN'T NEED 300 LONG-LOST SIBLINGS.

-Is faster than Sonic.

It is made a dear point that Sonic is the fastest Hedgehog around...
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added by silverstream101
Source: me & SaraTheDog