inuyasha Article: Inuyasha's mistake

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posted by jacqulene11

Inuyasha:Kagome did you bring me some of your
ninga food?
Kagome:Why is that all you want. I've been gone for 2 months for my sick grandpaw and all you can think about is food.
Inuyasha:Does it matter it was time for your old geezer grandpaw to die.
Kagome:Inuyasha, how dare you. So what if your stronger than me or a half demon, but I can still hurt you. That means SSSSSIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!
Inuyasha:Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!
Kagome:Inuyasha you have no soul what so ever, you and that claypot Kikyo are perfect for eachother.
Inuyasha.Fine because I amor her and you are just a pathetic mortal who goes for whimps like Hojo and Kouga. And if you call Kikyo a claypot ever again (low growls) I will kill you.
Just as inuyasha said that he turned wide eyed at what he just said.
Kagome:I-Inu-Inuyasha(studdered Kagome) I HATE YOU!!!
Kagome ran into the woods behind her and was vanished por shadows. inuyasha started to well up at the end of his eyes.
Inuyasha:What did I just do? Thought Inuyasha.
Is this the end of inuyasha and Kagome stories? Will it be about Kagome and someone else or inuyasha and Kikyo? Read on to my sequel called The fixed mistake.

medouri, KidMckandy and 2 others like this

sesshyswind I didn't like it, Inuyasha is clueless but not that clueless, he does have some sence of control, anyway Kagome wouldn't be allowed to take two months off to care for a sick grandfather, the search for the jewel shards is far more important, or risk letting Naraku find them all before at least managing to gather a few, a week's absence is an exceptional push in the affair of things. And I don't think that Kagome would call Kikyo a claypot either, you are just being mean and abusive towards the characters by only directing the readers attention to their worst aspects, mainly in Inuyasha.

jacqulene11 Are you freaking insane a sick relative is way more important than a jewl.

k4yasha dont read story about kikyo and inuyasha.. i hate this ..

misty13569 To late just did and loved it!

KidMckandy Y'all people crazy. A sick relative is important and so is the jewl so Inuyasha could have checked on her at least to make sure her grandpa was okay and he was being selfish and caring about food and what he said was down right painful so Inuyasha was being a jerk and that's that!!!!!!!!! Seshyswind how can you be so crued!!!!!

jacqulene11 Hey don't hate my story it's just something I wrote I don't hate any of the characters besides evil ones and I'm not against Kikiyo and it is JUST A STORY so don't blame me for YOU READING something YOU DIDN'T LIKE! Ok so the ones who are not liking this story go read something else if you don't like mine ok i'm not reasponsible for you sesshyswind or you k4yasha so GROW UP and be respectable to someone's story that's a true reader!