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its my first story post and no ones read it yet im desperate please
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Work in progress. Constructive criticism and suggestions welcome. This is the story of Zero, a humanoid bio-weapon who escaped from what would have become a life of slavery, and joined normal society.
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if you want me to continue comment saying so if not then also comment if you want to know thesong there.
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It's a story I wrote, and I need constructive critism.
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fictional.this is a story told por shinigami.she's main lead in my mangá Geetto.if you don't like don't rant about it.just give helpful criticism.
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enviado
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r260897
over a year ago
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link oi guys, I wrote this for a contest & I would amor your opinion on it! I do suggest leitura it from the link (above); because it's mais properly presented :)
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