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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. por no means am I forcing you to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless you truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before you start posting. It can be as little as a bio, or as big as an entire artigo series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no mais than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he or she is in, can pull out another trick out of his or her hat.
4. If you absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his or her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely aleatório and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when you have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the seguinte dia you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own or is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the recent outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, or claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If you must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, or so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if you do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot or stabbed in the heart, then pop up minutos later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull or flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to or dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to or dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created por you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing or potential character is a Mary Sue, or if you suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, you can take link. If you want, you can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case you were curious, which you probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all you want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, por no means do you have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by MafiaYJ
Notes: Guess its time to get on the bandwagon isn't it? and even though my account is Mafia- i totally favor Babs- so-
/im thinking pre-esther btw

LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Babylon
Reason or meaning of name: I'm named after the biblical city of sin and false religioin due to my red eyes (the nuns really hated me-)
Eye Color: Red, I can change them to brown
Hair Style/Color: Black as night, very long, usually down
Height: 5'8.
Clothing Style: I like really professional clothes, well now adays, before it used to be really elaborate stuff that showed off my wealth, cause back then it was the only...
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posted by MafiaYJ
Notes: WELP its been a million years hasn't it? I started composição literária again for my blog and i ended up with this from a prompt and since it's about Babs, Nes, and Esther..

Use these three things somewhere in your story: An angel. A sword. A daycare.

“You have her lunch box?” Babylon said quickly, jumping about in the cozinha as she tossed bag after bag into Nereus’ arms. Nereus stood there, little Esther giggling in his arms, he smiled fondly at the brunette woman, fussing over things.
“Babs, calm down, we’ll be fine, you’ll be gone for two days. It’s nothing we can’t handle,” Nereus...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Seraph grabbed onto Shane's wrist and strapped the watch on before speaking. "The encontro, data is already set. The moment you get there, your guardian will immediately enroll you in their same school, and you will live with her." Shane's eyes went out of focus as Seraph continued to talk, his gaze focused on the ground. esmeralda eyes were torn away only when their was a fist in his hair, jerking his head upwards. "Listen to me, you shit. I don't care what you feel about the situation, you are going to do this. I don't care how you get close, or how you get on that team. Do it." He hissed and hit a button...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Jessie Nasrin Bennett
Jessie Nasrin Bennett
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Jessie Nasrin Bennett
Reason or meaning of name:Jessie- God beholds; Nasrin- wild rose; Bennett- blessed
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: Gold Wheat
Height: 5'4
Clothing Style: I dress for the weather
Best Physical Feature: Um...I've been told my smile is great

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Um...dark
Your Guilty Pleasure: flor Crowns
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Being Shoved Away
Your Ambition for the Future: To live?

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Depends on the night before
What You Think About the Most: The herbs I need daily
What You Think About Before...
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posted by SilverWings13
Note: Happens simultaneously as link


Death in the Garden

The bullets ricocheted off the purple shield of pulsing power. They bounce off the stone walkway and into the green grama of the perennial garden. Stray projectiles ate away at the stone three-tier fonte and east courtyard wall. The rat-tat-tat of the machine gun should have been heard por any passing outside the walls of the garden, but the whole city seemed to be hidden away from the deafening noise. There was a click-click. A sudden silence. The young man crouched behind the shield lunged for the quickest route to safety, the round...
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posted by Robin_Love
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Becca. No need for more.
Reason or meaning of name: It's just a short version of my real name..
Eye Color: Brown. Like...dark almost black..
Hair Style/Color: Black. (Like her soul!) Hey!
Height: Um I'm about 5'9”
Clothing Style: Depends on the mood
Best Physical Feature: My what? (Her legs. She has dancer legs)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Thunderstorms
Your Guilty Pleasure: Beating up the bad guys
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Idiots. (Uhh...)
Your Ambition for the Future: To live?

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Why am I up?
What You Think About the Most:...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Shane Parker
Reason or meaning of name: I'm not sure, honestly.
Eye Color: My mother used to tell me that they were an esmeralda green.
Hair Style/Color: It's blonde, and kind of shaggy.
Height: I'm right under 6'0, like 5'10, 5'11
Clothing Style: I like to be comfortable, in summer i'm always in cargo shorts and nike tênis shoes
Best Physical Feature: I- (His eyes)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Uncertainty.
Your Guilty Pleasure: Oh god, you really don't wanna know.
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: When people chew obnoxiously, I swear I wanna soco Wally for it.
Your Ambition...
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posted by SilverWings13
 Octavia Rurik
Octavia Rurik
Name: Octavia Rurik
Age: approx 227; looks 22
Species: warlock (born of warlock parents)
Specialties: healing and defense spiritual magic
Weapon: none
Likes: swimming, singing, lanterns
Dislikes: disease, tyranny, spiders

Name: Dmitri Rurik
Age: approx 180; looks 18
Species: warlock (born of warlock parents)
Specialties: defense and elemental spiritual magic
Weapon: a long black scepter topped por a glowing crystal orb (colors shifts with type of magic used)
Likes: birds, playing the violin, headphones
Dislikes: a lot of things

Background: Dmitri and Octavia are the youngest children of Wilhelm Magnus and...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Sorry this took so long to get out, college is really kicking my behind with all the work I have to do. And I didn't realize how short it was...


"How do we know it's not a clone?" Tobias asked, tapping his fingers on his chin. "The scars on him are accurate, bruising around his face from the last fight.. but.." Chris muttered and walked, peeling off the monitors and lifted Fang up into a sitting position, his eyes going wide. "Wing has been replaced with an artificial one.." He said and slowly unfurled the metal wing, looking over it before letting out a low whistle. "Man, that's some fine work.."...
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It helps if you sing along: link

Lexi, and her struggles of being a teenage girl, and her developing powers...

If you weren't born with it
You can buy a couple ornaments


Lexi stared into the full-length mirror, hands resting por her sides before she placed them on her hips, letting out an annoyed sigh, catching Jamie’s attention as he passed por her room. The teen backtracked and slid into his sister’s room. “What’s up?” He asked and sat at the edge of the bed, sipping from a straw. “Can’t decide.. Help meeeee!” Lexi whined out and pulled her uniform’s saia down, staring at her...
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posted by KatRox1
((BEFORE YOU READ THIS: Be warned that it is a lot of stuff in a little article. I found it while leitura through some old documents, and realized I haven't really posted anything on Bella before she joins The Team and becomes Mercy. So if you want mais on her pre-superhero life, let me know! KISSES!))

October 31st, 2011
Gotham, USA

There isn't much I remember about the accident. It all happened so quickly.
There was blood- a lot of blood. It was on the windows and the airbags and our clothes.
And there was screaming, but it wasn't coming from my mouth, or Gavin's. Gavin wasn't even moving. He just...
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So, like I was gonna wait to make this anoother time but, idk when I'll be able to get on again so yeah. Here's some mais boring shit. :p

"Hurry! I saw them go this way."Jake yells and they continue running.
"Not on my watch." Alek pops up out of nowhere.
"We don't have time for you." Khanna bubbles him and they keep running.
"Hey let me out of here!" he bangs on the bubble but, it won't pop.
"Bubbles, never knew you had that power."Jake says as they turn down the seguinte hall.
"Yeah, that's cuz I don't usually use it." she says and they find Daniel.
"Hey guys. They have cookies." he says as he munches...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Ebonique
Ebonique
I apologize in advance for the background. Consider it a rough sketch of sorts till the holidays are over. I'll get it edited and cleaned up after then. Again, sorry.

Name: Ebonique
Alias: Eboni
Powers: agility, speed, manipulates light, night vision, voice that cause sleep.
Occupation: Not disclosed
Weakness/Limits: Not disclosed
History: Ebonique was an ancient Egyptian priestess of the Egyptian goddess Bastet. Her village was raided, and the people slaughtered. She was taken and sold as a slave. After years of torture and hard work, she was bought por another man. Her work was not as hard and...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Trystan kept a close tab on the fox, watching as people began to clear the streets. Within a few minutos he was greeted por Alex and Chris. The oldest of the three looked up at the sky and then back at Scotty who had stopped in his tracks. The raposa hybrid turned his head and stared down an alleyway, tilting his head back as bullets went whizzing por his head. Alex's eyes widened and she ran forward, standing in front of Scotty, holding his her hands straight out and then jerking them back, pulling armas from the perpetrators' hands. Chris and Trystan ran forward, looking down the alleyway. "That's...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Scott "Scotty" Clancy.
Reason or meaning of name: I actually have no flipping idea, to be honest.
Eye Color: Blue!
Hair Style/Color: It's white and...... jagged?
Height: Uhhhhhhh, 6 foot something, not that much shorter than Fang. (You're 6'1, Scotty.) Oh! Okay, I'm 6'1 apparently.
Clothing Style: I really like flannels.
Best Physical Feature: My unusual hair.

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Losing people I'm close to.
Your Guilty Pleasure: ...I eat icing from a tube....
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: PEOPLE WHO TAKING FOREVER IN LINE LIKE jesus CHRIST PEOPLE.
Your Ambition...
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posted by Eclipse-YJ
FAMILY

-Mother (name): Diana Rouge
-Relationship with her: None, dead after Phoebes birth

-Father (name): marreco, drake Rouge
-Relationship with him: None, dead after Phoebes birth

-Siblings: 1
-Birth order: Elizabeth
-Relationship with each: None, dead after Phoebes birth
-Children of Siblings: None
-Extended family (aunts, uncles, cousins, etc.): All dead
-Close to family? No, all are dead

CHILDREN

-Does character have child(red)? Yes
-How many? 1, Jayson
-Are all children with the same partner? Yes, Dylan

-Character's most favorito memory of his/her child(ren)? First time she showed Jayson her piano
-Character's...
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posted by Eclipse-YJ
I found this large chart about character descriptions and I have been wanted to fill it out for ages. This is gonna end up in 5 parts I think but if you want to dive in deep into your co's the chart is here: link

-Character's Full Name: Pandora Elizabeth Diana Ruby Rouge-Spade
-Reason or meaning of name: Pandora is her birth name but she changed it after discovering how her family died Elizabeth was her sister, Diana was her mother and Ruby was her birth middle name.

-Nickname: Phoebe
-Reason for nickname: Zero was her first friend, he told her of the rarity of her name so she became worried about...
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posted by SilverWings13
This is based off an RP with RL's characters, but I just wanted to write soemthing on these two characters that get too oftenly drawn and too rarely written. Just a heads up: there's a tiiiiny mention of rape, but nothing explicit or graphic.

The cold wind whistled through the Frozen - Uma Aventura Congelante forest. Most every other sound was muffled por the snow: weak branches falling, Valente rodents hopping over the white blanket. Bigger animais were prowling the forest as well. The Siberian could hear it all, accustomed to the world of white like the one where he had been born.
After an hora of sprinting, the man gave...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
BC I NEEDED SOMEWHERE TO PUT THIS AND THE seguinte CHAPTER IS NOT A GOOD PLACE OKAY

Scotty sighed as he stared at the computer, leaning back in the hotel chair. "This is definitely the building.. The tracker attached to the furgão, van says so, and from our scouting.. there are way too many guards to even attempt this.. " He dropped his head into his hands, letting out a frustrated groan. Chris leaned over his shoulder, tapping his chin. "Cadaver has been working with the Injustice League for a while, we've been keeping tabs on him for months.. maybe he thinks that this is the best place to keep him in...
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posted by Mclovin_69
 I drew him because I felt like it
I drew him because I felt like it
Name: Michael Fanton
Alias: None
Occupation: Guitarist and Singer, Civilian
Age: 19
Personality: Michael is a very positive person, who often weighs others problems on him as support than solve his own. It's very unlikely to catch him in a bad mood.
Appearance: jade green eyes, he is a natural brunette but for the moment has his hair dyed black. he has freckles and barely leaves anywhere without wearing some type of hat ( usually snapbacks). He is 6'0 ft tall.
Relationships: He is a good friend and bandmate to Bentley.
History:Michael grew up having an ordinary life,minus his parents divorcing and his mother taking custody of him at the age of 8.
Notes:He met Bentley at a bar, and since have known each other for almost a year. It wasn't until recently him and Bentley got in touch again.
 I found a cute lil pic of him when he was little with his dad
I found a cute lil pic of him when he was little with his dad